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たくさん旅をしてきましたが、日本に行ったことはまだないのです。
この10月に東京に行く計画をと真剣に立てています。最もな目的は素晴らしい楽器店を見るためですが、4，5日ほどでできるだけの物を見たいと思っています。
後1カ月でパスポートのリニューアルが終わるので、それが終わったら、旅の計画を立てます。時期が近付いたら、AAの近くならどこに泊まったらよいかなど、詳しい情報を教えていただけますか。もちろん、日本のことはほとんど知らないのです。（素晴らしいバスギターがあるというのは、知っています！）
もし可能なら、列車の情報も教えていただけますか？そして、あなたに会えたらとても嬉しいです。どうでしょうか。サッポロかクアーズのビールをお互いにおごりあいましょう。
もっと時期が近付いたら、またお伺いします。

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たくさん旅をしてきましたが、日本に行ったことはまだないのです。
この10月に東京に行く計画を真剣に立てています。おもな目的は素晴らしい楽器店を見るためですが、4，5日ほどでできるだけたくさんの物を見たいと思っています。
後1カ月でパスポートのリニューアルが終わるので、それが終わったら、旅の計画を立てます。時期が近付いたら、AAの近くならどこに泊まったらよいかなど、詳しい情報を教えていただけますか。もちろん、日本のことはほとんど知らないのです。（素晴らしいバスギターがあるというのは、知っています！）
もし可能なら、列車の情報も教えていただけますか？そして、あなたに会えたらとても嬉しいです。どうでしょうか。サッポロかクアーズのビールをお互いにおごりあいましょう。
もっと時期が近付いたら、またお伺いします。

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Daughter: What the hell do you old witch come here fore.
Woman: What a warm welcome. No body really wants to visit a house like this. I am brought here by your brother
Brother-san: One might say so, one might, but...!
Woman: I would not be willing to bother to talk about children without drinking.
Daughter: That's what your usual paprika brain tells you of, you old witch.
Woman: What a noisy kid there is. It's disturing for a while. You noisy kid, you think you are a special exception who manages to avoid becoming an old witch? Even slandering gets one bored when the slanderer knows only few variations of words to use, doesn't it!


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Yes!
That is a poem I was given by my grandmother... I have not told this story to anyone!
I moved to a new place as you ordered me to.

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Daughter: What the hell do you old witch come here fore.
Woman: What a warm welcome. No body really wants to visit a house like this. I am brought here by your brother.
Brother-san: One might say so, one might, but...!
Woman: I would not be willing to bother to talk about children without drinking.
Daughter: That's what your usual paprika brain tells you of, you old witch.
Woman: What a noisy kid there is. It's disturing for a while. You noisy kid, you think you are a special exception who manages to avoid becoming an old witch? Even slandering gets one bored when the slanderer knows only few variations of words to use, doesn't it!


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Yes!
That is a poem I was given by my grandmother... I have not told this story to anyone!
I moved to a new place as you ordered me to.

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For a while, I made a business trip to Twaiwan and Vietnam for business observation.

As hasty order was in this time, I ordered it to a company who was lower in DHL carriage even if order quantity was the same quentity.
why is a HP corporation higher in DHL carriage beside other companies even if order quantity is the same kg.

If I order ink made by a HP corporation, a HP corporation can send ink within tomorrow? Or if a HP corporation can do it, how much does a HP corporation send ink?
if a HP corporation can send ink within tomorrow, I order ink made by a HP corporation.
I can pay a charge within today.

I am glad that a HP corporation decreases DHL carriage.

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For a while, I made a business trip to Twaiwan and Vietnam for business observation.

As hasty order was in this time, I ordered it to a company who was lower in DHL carriage even if order quantity was the same quantity.
Why is a HP corporation higher in DHL carriage beside other companies even if order quantity is the same kg?

If I order ink made by a HP corporation, can a HP corporation send ink within tomorrow? Or if a HP corporation can do it, how much does a HP corporation send ink?
if a HP corporation can send ink within tomorrow, I order ink made by a HP corporation.
I can pay a charge within today.

I am glad that a HP corporation decreases DHL carriage.

元の翻訳
Also, it is possible to get more attention from the potential clients through the promotion approach of the website had been mentioned. Actually, there are successful cases that the products we promoted got opportunities.
That is because we could simply introduce the exhibits with the videos. We take the video on the 1st day of the exhibition at the booth, then edit the video at our company. The video length will be about three minutes. We'll add Japanese subtitles to the video. Everyone can easily watch the video not only on the computers but also smart phones. You can use our service quickly and effectively with reasonable price.

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Also, it is possible to get more attention from the potential clients through the promotion approach of the website had been mentioned. Actually, there are successful cases that the products we promoted got opportunities.
Now we could simply introduce the exhibits with the videos. We take the video on the 1st day of the exhibition at the booth, then edit the video at our company. The video length will be about three minutes. We'll add Japanese subtitles to the video. Everyone can easily watch the video not only on the computers but also on smart phones. You can use our service quickly and effectively with a reasonable price.

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We are the only production company in Japan makes presentation videos for exhibitions. We propose to make sales promotions with a three minutes video of presentation (product explanation) for your articles at an exhibition. You can find below our web site and watch products' explanations of each company. We serve these type of videos by e-mail to possible japanese clients. The possible clients are the visitors who have exchanged the name cards. exhibitors, your client list, and the company which can have relation by our study.

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We are the only production company in Japan making presentation videos for exhibitions. We propose to make sales promotions with a three minutes video of presentation (product explanation) for your articles at an exhibition. You can find below our web site and watch products' explanations of each company. We serve these type of videos by e-mail to possible japanese clients. The possible clients are the visitors who have exchanged the name cards. exhibitors, your client list, and the company which can have relation by our study.

元の翻訳
We are only company that making the video for presentation of exhibition. We will make the 3 min video of your products for presentation and suggest sales promotion.

Below it is video website we run. You can see the product explaining of each companies.
Like these videos, we will distribute email to Japanese estimated customers. These estimates customers are companies that they were chose participants by exchanging business cards, tenants, your customers list and related companies by our investigation.

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We are only company that is making the video for presentation of exhibition. We will make the 3 min video of your products for presentation and suggest sales promotion.

Below it is video website we run. You can see the product explaining of each companies.
Like these videos, we will distribute emails to Japanese estimated customers. These estimates customers are companies that they were chose participants by exchanging business cards, tenants, your customers list and related companies by our investigation.

元の翻訳
Phoenix Seagaia Resort started English contents reading subscription App for mobile devices.

The App is based on this March's Japanese subscription which was translated into English. PDFs, videos and photos etc, resort's MICE information was sent by various media. Through tablets and smart phones, develop rich promotions can be even faster, Miyazaki MICE's charm is spreading.
You can check out the facilities, layouts of each hall and baton plans by the App.

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Phoenix Seagaia Resort started English contents reading subscription App for mobile devices.

The App is based on this March's Japanese subscription which was translated into English. PDFs, videos and photos etc, resort's MICE information were sent by various media. Through tablets and smart phones, developing rich promotions can be even faster, Miyazaki MICE's charm is spreading.
You can check out the facilities, layouts of each hall and baton plans by the App.

元の翻訳
Color The Cover

rhythm zone

The thought of leaving behind a song title that would shine continuously as times goes by. Kumi Koda, 13 years after making the first debut on the 6th of December once again, releasing a cover album as a memoir of her debut aniversary.

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Color The Cover

rhythm zone

The thought of leaving behind a song title that would shine continuously as times goes by. Kumi Koda, 13 years after making the first debut on the 6th of December once again, is releasing a cover album as a memoir of her debut aniversary.

元の翻訳
As you said there is a crack in the base of the kettle that can be seen, and signs of repairs.
I do not know for sure.
However, it does not leak, and can be used without a problem.
Also, as the item has already been packaged, taking additional photographs is hard.

The bottom is flat. However, as it is a hand-made product it is not completely flat, please check the photographs.
I have given you a $00 discount as you have requested.
Further discount is very hard for me to provide.
If you were to purchase several items I could consider a further discount for you.

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As you said there is a crack in the base of the kettle that can be seen, and signs of repairs.
I do not know for sure.
However, it does not leak, and can be used without a problem.
Also, as the item has already been packaged, taking additional photographs is hard.

The bottom is flat. However, as it is a hand-made product it is not completely flat, please check the photographs.
I will give you a $00 discount as you have requested.
Further discount is very hard for me to provide.
If you were to purchase several items I could consider a further discount for you.

元の翻訳
Template of AAA is good. But can it be showed as animation when pushed button of BBB? (Just like template of CCC)
Is there any reason that it can not be showed by animation? Anyway, it is great. Ver3.0 is fun. I decide to support Germany at World cup. (Laugh

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Template of AAA is good. But can it be showed as animation when pushed button of BBB? (Just like template of CCC)
Is there any reason that it can not be showed by animation? Anyway, it is great. Ver3.0 is fun. I decided to support Germany at World cup. (Laugh

元の翻訳
AAA「Love song and　raining day」music video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_1t2Dkd2Io

「AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -GOLD SYMPHONY-」
http://avex.jp/aaa/live/tour.php?id=1000090

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AAA "Love song and　raining day" music video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_1t2Dkd2Io

"AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -GOLD SYMPHONY-"
http://avex.jp/aaa/live/tour.php?id=1000090

元の翻訳
As it was advised by ebay, I submitted the objection to the Paypal problem solve center. Right after that, I called to Paypal and told that it was the problem on the way to delivery, then I was told that Paypal will take care of this problem since it was the problem of delivery by Global Shipping Program by eBay and I'm relieved to hear that. I think we can solve this problem smoothy.

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As it was advised by ebay, I submitted the objection to the Paypal problem solve center. Right after that, I called to Paypal and told that it was the problem on the way to delivery, then I was told that Paypal would take care of this problem since it was the problem of delivery by Global Shipping Program by eBay and I'm relieved to hear that. I think we can solve this problem smoothy.

元の翻訳
Upcoming Appearance!!

■TV TOKYO「TV TOKYO MUSIC FESTIVAL(NEW)」
・DATE：Thursday 26th June, 2014
・TIME：18:30-23:24

・OFFICIAL HOMEPAGE： www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part 1「MOKUHACHI！One Night Only~Thursday's premium concert」

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Upcoming Appearance!!

■TV TOKYO"TV TOKYO MUSIC FESTIVAL(NEW)"
・DATE：Thursday 26th June, 2014
・TIME：18:30-23:24

・OFFICIAL HOMEPAGE： www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part 1"MOKUHACHI！One Night Only~Thursday's premium concert"