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請求額は90ドル以下のはずです。贈り物かのように請求書を送りつけてこないでください。

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請求額は90ドル以下のはずです。もしくは贈り物を贈る時と同じ要領で、請求書は送ってこないでください。

元の翻訳
Hello. Is a dispatch of the item I purchased on November 13th completed?
Please send me a message. If it is not dispatched yet, please send it as soon as possible.

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Hello. Has my purchased item been shipped on November 13th already?
Please send me a message. If it has not been done so, please ship it as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I think they are good friend though they said their relationship is not good enough to be close friend.

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I guess they are such good and close friends enough to say they are not each other's best friends.

元の翻訳
They can say that they are not best friends. They have that good friendship.

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I guess they are such good and close friends enough to say they are not each other's best friends.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
ありがとうございます。注文はキャンセルせず、発送して頂ければと思います。
何卒よろしくお願い致します。

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こんにちは。
それは良かったです。注文はキャンセルせず、発送して頂ければと思います。
何卒よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
それは良かった。私の注文をキャンセルしないで商品を発送してください。
ありがとう。

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こんにちは。
それは良かったです。私の注文をキャンセルしないで商品を発送してください。
ありがとう。

元の翻訳
Hello (もしわかるなら相手のお名前),

Thanks for your reply. Actually I am interested in other watches as well.
Model number:

I would like to buy 20 pieces for each model. Please let me know the prices and payment method(s) you accept.

Best Regards,
(あなたのお名前)

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Hello (もしわかるなら相手のお名前),

Thanks for your reply. Actually I am interested in other model numbers as well.
Model number:

I would like to buy 20 pieces for each model. Please let me know the prices and payment method(s) you accept.

Best Regards,
(あなたのお名前)

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
In addition, I’m interested in several other models.
Model

I would like to order 20 each.
Please tell me the prices and preferred payment method.

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Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
In addition, I’m interested in several other model numbers.
Model Number

I would like to order 20 pcs each.
Please tell me the prices and preferred payment method.

元の翻訳
Itmedia

ITmedia
http://www.itmedia.co.jp/news/articles/1410/22/news060.html

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ITmedia

ITmedia
http://www.itmedia.co.jp/news/articles/1410/22/news060.html

元の翻訳

Itmedia

ITmedia
http://www.itmedia.co.jp/news/articles/1410/22/news060.html

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ITmedia

ITmedia
http://www.itmedia.co.jp/news/articles/1410/22/news060.html

元の翻訳
I duly noted.
Your item will be delivered with highest priority by using international speed post (EMS).
There is no additional fee, so please do not worry.
Thanks for using our service.

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I duly noted.
Your item will be delivered with the highest priority by using international speed post (EMS).
There is no additional fee, so please do not worry.
Thanks for using our service.

元の翻訳
I have sent it.

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I have shipped it.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the delay in reply.
Last week I was in UK on a business trip.
And again staring from next week I will be visiting various places in Europe on the business trip, until 27th Nov.

So, I request you to re-schedule the meeting with your company on any day staring from 28th Nov.
I am eagerly looking forward to meet you.

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Sorry for the delay in reply.
Last week I was in UK on a business trip.
And again staring from next week I will be visiting various places in Europe on the business trip, until 27th Nov.

So, regarding the meeting with you, I request you to get back to me with some of your availabilities on any day after 28th Nov.
I am eagerly looking forward to meeting with you.

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

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Sorry for my late reply.
I was in UK on business last week.
And I will be flying back to other spots in Europe for another business trip next week till 27th.

About the business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

元の翻訳
I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for several possible dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

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I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for your several available dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

元の翻訳
Hope the world to be peace.

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May peace (happiness) prevail on earth.

元の翻訳
I am interested in this item.
Have you not opened this item? Or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
May I see the picture in whole aspects(front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

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I am interested in this item.
Is this item unopened, or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
May I see the picture in whole aspects (front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I'm interested in this product.
Is this unopened or unsealed?
Are all accessories enclosed?
Can I see the whole picture (front, side and back) ?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.

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I'm interested in this product.
Is this unopened, or did you open the package by removing the seal?
Are all accessories enclosed?
Can I see the whole picture (front, side and back) ?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I checked the email but couldn't confirm the email on the short of the stock.

We will return BDP-3000 and would like you to prepare for refund.
Please let us know how we conduct the procedure.

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I checked the emails but couldn't confirm the email on the out of stock.

We will return "BDP-3000", so please issue us a refund.
Please let us know how to proceed.

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We have checked our e-mail, but we couldn't find the e-mail about the stockout.

We will return "BDP-3200", so we ask for a positive response about the refund.
Please let us know about the procedure we must take, thank you.

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We have checked our e-mails, but we couldn't find the e-mail about the out of stock.

We will return "BDP-3200", so we ask for a refund.
Please let us know about the procedure we must take, thank you.

元の翻訳
After I confirmed the e-mail, but I could not check the e-mail about running out stock.

Because we have returned the BDP-3200 product, please kindly refund.
Please tell us the right procedure to do.

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I confirmed the e-mails, but I could not find the e-mail about out of stock.

Because we would like to return the "BDP-3200" product, please kindly refund.
Please tell us how to proceed with it.

元の翻訳
I checked the mail, but I wasn’t able to check the mail regarding out of stock.

We will return the BDP-3200, so please proceed with refunding.
Please let me know how to proceed.

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I checked the emails, but I wasn’t able to find the email regarding out of stock.

We will return the "BDP-3200", so please proceed with refunding.
Please let me know how to proceed.

元の翻訳
The good I purchased at October 3 has arrived today.
But the good I purchased at October 24 is not arrived yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.

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The goods I purchased on October 3 has arrived today.
But the other one I purchased on October 24 has not been delivered yet. Let me know when this will be delivered.