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Japanese

こんにちは、日本在住〇〇と申します。
今回とても欲しかった商品を予約させていただき興奮しています。
12月の発売を今から楽しみにしています。

貴店にいくつか質問があります。
この商品は当方の兄弟や友人も熱望しています。
当方がまとめて複数台予約購入することはできないのでしょうか。
もちろんキャンセルはしないことをお約束いたします。
また同一住所で別人が注文した場合、同梱発送していただくことは可能でしょうか。

お手数ですがご検討いただければ幸いです。
お返事をお待ちしております。

English

Hello, I come from Japan and my name is 〇〇.
I am so glad to reserve the item which I want very much.
I can't wait for the launch day on December.

I have some questions.
My friends and brothers also like this item very much so, if it's possible to reserve more same items?
So if it's possible send more same items together to the same address?

Sorry to bother you.
I am waiting for your reply.

Reviews ( 1 )

bluejeans71 rated this translation result as ★★ 25 Feb 2017 at 15:20

original
Hello, I come from Japan and my name is 〇〇.
I am so glad to reserve the item which I want very much.
I can't wait for the launch day on December.

I have some questions.
My friends and brothers also like this item very much so, if it's possible to reserve more same items?
So if it's possible send more same items together to the same address?

Sorry to bother you.
I am waiting for your reply.

corrected
Hello, I come from Japan and my name is 〇〇.
I am so glad to reserve the item which I want very much.
I can't wait for the launch day in December.

I have some questions.
My friends and brothers also like this item very much, so is it possible for me to reserve more of the same item? Of course I promise you that I will not cancel any order of mine.
And is it possible that another person can have the item sent to the same address?

Sorry to bother you.
I am waiting for your reply.

There is an omission of the following sentence: "もちろんキャンセルはしないことをお約束いたします".