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日本語

返信が遅れて申し訳ございません。
先週UKに出張しておりました。
そしてまた来週から27日までヨーロッパ各地に出張する予定です。

御社との打合せの件ですが、11/28以降で候補日をいくつかいただけないでしょうか。
お会いできることを楽しみにしております。

英語

I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for several possible dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

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tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/14 19:38:24

元の翻訳
I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for several possible dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

修正後
I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for your several available dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

良い文章だと思います。これからのご活躍を期待しています。

[sanrin88]

添削とコメントありがとうございます！とても勉強になります。