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順調であれば3月4日に配達されることに気付きました。本当？配達は2月7日と約束されていたのでは？

明確にしてくださいますか。
よろしくお願いします。

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トラッキングによると、3月4日に配達されることに気付きました。本当？配達は2月7日と約束されていたのでは？

明確にしてくださいますか。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us.
We are very sorry on making a mistake with the delivery country.
It's just painful for you to have to wait all this time for the product.
We are truly sorry.
But at least we were saved as the product was delivered safely.
Thank goodness.
This is a miss from our end so we cannot do anything even if you provide us with a corresponding feedback.
We are truly sorry.

For those who are using electronic medical equipment such as cardiac pacemakers, please do not use these as there is a risk for these to malfunction.

For those who are receiving medical treatment, please consult with an expert before using the product.

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Thank you very much for contacting us.
We are very sorry for making a mistake with the delivery country.
It's just painful for you to have to wait all this time for the product.
We are truly sorry.
But at least we were relieved as the product was delivered safely.
Thank goodness.
This is a miss from our end so we cannot do anything even if you provide us with a corresponding feedback.
We are truly sorry.

For those who are using electronic medical equipment such as cardiac pacemakers, please do not use these as there is a risk for these to malfunction.

For those who are receiving medical treatment, please consult with an expert before using the product.

元の翻訳
I think the procedure you too was "Unpaid item case" instead of "Cancel Transaction" so could you check on that once please?
We both need to accept the cancellation before taking action otherwise, there's no applicable category and it cannot complete the process.

Thank you for your understanding.

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I think the procedure you took was "Unpaid item case" instead of "Cancel Transaction" so could you check that once again please?
We both need to accept the cancellation before taking action otherwise, there's no applicable category and I cannot complete the process.

Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Canada Postへ連絡をったところ、時計に関しての情報は私が持っているものと同じでした。荷物が最後にスキャンされたのはバンクーバーでした。2015年1月23日以降、バンクーバーから動きがありません。
下記添付写真でお分かりいただけるように、荷物は｢エクスプレス｣で出荷されたので、遅くとも昨日届いているはずです。本来であれば今現在、受領していないということはありえないこおです。

Canada Postから言われたのは、荷送人（Watch.jpn）が荷物の追跡と現在どこにあるかということを発送を行なった日本郵便へ調査依頼をするべきとのことでした。早急にこの調査を行なっていただけますよう、お願い致します。

調査開始されましたら、ご連絡をお願い致します。

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Canada Postへ連絡をったところ、時計に関しての情報は私が持っているものと同じでした。荷物が最後にスキャンされたのはバンクーバーです。2015年1月23日以降、バンクーバーから動きがありません。
下記添付写真でお分かりいただけるように、荷物は｢エクスプレス｣で出荷されたので、遅くとも昨日届いているはずです。本来であれば今現在、受領していないということはありえないこおです。

Canada Postから言われたのは、荷送人（Watch.jpn）が荷物の追跡と現在どこにあるかということを発送を行なった日本郵便へ調査依頼をするべきとのことでした。早急にこの調査を行なっていただけますよう、お願い致します。

調査開始されましたら、ご連絡をお願い致します。

元の翻訳
有難う、カスタム、我々は全額100usd以下を582.8usdと書きましたか?

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有難う。通関用の書類に、本来582.8ドルのところを100ドル以下で記入いただきましたか？

元の翻訳
I agree that the serial number is printed at the behind of its headstock, but the number has disappeared.
It might be considered the number is erased by a former owner or by a cleaning.
Please be forewarned and buy it.

Thank you for your pointing. Could you teach me a difference of each models? I would like to know which point led you the decision.

wonderful quality gear

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I agree that the serial number is printed at the back of its headstock, but the serial number has disappeared.
It might be considered the number was erased by a former owner or by cleaning it.
Please understand before buying it.

Thank you for your point. Could you teach me a difference of each models? I would like to know which point led you to the decision.

wonderful quality gear

元の翻訳
As you said, a serial number must be printed at the back of the head in its manufacturing, but it was deleted.
The reason that I can assume is that the previous owner deleted or it was deleted while it was cleaned. We appreciate that you purchase it by understanding it in advance.

Thank you for indicating it. If you do not mind, would you tell me the difference of the models?
Please tell me from which part you have decided it.

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As you said, a serial number must be printed at the back of the head in its manufacturing, but it was deleted.
The reasons I can assume is that the previous owner deleted it or it was deleted while it was cleaned. We appreciate that you purchase it by understanding it in advance.

Thank you for indicating it. If you do not mind, would you tell me the difference of the models?
Please tell me from which part you have decided it.↵
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Best quality

元の翻訳
As you said, the serial number was gone, it should have printed in the back of the head during its production,though.
The former owner might have erased it, or it might have been erased during its cleaning.
Please be forewarned in purchasing it.

Thank you very much for your pointing that out. If you don't mind, would you tell me the difference of models?
Please let me know which part you paid attention to evaluate it.

Best quality

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As you said, the serial number was gone, it should have printed in the back of the head during its production,though.
The former owner might have erased it, or it might have been erased while cleaning it.
Please understand before purchasing it.

Thank you very much for you pointing that out. If you don't mind, would you tell me the difference of models?
Please let me know which part you paid attention to evaluate it.

Best quality

元の翻訳
Sorry for the concerns.
We are shipping the items through SAL.
We just checked the tracking number and currently they are in transit to your country.
Please wait just a bit more.

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Sorry for the concerns.
We are shipping the items by SAL.
We just checked the tracking number and currently they are in transit to your country.
Please wait just a bit more.

元の翻訳
I stayed in Gent for 1hour and a bit but walked around efficiently well and I was satisfied. As I thought this tour's highlight is Bruges. More than I expected, I felt it is the Middle Agesthe medieval period. Sightseeing with boat was emotional and I saw beautiful views many times. I think I stayed in Bruges for about 3hours but I could do sightseeing and I was satisfied. I thought long bus trip was tough but I also spent time comfortably because the bus was latest one and tidy.

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I stayed in Gent for 1hour and a bit but walked around efficiently well and I was satisfied. As I thought this tour's highlight was Bruges. More than I expected, I felt it was the Middle Agesthe medieval period. Sightseeing with boat was emotional and I saw beautiful views many times. I think I stayed in Bruges for about 3hours but I could do enough sightseeing and I was satisfied. I thought the long bus trip was tough but I also spent the time comfortably because the bus was latest one and tidy.

元の翻訳
We stayed in Ghent about 1 hour but could enjoy our stay there thanks to a very effective walking tour. After all, I think that a highlight of this trip is Bruges.
Bruges was a town which you can feel the atomosphere of the medieval era than I thought. The sightseeing by boat was elegant and we could see beautiful views so many times. We stayed about 3 hours there but we could see enough and it was very satisfying. We thought that travelling a long time by coach would be tiring but the coach was bran-new style and clean so it was very comfortable.

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We stayed in Ghent about 1 hour but could enjoy our stay there thanks to a very effective walking tour. After all, I think that a highlight of this trip is Bruges.
Bruges was a town which you can feel the atomosphere of the medieval era than what I thought. The sightseeing by boat was elegant and we could see beautiful views so many times. We stayed about 3 hours there but we could see enough and it was very satisfying. We thought that travelling a long time by coach would be tiring but the coach was a bran-new style and clean so it was very comfortable.

元の翻訳
"Superb!"
This time, we visited Paris, London and Holland as a graduation trip. And we can visit other countries in a day as Belguim Sightseeing from Holland. That was really a wonderful trip. So I participated in it. At the beginning, we did not know the languages and places, and had to gather in Holland. I worried to be able to arrive properly. But we could arrived there soon safely because we could find a meeting place easily. And there were horses, swans and beautiful streets and houses in Holland.

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"Superb!"
This time, we visited Paris, London and Holland as a graduation trip. And we can visit other countries in a day to Belguim sightseeing from Holland. That was really a wonderful trip. So I participated it without doubt. At the beginning, we did not know the languages and places, and had to gather in Holland. I worried to be able to arrive properly. But we could arrived there soon safely because we could find a meeting place easily. And there were horses, swans and beautiful streets and houses in Holland.

元の翻訳
I enjoyed but...
It was a fantastic town like it shows in "fairyland" as I expected.
After I arrived there by bus from Amsterdam in 3hours, I was explained the way to be back and famous sight places while I was walking from the parking and went trough Markt Plaza and came out to canal and broke up and then I had a free time.
Explanation of the way to be back was easy but I panicked because there were some similar streets and walking around chocolate shop, souvenir shop, I mistook one street and lost my way somewhere,walked around same place... Meeting time was approaching.

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I enjoyed but...
It was a fantastic town like shown in "fairyland" as I expected.
After I arrived there by bus from Amsterdam in 3 hours, I was explained the way back and famous places while I was walking from the parking and went through Markt Plaza and came out to canal and broke up and then I had a free time.
Explanation of the way back was easy but I panicked because there were some similar streets and walking around a chocolate shop, a souvenir shop, I mistook one street and lost my way somewhere, walked around the same place... Meeting time was approaching.

元の翻訳
Parts and manuals are all set.
Part of the box is shaved off (reference is attached)
No significant damage on the figure, but partial plating shaved off and scratch are observed so please bid with your understanding.

Scissor which has used at the barber shop in Japan.
Length is about 18.5cm to 19.5cm.

Formal use Kimono with ornamental hairpin 10 pieces set
Wonderful ornamental hairpin with the complicated design
There are some damages due to aging so please bid with your understanding.

"Kokufu" is the highest level Bonsai exhibition held in Japan since 1934.
This is the rare document about its exhibition
This is must for Bonsai lovers.

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Parts and manuals are all set.
A part of the box is shaved off (reference is attached)
No significant damages on the figure, but partial plating shaved off and scratches are observed so please bid with your understanding.

Scissors which have been used at the barber shop in Japan.
Length is about 18.5cm to 19.5cm.

Formal use Kimono with ornamental hairpin 10 pieces set
Wonderful ornamental hairpin with the complicated design
There are some damages due to aging so please bid with your understanding.

"Kokufu" is the highest level Bonsai exhibition held in Japan since 1934.
This is the rare document about its exhibition
This is must for Bonsai lovers.

元の翻訳
A part of the box containing all the parts and user's manual has been cut (please see attached photo).
There are no major scratches on the figure, but please kindly understand that there are peelings and scratches on parts of the plating before you make a bid.

A Pair of high quality scissors that were used in a barber shop in Japan.
The length is approximately 18.5 cm to 19.5 cm.

10 set hairpin for formal kimono wear
Awesome hairpin with complex design
Please kindly understand that there are some scratches due to aging before you make a bid.

The most highly prestigious "Kokufu" (national customs and manner) bonsai exhibition held in Japan starting from 1934
Valuable materials of the Bonsai Exhibition
This is a must-read for bonsai exhibition enthusiasts.

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A part of the box containing all the parts and user's manual has been cut (please see the attached photo).
There are no major scratches on the figure, but please kindly understand that there are peelings and scratches on parts of the plating before you make a bid.

A Pair of high quality scissors that were used in a barber shop in Japan.
The length is approximately 18.5 cm to 19.5 cm.

10 sets of hairpin for formal kimono wear
Awesome hairpin with complex design
Please kindly understand that there are some scratches due to aging before you make a bid.

The most highly prestigious "Kokufu" (national customs and manner) bonsai exhibition held in Japan starting from 1934
Valuable materials of the Bonsai Exhibition
This is a must-read for bonsai exhibition enthusiasts.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I just informed you the tracking number, but I have sent out before you contacted me.
In other words, there was a time lag between the shipment and the processing on eBay.
I could stop the shipment if you have contacted me earlier.
I'm afraid I couldn't respond to your request.
Thank you.

I apology I couldn't respond to your request this time.

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Thank you for your reply.
I just informed you the tracking number, but I have sent out before you contacted me.
In other words, there was a time lag between the shipment and the processing on eBay.
I could have stopped the shipment if you had contacted me earlier.
I'm afraid I cannot respond to your request.
Thank you.

I apologize that I cannot respond to your request this time.

元の翻訳
I would like to make 50pcs of your company's product so could you please send us the quote which includes printing to this product (Mae Bells) and shipping to Japan.

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I would like to make 50pcs of your company's product, so could you please send us the quote which includes printing to this product (Mae Bells) and shipping to Japan.

元の翻訳
I would like to make 50 of your products, could you please send your quotation in case you print on this products(Mae Bells) and send them to Japan?

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I would like to make 50 of your products, could you please send your quotation in case you print on these products (Mae Bells) and send them to Japan?

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for this but
The product you bought this time
has been shipped already with the tracking information.
I apologize for your inconvenience.
Thank you very much in advance.

Hello.
The product you bought this time has been shipped with the tracking information.
Shipping fee is $3 more expensive than shipping with SAL separately but
this is my favor for you since you ordered two products.
I feel good since you can get both products at the same time, too.
Please wait for a while until the arrival of the products.
Thank you very much for using our shop this time.

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Hello.
Thank you very much for contacting us.
I am very sorry for this but
the product you bought this time
has been shipped already with the tracking information.
I apologize for your inconvenience.
Thank you very much in advance.

Hello.
The product you bought this time has been shipped with the tracking information.
Shipping fee is $3 more expensive than shipping with SAL separately but
this is my favor for you since you ordered two products.
I feel good since you can get both products at the same time, too.
Please wait for a while until the arrival of the products.
Thank you very much for using our shop this time.