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Japanese

グレーの在庫がなくなってしまったので、もし可能でしたら、9月8日にオーダーしたグレーだけ早めに発送することはできませんか？

日本は、だいぶ涼しくなってきて、売れる量が増えてきました。
これからあなたへの注文も少しずつ増えていくと思います。
よろしくお願いします。

English

Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

Reviews ( 2 )

kanon84 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 15 Sep 2014 at 19:36

original
Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

corrected
Stock of gray one ran out, so would it be possible to dispatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

GJ

[ponie]

sucks.

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★★ 20 Sep 2014 at 16:16

original
Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

corrected
Stock of gray one ran out, so would it be possible to dispatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting much cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

文章全体は丁寧に訳されていると思います。せっかくなので「大分」も訳してあげるといいと思います。