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元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your contact.

We apologize for causing your concerns and troubles for products not having been delivered yet even after one month from your order.
As for the product, we have already shipped it on 3/Feb.

Please kindly contact your nearest post office if there is any packs for you. There is a possibility that the pack is kept at post office due to your absence when it was delivered.
Could you kindly let us know again in case you couldn't find it at post office as well?

修正後
Thank you very much for your contact.

We apologize for causing your concerns and troubles for products not having been delivered yet even after one month from your order.
As for the product, we have already shipped it on February 3rd.

Please kindly contact your nearest post office if there is any packages for you. There is a possibility that the package is kept at the post office due to your absence when it was delivered.
Could you kindly let us know again in case you couldn't find it at the post office again?

元の翻訳
Hello, nice to contact you. This is A and I'm a student who is majoring in architecture in Japanese university.
I'm planning to visit Finland in June.
I would like to visit Vuoksenniska Church and is it possible?
What day of the week and what time when we can see it and do I need make a reservation?
And it would be appreciated if you could let me know how to get there from Helsinki.

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Hello. My name is A and I'm a student who is majoring in Architecture at a Japanese university.
I'm planning to visit Finland in June.
I would like to visit Vuoksenniska Church and I was wondering if it is possible.
What day of the week and what time can I visit there? ↵
Do I need a reservation?
And it would be appreciated if you could tell me how to get there from Helsinki.