アジェンダを送付してくれて有難う。
アジェンダについて2点修正があります。
１つ目は、会社名はABC Companyではなく、XYZ Corporationとなります。
２つ目は、コーポレートロゴですが添付ファイルのものに差替えてください。
上記2点の修正内容は、Mikeにも伝えてもらえると助かります。
評価
52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/23 17:32:28に投稿されました
Thank you for sending the agenda.
There are two points in the agenda I would like to see improved.
The first one is about the name of the company, this should be turned from ABC Company into XYZ Corporation.
The second one is about the corporate logo, which I would like you to change into the file I attached to the e-mail.
It would really help me out if you could also report the above two improvement points to Mikel.
There are two points in the agenda I would like to see improved.
The first one is about the name of the company, this should be turned from ABC Company into XYZ Corporation.
The second one is about the corporate logo, which I would like you to change into the file I attached to the e-mail.
It would really help me out if you could also report the above two improvement points to Mikel.
評価
60
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/23 17:22:58に投稿されました
Thank you for sending the agenda.
There are two points on this agenda that need correction.
The first being the company name is not ABC Company it is XYZ Corporation.
The second being the substitution of the corporate logo with the file I have attached.
If you could pass on these two points to Mike for correction it would be appreciated.
There are two points on this agenda that need correction.
The first being the company name is not ABC Company it is XYZ Corporation.
The second being the substitution of the corporate logo with the file I have attached.
If you could pass on these two points to Mike for correction it would be appreciated.
評価
49
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/23 17:29:56に投稿されました
Thanks for sending the agenda.
There are two points corrected for the agenda.
The first, company name is XYZ Corporation, instead of ABC Company.
The second is a corporate logo, could you replace a thing of the attached file.
Corrections listed the two points above, it will be helping to also convey to Mike.
There are two points corrected for the agenda.
The first, company name is XYZ Corporation, instead of ABC Company.
The second is a corporate logo, could you replace a thing of the attached file.
Corrections listed the two points above, it will be helping to also convey to Mike.
