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Japanese

ご連絡ありがとうございます。

私はあなたからのメールの内容を理解しましたが、
私は、色がオールピンクの商品をひとつ、どうしても購入したい。

なぜならば、オールピンクの商品は、私の娘へのプレゼントだからです。
娘のがっかりした姿を私は見たくない。

オールピンクの商品がひとつあれば、私は満足します。
私はあなたからオールピンクの商品を購入することはできないのでしょうか？

English

The you for your e-mail.
I understand what you said in your e-mail, but I'd do anything to buy a all-pink product because I am going to give it to my daughter as a present.

I don't want to see her disapponted.

I am happy if I can have a all-pink product.
Isn't it possible for me to buy all-pink product from you?

Reviews ( 2 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 03 Sep 2013 at 14:44

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[anpanchi18]

Thank you !

elephantrans rated this translation result as ★★★ 03 Sep 2013 at 15:03

original
The you for your e-mail.
I understand what you said in your e-mail, but I'd do anything to buy a all-pink product because I am going to give it to my daughter as a present.

I don't want to see her disapponted.

I am happy if I can have a all-pink product.
Isn't it possible for me to buy all-pink product from you?

corrected
Thank (The) you for your e-mail.
I understand what you said in your e-mail, but I'd do anything to buy a all-pink product because I am going to give it to my daughter as a present.

I don't want to see her (disapponted) disappointed.

I am happy if I can have an (a) all-pink product.
Isn't it possible for me to buy the all-pink product from you?