いつもお世話になっております。
先日のメールオーダーに、柔軟迅速に対応して頂き心より感謝申し上げます。
ところで商品の御社からの発送はいつごろになりそうでしょうか。
急かすつもりはまったくありません。
ただ現在の状況を教えて頂きたいと思っています。
また〇〇社の新製品〇〇に関しまして。
今御社に注文すると発送はおおよそいつごろになりますでしょうか。
お忙しいところ申し訳ありませんが、以上2点につきましてお手透きにお返事を頂きたくお願い致します。
今後ともよろしくお付き合いをお願い致します。
And I would like to thank you very sincerely for being so flexible and prompt with the mail order the other day.
By the way, how long roughly do you think it will be before the goods are despatched from your company?
I don't mean to rush you or anything.
I'd just like to know how things are moving along.
There's something I'd like ask about [社名]'s [製品名] product.
If I order it from your company now, how long will take for you to send them out?
Sorry to be bothering you with these requests, but if you could find the time to let me know
about these two matters, I'd be really grateful.
It really is a pleasure doing business with you, and I look forward to doing more business in the future.
I appreciate your prompt order the other day.
By the way, when can you ship the product to us?
We're not asking you to rush this order.
We would just like to know the status.
Also, regarding 〇〇 of 〇〇 Company, when can you ship a product if we order it now?
We look forward to your reply regarding the above two questions at your earliest convenience.
Thank you again for your continuos business.
「先日のメールオーダーに、柔軟迅速に対応して頂き心より感謝申し上げます」の部分ですが、I appreciate your prompt order the other day.を以下に訂正させてください。
We appreciate your prompt response regarding our mail order the other day. よろしくお願いいたします。
大変的確な訳をありがとうございました。また機会があればよろしくお願い致します。
毎度有り難うございます。