yyuko — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
1. We let you know an English manual wasn't attached to the product you had ordered other day, but what do you think? We haven't got your reply, so we've contacted you again.

If you cancel the order, please go through the process according to the following instructions.

How to cancel the order:

2. If we haven't got a reply from you, we will ship the product.
Please understand this.

3. You haven't canceled the order, so we've shipped the product.

修正後
1. We informed you that an English manual did not accompany the product you had ordered the other day, and we would like to know what you think. We haven't received your reply, so we are contacting you again.

If you would like to cancel the order, please go through the process according to the following instructions.

How to cancel the order:

2. If we do not receive a reply from you, we will ship the product.
We appreciate your understanding.

3. You haven't canceled the order, so we've shipped the product.

元の翻訳
Excuse me, can I receive the code such as serial code that identify an item.

修正後
Excuse me, can I receive a code such as serial code that identifies an item.

元の翻訳
I was asked whether the product was made in China or not from my customer, so I'd like to know where it is from.
If you'd know that, please tell me.

修正後
A customer asked whether the product was made in China or not, so I'd like to know where it is from.
If you'd know that, please advise me.