[Translation from Japanese to English ] Your shop has a wide range of the variety of my favorite brands, so it id ver...

Original text

あなたのお店は私の好きなブランドの品揃えが豊富で、
とても素敵です！

私は○○（ブランド）や●●（ブランド）の商品がとても好きで、
色々なショップで購入しています。
（インスタグラムにもアップしているので、よかったら見てください。）

あなたのお店の以下の商品を購入したいのですが、割引などは可能ですか？

今後もあなたのお店でたくさん買い物をしたいのですが、
VIPディスカウントを受ける条件があれば教えてください。

私は実際に△△、××、■■というお店でもVIP待遇を受けています。

Translation / English

Your shop has a wide range of the variety of my favorite brands, so it id very nice!

As I really like ○○ (brand) and ●● (brand) very much, I buy item at various shops.
(I have uploaded a lot of pictures to Instagram. Please watch them if you like.)

I would like to buy following items in your shop, but would to be possible for you to discount them?

As I would like to make purchase a lot at your shop in the future, please tell me the condition for me to receive VIP discount from you.

I actually am receiving the VIP treatment from various shops, including △△, ×× and ■■.

Translation / English

Your shop has lots of the complete set of my favorite brand!

I like the articles ○○ (brand) and ●● (brand) very much,
and I'm buying it from a lot of stores.
(I am also uploading it to Instagram so take a look if you like )

I would like to purchase the following articles from your shop but is a discount possible?

I'd like to buy lots from your store from now on,
if there is anything like a VIP discount that I can receive, please let me know.

I am currently having a VIP treatment in the stores: △△, ××, ■■