Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 52 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 17 Dec 2014 at 13:44
Japanese
私が担当する分のベンチャー企業に対して、採点を行いましたのでファイルを添付致します。
ご確認の程宜しくお願い致します。
English
I've finished evaluating the venture companies I'm in charge of. I'm attaching a file for your review.
Thank you.
Reviews ( 1 )
chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★
18 Dec 2014 at 14:40
original
I've finished evaluating the venture companies I'm in charge of. I'm attaching a file for your review.
Thank you.
corrected
I've finished evaluating the venture companies that I'm in charge of. I'm attaching a file for your review (perusal).
Thank you.
reviewもよいと思いますが、Perusalのほうが日本語でいう「ご確認のほど」の箇所に合っているのではないかと思います。