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元の翻訳
We do believe you.
However, we have not done any business yet. Therefore we think it's important to take necessary steps.

We think that eBay fee is a burden to you as well.
Therefore we'd like to solve this by bearing 5% of eBay fee at our side for this first transaction. Please create a page for 1 carton (50 pieces) with 5% surchage which is $2362.5 and let us know URL.
This is faster, more accurate and economical solution than sending samples.

修正後
We do believe you.
However, we have not done any business yet. Therefore, we think it's important to take necessary steps.

We think that eBay fee is a burden to you as well.
Therefore, we would like to solve this by bearing 5% of eBay fee at our side for this first transaction. Please create a page for 1 carton (50 pieces) with 5% surcharge which is $2362.5 and let us know the URL.
This is faster, more accurate and more economical to solve rather than sending samples.

元の翻訳
Currently, I am having ●●-san to proceed with the visa application prior to 11/1.
As a premise, AAAAA-BBBB agreement is required, so it would be helpful if you could proceed with that task.

修正後
Currently, I am having ●●-san to proceed to the visa application prior to 11/1.
As a premise, the AAAAA-BBBB contract is required, so it would be helpful if you could promote the task.

元の翻訳
I have asked Mr/Ms OO to make some progress on the visa before the 1st November.
In the previous conditions AA-BB contract was necessary so, if possible if you could assist with the progress of that it would be of great assistance.

修正後
I have asked Mr/Ms OO to make some progress on the visa application before the 1st of November.
In the precondition, the AAAA-BBBB contract was necessary. So if possible, it would be helpful if you could assist with the progress of that.

元の翻訳
We will make sure that a wall calendar is wrapped in a plastic bag and a paper tube.
In this way, you don't need to worry about the calendar being destroyed. You will receive it in a perfect condition.
If you choose SAL, the shipping cost is free.
(Please note that there are areas where you can't choose SAL. Please contact us for details.)
Please order now!

修正後
!We will make sure that a wall calendar is wrapped in a plastic bag and a paper tube.
In this way, you don't need to worry about the calendar being destroyed. You will receive it in a perfect condition.
If you choose SAL, the shipping cost is free.
(Please note that there are areas where you can't choose SAL. Please contact us for details.)
Please order now!