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#william

How long will it take for the delivery to Japan?
Does the ID band and the patter cover included same as last time?
Is it posible to send to Japan with postage $450?

#will

I am considering purchasing a SLDR TS 3 Woods and a Hybrid.
What is the angle of Hybrid loft? I would like to purchase it if the loft is what I am looking for.
Would it be ok for you paying $260 If I would purchase two of them, and paying $160 if I would purchase a SLDR TS 3 Wood?

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#william

How long will it take to be delivered to Japan?
Does the ID band and the patter cover included [tense confusion] same as last time?
Is it posible to send to Japan with postage [word choice] $450?

#will

I am considering purchasing a SLDR TS 3 Woods and a Hybrid.
What is the angle of Hybrid loft? I would like to purchase it if the loft is what I am looking for.
Would it be ok to pay $260 If I would purchase [tense confusion] two of them, and paying $160 if I would purchase [tense confusion] a SLDR TS 3 Wood?

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There was nothing we could do even we tried to send our product to you.
We advised Amazon that a system error won't happen again.

You gave one star review to our store.
It was not our mistake that we couldn't sell our product because of the system error of Amazon.
Could you kindly delete your review?↵
We would greatly appreciate it.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions.

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We did out best to send you our product, but there was nothing we could do due to the system error on Amazon.
We warned them that this should not happen again.

You gave one star review to our store.
It was not our fault but the system error of Amazon.
We would greatly appreciate it If you could kindly reconsider your review.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions.

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こんにちは。誰かその機械を開けてくれる人を探してもらえないでしょうか。私はエンジニアで、あなたがエンジニアでないことは承知しています。もし誰かがチェックや修理をすることで費用が発生する場合、こちらで負担いたします。
ただケーブルが緩いかどうかチェックするのではなく、機械がスクリーンへクリックできるように(赤く丸いパーツ)、また一つのイメージだけではなく、こちらの工場で多くのイメージを見れるように、ケーブルをよりきつく締めてもらえますでしょうか。このことを彼ら（おそらく工場の同僚及か誰か）が、私にあなたに聞いてくれないか、と頼んできました。ご面倒をおかけするのは承知していますが、機械をこちらに送付しなくても済むのです。これで一緒に問題を解決しませんか。または、他に良い案がありますでしょうか。

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こんにちは。誰かにその機械を開けてくれるように頼めますか？あなたがエンジニアでないことは知っていますよ。私もそうです。もしチェックや修理をすることで費用が発生する場合、こちらで負担いたします。
ただケーブルが緩いかどうかチェックするだけではなく、赤い輪の部分のケーブルをもっときつくすれば、マシンはスクリーンにはまります。写真はこの一枚に収まらなかったので、弊社の工場から写真が他にも送られてきたのですが、こちらを確認してほしいとのことです。面倒で悪いんだけど、これで問題のマシンを送る必要は無くなったよ。是非一緒に解決して行きたいので他に何か考えがあれば知らせてください。

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Thank you for your oder of A and B.
I have two things I would like to check regarding your order.
1. Please note that AA you ordered is not the cartridge of BB.
2. Is it ok for you to ship two items together? In that case you can get 2.5$ discount, we will refund you the discount after shipping.

I will be waiting for your reply.

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Thank you for your oder [spelling] of A and B.
I would like to check two things regarding your order.
1. Please note that the AA you ordered is not the cartridge of BB.
2. Is it ok [spelling] for you to ship two items together [ambiguous]? In that case you can get a $2.5 discount, [comma splice] we will refund you the discount after shipping.

I will be waiting for your reply.

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I thought that filling a damage report runs smoothly if you would show the damaged staff, but it would be better to let post office know that there is no necessary to send it back.

Cup(s) cost(s) about 40$.
Check a "Gift" checkbox by shipping.
Does "bill" mean invoice? We understood that we will not put it into the package.

Thank you for your cooperation.
Please understand that it takes some time for me reading and writing in English, because I don't understand English very much.

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I thought that filling a damage report runs smoothly if you would show the damaged stuff, but it would be better to let post office know that there is no necessity to send it back.

Cup(s) cost(s) about 40$.
Check the "Gift" checkbox when shipping.
Does "bill" mean invoice? We understood that we will not put it into the package.

Thank you for your cooperation.
Please understand that it takes some time for me to read and write in English, because I don't understand English very well.