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元の翻訳
I am very sorry for my late reply, this time.
I was taking care of my child, who has hospitalised, and for that I could not check my emails.

I shipped the product today.

I apologise for keeping you waiting.
If you can understand my situation, I will really appreciate.

But eBay is my way of living, and receiving a negative review due to my child's sickness is really unfortunate.

Naturally the fault is on my side, but would you consider changing your review, please?

Thank you.

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I am very sorry for my late reply, this time.
I was taking care of my child, who has hospitalised, and for that I could not check my emails.

I shipped the product today.

I apologise for keeping you waiting.
If you can understand my situation, I will really appreciate.

But eBay is my way of living, and receiving a negative feedback due to my child's sickness is really unfortunate.

Naturally the fault is on my side, but would you consider changing your feedback, please?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry for the late reply to you this time.
I was with my child who had to hospitalized recently and I was not able to confirm your inquiry.

The goods was already shipped to you.

Sorry to keep you waiting.
I would be grateful if you could understand the situation.

As my child is ill, the negative review on the eBay is a serious damage for me as we are living on eBay as our only source for our income.

Of course It is me that should be blamed but would it be possible to change your reivew?

I would like to ask you the above sincerely.

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I am very sorry for the late reply to you this time.
I was with my child who had to be hospitalized recently and I was not able to confirm your inquiry.

The goods were shipped to you today.

Sorry to keep you waiting.
I would be grateful if you could understand the situation.

As my child is ill, the negative feedback on the eBay is a serious damage for me as we are living on eBay as our only source for our income.

Of course it is me that should be blamed but would it be possible to change your feedback?

I would like to ask you the above sincerely.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry for the late reply.
Because my child is hospitalized and I am busy taking care of him, I was unable to check my emails.

I shipped the product today.

Thank you for your patience. I hope you understand my situation.

While my child is sick, receiving negative feedback is very hard for me because I am making my living from eBay.

I know it is my fault, but if it were at all possible, would you change it?

I appreciate your understanding.

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I am very sorry for the late reply.
Because my child was hospitalized and I was busy taking care of him, I was unable to check my emails.

I shipped the product today.

Thank you for your patience. I hope you understand my situation.

While my child is sick, receiving negative feedback is very hard for me because I am making my living from eBay.

I know it was my fault, but if it were at all possible, would you change it?

I appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
How is the delivery of ○○ and △△ I sent e-mail?
If you cannot deliver them in September but October, I am thinking to ask you to deliver only ○○ in advance by paying additionally.

If the factory seems not to answer my inquiry, I would like you to reply what to do including my proposal.

I look forward to your prompt reply.

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How is the delivery of ○○ and △△ I asked in the previous e-mail?
If you cannot deliver them in September and it will be in October, I am thinking to ask you to deliver only ○○ in advance by paying additionally.

If the factory seems not to answer my inquiry, I would like you to reply what to do including my proposal.

I look forward to your prompt reply.

元の翻訳
We always appreciate your business.

As to the lead time of ○○and △△ that I told you in my previous email, does it still take longer?

If they will be shipped in October, not this month, because they are not ready, I am hoping to receive only ○○ first even if I have to pay extra.

I would appreciate your update on this matter if you don’t expect any news from the factory any time soon.

I look forward to your reply.

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We always appreciate your business.

As to the lead time of ○○and △△ that I told you in my previous email, does it still take longer?

If they will be shipped in October, not this month, because they are not ready, I am hoping to receive only ○○ first even if I have to pay extra.

I would appreciate your update on this matter if you do not expect any news from the factory any time soon.

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
しかしながら、あなたが提供済みの住所、提供予定のものは他者の乙仲に対するものです。あなたに小包をお渡しする前にあなたの情報を必要としている弊社の貿易準拠チームが保持しているため、商業用インボイスが必要です。

いくつかの小包についていたのは価格の表示が無く、製品名のみ表示されている商業用インボイスのため、個々の小包の受領書の原紙が必要です。製品名、製品価格、支払い条件が記述されているインボイスの原紙が必要です。個々の小包は別々の注文なので、それぞれのインボイスを要請します。

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しかしながら、あなたが提供済みの住所、提供予定のものは他者の乙仲に対するものです。あなたに小包をお渡しする前にあなたの情報を必要としている弊社の貿易準拠チームが保持しているため、商業用インボイスが必要です。

いくつかの小包についていたのは価格の表示が無く、製品名のみ表示されている商業用インボイスのため、個々の小包の受領書の原紙が必要です。製品名、製品価格、支払い条件が記述されているインボイスの原紙が必要です。個々の小包は別々の注文なので、それぞれのインボイスを必要します。

元の翻訳
I'd like to have the same product as the product image.
If it is a different model number, I'll cancel my order.
If it is the same item with the product image, I'll process my payment so please send me the invoice.
Could you let me know the date of the delivery?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.

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I'd like to have the same product as the product image.
If it is a different model number, I'll cancel my order.
If it is the same item with the product image, I'll process my payment so please send me the invoice.
Could you let me know roughly the date of the delivery?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I want the same product as the one in the picture
If it's a different model, I will cancel it.
But if it's the same, please send me the invoice so that I can pay.
How long does it take for you to deliver it?
I'll be waiting for your reply.
Thank you in advance.

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I want the same product as the one in the picture.
If it's a different model, I will cancel it.
But if it's the same, please send me the invoice so that I can pay.
How long does it take for you to deliver it?
I'll be waiting for your reply.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I would like to obtain the same item as the product photo.
If the product type number is different then I would like to cancel it.
If the product is the same one then please send me an invoice for the goods so that I can pay to you.
When will the goods delivered to me?
I look forward to your reply.
Thank you.

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I would like to obtain the same item as the product photo.
If the product type number is different then I would like to cancel it.
If the product is the same one then please send me an invoice for it so that I can pay to you.
When will the goods delivered to me?
I look forward to your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I wrote down the address in my previous email as well. I wonder if you carefully read my emails.
This product was purchased in Japan and sold on Amazon.com.
I have already sent you a detailed statement that shows it was purchased in Japan.
I do not have a receipt because I did not buy it in America.
This product is scheduled to be returned to Japan.
I had to ask a different carrier to do a job because I am unable to send it back to Japan for your convenience.
I don’t understand why you need a receipt or document just because the product is moved to another warehouse in America.
I have never heard such a thing before.

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I wrote down the address in my previous email as well. I wonder if you carefully read my emails.
This product was purchased in Japan and sold on Amazon.com.
I have already sent you a detailed statement that shows it was purchased in Japan.
I do not have a receipt because I did not buy it in America.
This product is scheduled to be returned to Japan.
I had to ask a different carrier to do the return because I am unable to send it back to Japan for your convenience.
I don’t understand why you need a receipt or document just because the product is moved to another warehouse in America.
I have never heard such a thing before.

元の翻訳
I replay to your inquiry. I apologize that there is a crack on the surface of lens. We could not identify that problem in inspection. If a crack does not affect the picture, we would like to show our apology in a way of refunding a part of money of a product as a compensation, how does it sound to you? How about 30 USD for refund?
I am looking forward to your reply

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I reply your inquiry. I apologize that there is a crack on the surface of the lens. We could not identify that problem in our inspection. If a crack does not affect the picture, we would like to show our apology in a way of refunding a part of money for the product as a compensation, how does it sound to you? How about 30 USD for refund?
I am looking forward to your reply

元の翻訳
I am replying your inquiry.
We are really sorry for the crack in the lens surface. It seems that it could not be detected in our inspection.
If it's something small that does not influence in the images, we can make you a partial refund; what do you think?
How about an amount of US$30?
We will be waiting for your reply,

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I am replying your inquiry.
We would like to apologize for the crack in the lens surface. It seems that it could not have been detected in our inspection.
If it is something small that does not influence in the images, we can make you a partial refund; what do you think?
How about an amount of US$30?
We will be waiting for your reply,

元の翻訳
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元の翻訳
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元の翻訳
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- The inside inspection department does the inside inspection based on the inspection plan.

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- The business authority is ruled including the separated working regarding the important business being provided.
- The inside inspection department inspects the inside based on the inspection plan.

元の翻訳
- He went back to his room by himself. I didn't even notice! Let's get to bed too, it's late.
Oh my! He had a knife, and now Mr. A is...
Are you half-awake too?
No way! I saw it with my own eyes!
After he falls asleep, I'll sneak into his room and snatch the picture. You stay there, and don't worry. I'll be right back.
Still not here... What's taking so long...?
What they were saying was true, then.
- I have the movie you posted marked as favorite (Twitter)

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- He went back to his room by himself. I didn't even notice! Let's get to bed too, it's late.
Oh my! He had a knife, and now Mr. A is...
Are you half-awake too?
No way! I saw it with my own eyes!
After he falls asleep, I'll sneak into his room and snatch the picture. You stay there, and don't worry. I'll be right back.
Still not here... What's taking so long...?
What they were saying was true, then.
- I have the movie you posted marked as a favorite (Twitter)

元の翻訳
He went back alone to the room. When on earth? Well, we also have to go to bed. It's late.
Help! He used a knife to A to...
Are you still in the dream, too?
No way! I did see with my eyes!
I'll sneak into his room and try to take a picture when he sleeps. You should be here. No worries, I'll be back soon.
He haven't come back yet... What happened...
That was true what they said.
・Submitted videos are in the favourites (twitter)

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He went back alone to the room. When on earth? Well, we also have to go to bed. It's late.
Help! He used a knife to A to...
Are you still in the dream, too?
No way! I did see with my eyes!
I'll sneak into his room and try to take a picture when he sleeps. You should be here. No worries, I'll be back soon.
He hasn't come back yet... What happened...
That was true what they said.
・Submitted videos are in the favourites (twitter)

元の翻訳
・He went back to the room alone. Since when? Now we also try again to sleep. It is a slow time.
It's very! Using his knife to Andy. Of you are also half asleep? Heck no!It was seen in this eye!
Crept into the room he slept, I'll take pictures. You were there. Don't worry about it. Come back soon.
It does not come yet ... slow ...
・I'm thing they told me was true.Submissions videos you put to favorites (twitter)

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-He went back to the room alone. Since when? Now we also try again to sleep. It is getting late.
It's very! Using his knife to A. You are also half asleep? Heck no! It was seen in this eye!
Crept into the room he slept, I'll take pictures. You stay there. Don't worry about it. I will come back soon.
He is not back yet ... slow ...
I think what they told me was true.↵
-Submitted videos I posted to favorites (twitter)

元の翻訳
He went back to his room alone. When? Now, let's go to bed. It's late.
Oh my god! He used the knife and A....
Are you also half awake?
Not at all! I saw it with my own eyes!
Let’s sneak to his room to rip off the pictures after he is asleep. Don't go anywhere. Don't worry. I'll be back soon.
He hasn't come back yet....it's late....
What they said was true.
-The video I posted is added to favorites.

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He went back to his room alone. When? Now, let's go to bed. It's late.
Oh my god! He used the knife and A....
Are you also half awake?
Not at all! I saw it with my own eyes!
Let’s sneak to his room to rip off the pictures after he is asleep. You stay there. Don't worry. I'll be back soon.
He hasn't come back yet....it's late....
What they said was true.
-The video I posted is added to favorites (twitter)

元の翻訳
I went to a theater to watch this movie on the day of the premiere. I went to the theater to watch it three times because I thought I wouldn't be able to wait for releasing the DVD. I couldn't understand the story because there were little conversations in this movie, so I searched on internet. Although there are sad scenes but the picture is so beautiful and I am drawn into the movie, which I become eager to watch again and again. I felt this movie was targeting women but I thought I wanted men to watch it too. All female characters appear on the movie are attractive. I would like to see your scene more.
Please come and visit Japan again someday.

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I went to a theater to watch this movie on the day of the premiere. I went to the theater to watch it three times because I thought I wouldn't be able to wait for the DVD released. I couldn't understand the story because there were little conversations in this movie, so I searched on an internet. Although there are sad scenes but the picture is so beautiful and I am drawn into the movie, which I become eager to watch again and again. I felt this movie was targeting women but I thought I wanted men to watch it too. All female characters appear on the movie are attractive. I would like to see your scene more.
Please come and visit Japan again someday.

元の翻訳
I went to the theater to see this movie in its opening day. I thought I wouldn't be able to wait for the DVD release, so I went to see it in the movie theater 3 times.
This movie barely had dialogues, so I couldn't understand the story, and searched the internet. There are some sad scenes, but the images are gorgeous and very interesting. It makes you want to see it many times.
A felt this is a movie for women, but I'd like men to watch it too. All the female characters are fascinating. I wanted to see more scenes with you.
Please come back to Japan some day.

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I went to the theater to see this movie in its opening day. I thought I wouldn't be able to wait for the DVD release, so I went to see it in the movie theater 3 times.
This movie barely had dialogues, so I couldn't understand the story, and searched on the internet. There are some sad scenes, but the images are gorgeous and very interesting. It makes you want to see it many times.
I felt this is a movie for women, but I'd also like men to watch it. All the female characters are fascinating. I wanted to see more scenes with you.
Please come back to Japan some day again.

元の翻訳
Regarding the product, we asked Japan Post Office's tracking service, and we received that the item has already been delivered.
Please check the attached photo.
Also you can confirm the following address.
I am very sorry to trouble you. Thank you for your help.

Nice to meet you.
We are opening the thank-you campaign for the purchasers.
The contents are as follows:
Those who gave the five star's review will get the 300-yen Amazon gift card without exception.

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Regarding the product, we asked Japan Post Office's tracking service, and we received that the item had already been delivered.
Please check the attached photo for the report.
Also you can confirm it with the following address.
I am very sorry to trouble you. Thank you for your help.

Nice to meet you.
We are opening the thank-you campaign for the purchasers.
The contents are as follows:
Those who give the five star's review will get the 300-yen Amazon gift card without exception.

元の翻訳
We have tracked the shipment by using the tracking number given by Japan Post and found it arrived on Sept. 7th.
Please see the attached photo for confirmation.
You can also check it at the following address.
We are sorry for any inconveniences that may cause you.

It is our pleasure to know you.
Right now, we are in the middle of a thank-you campaign for our customers.
We present a 300yen Amazon gift card to every customer who gives us a feedback with 5 stars.

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We have tracked the shipment by using the tracking number given by Japan Post and found it had arrived on Sept. 7th.
Please see the attached photo for the confirmation report.
You can also check it at the following address.
We are sorry for any inconveniences that may cause you.

It is our pleasure to know you.
Right now, we are in the middle of a thank-you campaign for our customers.
We present a 300yen Amazon gift card to every customer who gives us a feedback with 5 stars.