Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 25 May 2010 at 12:26
Japanese
男が現れた瞬間、工場の空気が一瞬止まった。数年前に失踪した男とそっくりだったからだ
English
The moment the man appeared, everything in the factory stopped moving for a moment. The man looked entirely like the one that had disappeared several years ago.
Reviews ( 1 )
elephantrans rated this translation result as ★★★★
02 Nov 2013 at 17:58
original
The moment the man appeared, everything in the factory stopped moving for a moment. The man looked entirely like the one that had disappeared several years ago.
corrected
The moment a man appeared, everything in the factory stopped moving for a moment. The man looked entirely like the one that had disappeared several years before.
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