Tamami Yamashita (tamami) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
アマゾンの顧客であるCarlos Aspas 氏の返品ポリシーについて話し合う
アマゾンの顧客であるCarlos Aspas 氏の配達のご注文について話し合う
アマゾンの顧客であるJayvee 氏と話し合う

修正後
アマゾンの顧客であるCarlos Aspas 氏の返品ポリシーについて検索する
アマゾンの顧客であるCarlos Aspas 氏の注文の配達について検索する
アマゾンの顧客であるJayvee 氏を検索する

元の翻訳
Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat. Under that idea, we increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not notice blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

修正後
As we commented "Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat", we actually increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not notice blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

元の翻訳
Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat. Under that idea, we increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not notice blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

修正後
Let's increase the thickness of the wall of meat. Under that idea, we increased the number of meat.
The beacon could not give off blocked by the wall of tough meat.
We found that "for the human body, it can penetrate up to one person, but it is no good with two people."

元の翻訳
"Los artículos deben estar en nuevas condiciones.
Los artículos deben ser devueltos con todo el empaquetado y los accesorios originales.
Los elementos multimedia (por ejemplo, películas, música, juegos de video y software) deben estar sin abrir y todavía en su envoltorio de plástico.
Instrumentos musicales, televisores y electrónica de consumo deben tener un UPC o número de serie.
Los zapatos y la ropa deben ser no gastados.
No se aceptarán devoluciones por cualquier razón, excepto por defectos iniciales obvias ".

修正後
"Los artículos deben ser nuevos.
Los artículos deben ser devueltos en el empaquetado y con los accesorios originales.
Los elementos multimedia (por ejemplo, películas, música, juegos de vídeo y software) deben estar sin abrir y en su envoltorio de plástico.
Los instrumentos musicales, los televisores y la electrónica de consumo deben tener un UPC o número de serie.
Los zapatos y la ropa deben estar sin estrenar.
Por ningún motivo se aceptarán devoluciones, excepto por defectos manifiestos de origen"

元の翻訳
As it was advised by ebay, I submitted the objection to the Paypal problem solve center. Right after that, I called to Paypal and told that it was the problem on the way to delivery, then I was told that Paypal will take care of this problem since it was the problem of delivery by Global Shipping Program by eBay and I'm relieved to hear that. I think we can solve this problem smoothy.

修正後
As it was advised by ebay, I submitted the objection to the Paypal problem solve center. Right after that, I called to Paypal and told that it was the problem on the way to delivery, then I was told that Paypal would take care of this problem since it was the problem of delivery by Global Shipping Program by eBay and I'm relieved to hear that. I think we can solve this problem smoothy.

元の翻訳
”追跡番号を取って、今夜ebayに載せます。感謝します。”

修正後
「追跡番号を取得して、今夜ebayに載せます。よろしく。」

元の翻訳
For this product, I am sending you a photo and a descriptions.
Please check the text below.

From the PRW-6000, the model of analog/ digital of "PRO TREK", which includes triple sensors to sense the information of the changing nature, the "BLACK TITAN LIMITED", which is unified with monotone reminiscence of the meter has arrived.
Eliminating the additional colors from its face, it is designed by monotone. For its band, titanium band with black IP processing was selected, and it is completed as lightweight and high quality.

修正後
For this product, I am sending you a photo and a descriptions.
Please check the text below.

From the PRW-6000, the model of analog/ digital of "PRO TREK", which includes triple sensors to sense the information of the ever-changing nature, the "BLACK TITAN LIMITED", which is unified with monotone reminiscence of the meter has arrived.
Eliminating the unnecessary colors from its face, it is designed by monotone. For its band, titanium band with black IP processing was selected, and it is completed as lightweight and high quality.