Andrea (yui701) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
■This framework seems to explain an individual behavior successfully. A president and higher management may take childish behavior to evade an unwelcome pressure or stress resulting from underperformance of company’s achievement. The managers and employee may be trapped into very difficult situation to cooperate and work together in this kind of behaivior.

■That president keeps changing a policy and a plan agreed by the management. He easily gets bored and gives up the new project. When other employee resumes the new project gave up by the president and he faces with a trouble, the president ignites a temper as if he were ignorant child.

修正後
■This framework seems to explain an individual behavior successfully. A president and higher management may take childish behavior to evade an unwelcome pressure or stress resulting from underperformance of company’s achievement. The managers and employee may be trapped into very difficult situation to cooperate and work together in this kind of behaivior.

■That president constantly changing a policy and a plan depends on his mood. He easily gets bored and gives up the new project. When other employees resumes the given upped project by the president and if they face a trouble, he ignites a temper as if he were a child.

元の翻訳
We have reviewed your estimate. We are currently in the process of negotiating with other vendors as well. Would it be possible for you to offer at the same price by using PayPal for payment?

We are slightly concerned about the quality, too. It appears that the goods delivered are of poorer quality ever since the new person is in charge. We would appreciate it if you could improve on the quality.

Thanks in advance.

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We have reviewed your estimate. We are currently in the process of negotiating with other vendors as well. Would it be possible for you to offer at the same price by using PayPal for payment?

We are slightly concerned about the quality, too. It appears that the goods delivered are of poorer quality ever since the new person is in charge. We would appreciate it if you could improve on the quality.

We are looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I prefer to travel alone, rather than with someone else. This is because if I travel with someone else I tend to worry about how I behave and I can't enjoy things as I like them. I want to travel by myself because when traveling I think I confront my inner self, I can behave as I please, and don't have to be concerned with someone else.

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I prefer to travel alone, rather than with someone else. This is because if I travel with someone else I tend to worry about how I behave and I can't enjoy things as I like. I want to travel only by myself because when traveling I think I confront my inner self, I can behave as I please, and don't have to be concerned with someone else.

元の翻訳
I have a call from Mr Takana, would you like to take it?
Thank you for waiting.

I am afraid he is not at his room at the moment.
May I send him / her come up to your room?
May I ask your name?
Would you like to have breakfast? It will be extra.
The elevator is over there.
The elevator is locked, you will need to put your card into the slot on the left and pull it back out once you get in. Once it's unlocked, just press the button of the floor you want to go to.↵

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I have a call from Mr Takana, would you like to take it?
Thank you for waiting.

I am afraid he is not at his room at the moment.
May I send him / her come up to your room?
May I ask your name?
It will be added extra fee, but would you like to have breakfast?
The elevator is over there.
The elevator is locked, you will need to put your card into the slot on the left and pull it back out once you get in. Once it's unlocked, just press the button of the floor you want to go to.

元の翻訳
Hi,

I got a negative feedback from my buyer, but I solved the problem and the buyer agreed to revise the feedback.
However I cannot send a revision request (reached the maximum request #).
How can I request the buyer to revise the feedback in this case?

Please kindly advise.
Thanks!

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Hi,

I got a negative feedback from my buyer, but I solved the problem and the buyer agreed to revise the feedback.
However I cannot send a revision request (reached the maximum request #).
How can I request the buyer to revise the feedback in this case?

Please let me know.
Thanks!

元の翻訳
yamahaya88102012さんへ

こんにちは。あなたのリストを見ました。私がドラゴンボックスとスカウターを購入したのか気にされていましたね。しかし、青版は持ってないです。それだけを販売してもらえるのかな、と思っていました。





こんにちは。これはまだありますか？



それから、親切なメッセージと、価格について柔軟に対応していただきありがとうございました。商品が手に入るのを楽しみにしています！

あなたも良い週末を！

修正後
yamahaya88102012さんへ

こんにちは。あなたのリストを見ました。私がドラゴンボックスとスカウターをすでに購入したのか気にされていましたね。しかし、青版は持ってないです。それだけを販売してもらえるのかな、と思っていました。





こんにちは。これはまだありますか？



それから、親切なメッセージと、価格について柔軟に対応していただきありがとうございました。商品が手に入るのを楽しみにしています！

あなたも良い週末を！

元の翻訳
Regarding throwing away of garbage, separation of garbage has recently become stricter and garbage that isn't properly separated is not picked up. For those who properly separate their garbage this notice isn't necessary, but we would like to reconfirm the method for separating.
Be absolutely sure to separate plastic containers from burnable (including kitchen waste) garbage. Do not throw them out together.

Futons cannot be thrown away with normal garbage. Please handle the processing of over-sized garbage yourself. We cannot assist you with this.

Always put out your garbage in the predetermined area alongside the bicycle parking.

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The way of garbage disposal ↵
Separation of garbage has recently become stricter and garbage that isn't properly separated will not be picked up. This notice isn't necessary for those who have already separated their garbage properly, but we would like to ask you to reconfirm the method for separating.
Be absolutely sure to separate plastic containers from burnable (including kitchen waste) garbage. Do not throw them out together.

Futons cannot be thrown away as normal garbage. Please handle the processing of over-sized garbage by yourself. We cannot assist you with this.

Always put out your garbage in the predetermined area alongside the bicycle parking.