Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

私共のショップの商品、サービスを向上させるためにアンケートをお願いします。
回答いただいた方には、当ショップのアイテムを全て5％オフでご購入いただけるクーポンコードを差し上げます。
回答はこのメールへの返信でお願いします。

当ショップを利用して良かった点・悪かった点を教えて下さい。
今回ご購入いただいた商品はどのような検索ワードで見つけましたか。
当ショップでどのような商品があれば良いと思いますか。
今最も興味のある物・事を教えてください。
良く買い物をするサイトのURLを教えて下さい。

English

Please take this questionnaire to improve our shop items and service.
We will offer 5% OFF coupon code for customers who answer to this questionnaire.
Please answer by replying to this email message.

Please tell us about good/ bad experience you had by visiting our shop.
What kind of keywords did you use to find the item(s) you've purchased this time?
What kind of items do you want to see at our shop in future?
What kind of things/ things to do are you interested in the most these days?
Please list shop(s) URL(s) where you shop frequently.

Reviews ( 1 )

michael_1987 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 06 Feb 2017 at 15:34

original
Please take this questionnaire to improve our shop items and service.
We will offer 5% OFF coupon code for customers who answer to this questionnaire.
Please answer by replying to this email message.

Please tell us about good/ bad experience you had by visiting our shop.
What kind of keywords did you use to find the item(s) you've purchased this time?
What kind of items do you want to see at our shop in future?
What kind of things/ things to do are you interested in the most these days?
Please list shop(s) URL(s) where you shop frequently.

corrected
Please take this questionnaire to improve our shop items and services.
We will offer 5% OFF coupon code for customers who answer this questionnaire.
Please answer by replying to this email message.

Please tell us about good/ bad experiences you had by visiting our shop.
What kind of keywords did you use to find the item(s) you've purchased this time?
What kind of items do you want to see at our shop in the future?
What kind of things are you interested in the most these days?
Please list shop(s) URL(s) where you shop frequently.

[kimie]

Thank you Michael-san.
I can learn a lot from your native translations. Thank you for taking your time to review.
I just started (about 3 days ago) but will try my best to improve my translation.