Tearz (tearz) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
Right now, it seems that I have been charged twice for the same item.
Please refund the overpayment for the item.
Also, I had on more issue. Why has "My Order History" been deleted?

Below I've included the Paypal transaction ID. Please confirm.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Right now, it seems that I have been charged twice for the same item.
Please refund the overpayment for the item.
Also, I had one more issue. Why has "My Order History" been deleted?

Below I've included the Paypal transaction ID. Please confirm.

元の翻訳
<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would be participating again.

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<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would go to the show again.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

Of course I will pay for the product once I receive it. However, I have not received anything yet for now, and I request a refund.

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Thank you for your message.

Of course I will pay for the product once I receive it. However, I have not received anything yet for now, so I request a refund.

元の翻訳
I made a purchase on your website on March 25, 2014, but my purchase status shows "void" while my credit card has been transacted.

What does this mean?

Therefore, I would like you to make a refund of 135, 65 $ or send me the product again.

Please contact me as soon as possible.

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I made a purchase on your website on March 25, 2014, but my purchase status shows "void" while my credit card has been transacted.

What does this mean?

Therefore, I would like you to issue me a refund of $135.65 or send me the product again.

Please contact me as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
* "LIONS CHANNEL" is a weekly program to support the team.
Live: 10:00–10:30pm on every Monday
Repeat: 1:00-1:30pm on every Tuesday
http://www.teletama.jp/sports/

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* "LIONS CHANNEL" is a weekly supporting program for Seibu Lions.
Live: Mondays 10:00–10:30pm
Repeat: Tuesdays 1:00-1:30pm
http://www.teletama.jp/sports/

元の翻訳
It was found tht laravel framework has been used, and I checked it and solved it by myself.
Other than that, please correct the bug.
Unless the bug is corrected,I cannot open the website.

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As it was found that laravel framework has been used, I checked it and solved it by myself.
Other than that, please fix the bug I have requested the other day.
Unless the bug is fixed, I cannot open the website.

元の翻訳
<purchase, a settlement period＞
Please settle an account at any time.

Specifically, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop.

[instructions]
"2 shot photography event"
*The photography has the possibility of the shift sequentially.
*In the case of "2 shot cheki" we will use the cheki which we prepared. We do not permit chekis which you brought. Thank you for your understanding innadvance.

*In the case of "2 shot Sha-mail ," it should be the photography by your cell-phone. Your smartphone is also available.

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<purchase/ settlement period＞
Please settle your payment at any time.

For more details, please confirm at the sale site of the mu-mo shop.

[Caution]
"2-shot photography event"
*The photo shooting session may take turns.
*In the case of "2-shot cheki", the cheki to be used will be prepared at our end. The use of chekis you'd bring will not be allowed during the session. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

*During the "2-shot picture message" session, cellphones including smartphones are allowed for taking photos.

元の翻訳
1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します)
2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。
3 ボルトを固く締めてください。
4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。
5 ボルトを固く締めてください。
6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。
7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。
8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは重量がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。
9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超え他ところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。

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1 すべての部品を床におきます。 (PlaseはPlaceの打ち間違いと仮定します)
2 ベース (台) にクロスバーを接続してください。
3 ボルトを固く締めてください。
4 ハンモックのフレームの棒をベースに接続してください。
5 ボルトを固く締めてください。
6 フックとワッシャーを、ハンモックサイズに合うような適切な穴に取り付けてください。
7 蝶ネジを締めて、フックを固定してください。
8 写真のようにハンモックをかけます。最初、ハンモックは荷重がかかったときにわずかに垂れる程度が適切です。ハンモックが伸びるにしたがって、適切に調整してください。
9 注意: 子供だけでハンモックを使わせないでください。ブランコのようにつかわないでください。ハンモックは常に台の脚の間にあるようにしてください。台の脚を超えたところに座らないでください。常時フックと蝶ネジが固く締まっていることを確認してください。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply. I have double checked it. When I set the volume to the maximum and set my ear close to the speaker, I somehow hear little sound.
However, nothing more than that comes out. There's no error on the settings. I am getting sure it is defective.

I have a big trouble on this. I will ask repairman to confirm the issue.

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Thank you for your reply. I have double checked it. When I turn the volume to the maximum and put my ear closer to the speaker, I could barely hear the sound.
However, I could confirm nothing louder than that. There's no error on the settings. I'd assume it is broken after all.

I am very confused. I will ask the repairman to confirm the issue.

元の翻訳
Thank you for message.

I'm sorry from bottom of the heart.
You said that wrong items arrived.　I would like to confirm them.　So, Could you show me picture?
I'm sorry for inconvenience.

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Thank you for message.

I'm sorry from the bottom of the heart.
You said that wrong items have arrived.　I would like to confirm them.　So, could you show me the picture?
I'm sorry for your inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your feedback about the meeting schedule with ABC.
We'd like to hold the meeting from 3:30 PM to 4:00 PM.
In addition, we are not concluding NDA until we start detailed study as a company direction. Therefore, we like to discuss what we can disclose at this moment this time.

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Thank you for your feedback about the meeting schedule with ABC.
We'd like to hold the meeting from 3:30 PM to 4:00 PM.
In addition, we are not concluding NDA until we start detailed investigation as a company direction. Therefore, we'd like to discuss with what we could disclose at this moment.

元の翻訳
I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apology for any inconvenience caused very much.

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I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction as new item even though the item is actually USED one. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but I have mistakenly put this item up for auction even though the item is out of stock. This is totally our fault, therefore I would like to cancel the deal with our offer you a full refund plus $3 of compensation fee. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.

I am sorry but the item’s price has been mispriced accidentally. Therefore, please allow us to cancel this deal. Again I apologize for any inconvenience caused very much.