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元の翻訳
thank you for the massage .
i send a small package with the company SAL so it doesn't have tracking number.

if i put tracking number on the sending price will go up 2000 yen so i didn't put it on. ill ask for your understanding.
the latest of the luggage arriving will be two hours late.
in case the luggage doesn't come we will give back the money.

修正後
Thank you for the massage .
I sent the small package with the company SAL so it doesn't have tracking number.

If I put tracking number on, the sending price will become 2000 yen, so I didn't put it on. I'll ask for your understanding.
The luggage will be arrived in at most two weeks.
In case, if the luggage is not transported, we will give back the money.

元の翻訳
KODA KUMI FAN CLUB EVENT 2008「Let's Party Vol.1」

修正後
KODA KUMI FAN CLUB EVENT 2008 "Let's Party Vol.1"