お世話になります。
メールありがとう。
先ほど、前払い金の50％の振込手続きを完了しました。
添付書類が明細となります。
商品製作をお願いします。
素敵な商品が届くのを、楽しみにお待ちしております。
宜しくお願いいたします。
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Translation / English
- Posted at 27 Dec 2012 at 10:24
(Thank you for your continued support.)
Thank you for your email.
I just completed the money transfer for the 50% up-front payment.
The attached is a copy of the detailed statement for the money transfer.
Please start making the product.
I am looking forward to receiving the wonderful product.
Best regards,
Thank you for your email.
I just completed the money transfer for the 50% up-front payment.
The attached is a copy of the detailed statement for the money transfer.
Please start making the product.
I am looking forward to receiving the wonderful product.
Best regards,
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Translation / English
- Posted at 27 Dec 2012 at 10:17
Dear XXXX
Thank you for your mail.
I’ve just finished transferring the advanced money for 50% of the whole payment.
Attached is the detail.
Could you start creating the products?
I’m looking forward to receiving the wonderful products.
Best regards,
XXXX
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Thank you for your mail.
I’ve just finished transferring the advanced money for 50% of the whole payment.
Attached is the detail.
Could you start creating the products?
I’m looking forward to receiving the wonderful products.
Best regards,
XXXX
「お世話になります。」の部分ですが、英文メールではあまり言いません。一応、文頭に（）で訳文を入れていますが、「お世話になっています」という表現はない方が自然です。