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約11年前

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この翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2013/05/24 21:48:02
コメント「安心してください。」の訳が抜けています。最後の文、「楽しみにしていてください」の訳で "Be looking forward to~"という命令形の表現は不自然な気がします。普通に"Look forward to~"が良いと思います。

この翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語

2014/02/03 15:43:52

元の翻訳
At this moment, we have only a red and a black item in stock.
If you would like these two, we can ship them in this week.
In case of other colors, we will ship them on the schedule that we mentioned in the mail.
White items (two) will come in next week, but 380 dollars per one is the limit price that we can cut down.
The production of this model in any color can't keep up with demand and it generally takes about a month.
I appreciate your understanding.
I will send an invoice that is translated in AUD. (I'll be careful not to create it in JPY.)

修正後
At this moment, we only have one unit each of red and a black one in stock.
If you would like these two, we can ship them this week.
For the other items, we will ship them in accordance with the schedule as indicated in our mail.
White items (two) will come in next week, but 380 dollars per unit is the lowest price we can give you.
The production of this model in any colors can't keep up with their demand and it generally takes about a month.
I appreciate your understanding.
I will send an invoice that is translated in AUD. (I'll be careful not to create it in JPY.)