ありがとう。すばらしいスケッチですね。すごく好きです!
幾つかお願いしたいことが有ります。
- 肌色をもう少し明るくしてください。
日本人からみると、その肌色だと東南アジアの人のように見えます。
- もう少し全体的に明るくクリアにしてください。(例えば背景を白かライトグレーで、服の色を紺か青)
全体的に暗く背景と髪のコントラストが小さいので、画像が小さい場合に見づらいです。
とりあえずこのスケッチはとても気に入っています!
出来上がったらすべてのバージョンのスケッチを頂くことはできますか?
Rating
60
Native
Translation / English
- Posted at 05 Aug 2014 at 11:45
Thank you. It is a wonderful sketch. I really love it!
I have small another request.
- Could you lighten the skin color a little please.
From a Japanese perspective, the skin color is a little like East Asian coloring.
- Please improve the overall clarity and lighting (for eg. a background of light grey to compliment the skin tones like blue)
The contrast in the hair and background is not well defined, if it was a small image it would be hard to distinguish.
For the moment I love this sketch!
When it is complete can I get all the version of it please?
I have small another request.
- Could you lighten the skin color a little please.
From a Japanese perspective, the skin color is a little like East Asian coloring.
- Please improve the overall clarity and lighting (for eg. a background of light grey to compliment the skin tones like blue)
The contrast in the hair and background is not well defined, if it was a small image it would be hard to distinguish.
For the moment I love this sketch!
When it is complete can I get all the version of it please?
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Rating
52
Translation / English
- Posted at 05 Aug 2014 at 11:44
Thanks. It's a great sketch! I love it!
I have a few things I would like to ask of you.
- Please make the skin color a little brighter.
As a Japanese person, I see that skin color is Southeast Asian.
- Please make everything a bit more brighter and clearer. (For example make the background white or light gray, and the clothes navy blue).
It's all a bit dark and there isn't much contrast between the background and the hair, so when it's small it'll be hard to see.
But in any event, I love this sketch!
Can you give me all of the versions of the sketches you did when you are done?
I have a few things I would like to ask of you.
- Please make the skin color a little brighter.
As a Japanese person, I see that skin color is Southeast Asian.
- Please make everything a bit more brighter and clearer. (For example make the background white or light gray, and the clothes navy blue).
It's all a bit dark and there isn't much contrast between the background and the hair, so when it's small it'll be hard to see.
But in any event, I love this sketch!
Can you give me all of the versions of the sketches you did when you are done?
