スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company to send it by air maill on weekend today?
In the accident where it was delayed in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
For this reason, if possible, could you give a discount for the item that we order the next time?

修正後
We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company today so it will be shipped by air on weekend?
Due to the delay in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
If possible, could you give us a discount for the item we will order the next time?

元の翻訳
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither ID nor PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

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Since the beginning of November, I have not been able to log into my seller account of Amazon EU.
As far as I recall I have changed neither my ID nor password. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from our purchasers. The money has also been put on hold.
Furthermore, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what has been going on. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

元の翻訳
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither ID nor PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

修正後
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in to the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither the ID nor the PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer to the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received emails at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard back.

元の翻訳
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither ID nor PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

修正後
Since the beginning of November, I have not been able to log into my Amazon EU seller account.
I have never changed my ID or password. My seller account has been suspended, but I still have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been put on hold.
However, I have not received an email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once, but I have not heard from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for doing business with us.

We received the item that we ordered on October 10th (order number 700003488) today, but it was different from the item that we ordered.
We ordered CUC14-5, but we received CUH14-5.

We will send the pictures of the item we received and statement of deliver, so please check them.
The statement of delivery is CUC14-5. It must have been sent by mistake.

修正後
Thank you for doing business with us.

We received the item that we ordered on October 10th (order number 700003488) today, but it was different from the item that we ordered.
We ordered CUC14-5, but we received CUH14-5.

We will send the pictures of the item we received and the statement of delivery, so please check them.
The statement of delivery is CUC14-5. It must have been sent by mistake.

元の翻訳
We will be in a trouble if we do not receive CUC14-5 at our store until November 11th.
We ask you to send it by Federal Express immediately.
Regarding the shipping charge, we do not pay since it is not due to our mistake.
As we paid for the shipping charge of DHL, could you send it by using that amount by Federal Express?

We will return the item that had been sent to us by mistake by cash on delivery.

Best regards

修正後
We will be in a trouble if we do not receive CUC14-5 at our store by November 11th.
We ask you to send it by Federal Express immediately.
Regarding the shipping charge, we do not pay since it is not due to our mistake.
As we paid for the shipping charge of DHL, could you send it by using that amount by Federal Express?

We will return the item that had been sent to us by mistake by cash on delivery.

Best regards

元の翻訳
The guitar that you purchased is ITEM number XXX.
The item that you asked a question is the same kind of F, but it is a different guitar.
We have already sent the guitar to you.
Other than nut and saddle, all are the original parts where there is neither a crack nor damage.
It is so beautiful and under the good condition that we cannot believe that it is a guitar
that was manufactured for more than 40 years ago.
Regarding the case, Yamaha FG series (D size) manufactured in 1970s is attached.
As the case is larger than the guitar a little, we packed it with a material of packing strictly to prevent that the guitar is damaged.

修正後
The guitar that you purchased is ITEM number XXX.
The item that you asked a question is the same kind of F, but it is a different guitar.
We have already sent the guitar to you.
Other than nuts and saddles, all are the original parts where there is neither a crack nor damage.
It is so beautiful and under the good condition that we cannot believe that it is a guitar
that was manufactured for more than 40 years ago.
Regarding the case, Yamaha FG series (D size) manufactured in 1970s is attached.
As the case is larger than the guitar a little, we packed it with a packing material strictly to prevent the guitar from being damaged.

元の翻訳
You have sent an item on September 15th, but I have not received it yet.
I tracked it, and found that it was under the status of　"opening" on September 17th
and no progress has been made thereafter.
If there was an accident about it, I ask you to refund it.

修正後
You have sent an item on September 15th, but I have not received it yet.
As I tracked it, I found that the status was under the status of "opening" on September 17th
and no progress has been made thereafter.
If there was a shipping accident, I'd like to ask you for a refund.

元の翻訳
それらは、私が受領した商品と似ています。イーベイのサイトをチェック、これよりも遥かに素晴らしい商品を３点選択しました。G-63, G-64 G-65です。重量の総計は、１，１００グラムです。
これらは、より強固且つスラグ及び鋳鉄で埋められていないようです。
貴方が送付した２つを箱詰めし、出荷後、ご連絡します。
受け取った際、これら３商品に問題がない場合、重量の差をお支払いします。リヨ。

今回の商品に問題がなければ、貴方から剃刀も購入します。
既に、３種の剃刀を選択しておりますが、今回の注文を受け取った後、再注文します。
再注文するか否かは、Rサイトウのロゼットの鋭さにより決定します。
出荷後、追跡のために登録されたレター番号をお知らせください。

修正後
それらは、私が受領した商品と似ています。イーベイのサイトをチェック、これよりも遥かに素晴らしい商品を３点選択しました。G-63, G-64 G-65です。重量の総計は、１，１００グラムです。
これらは、より強固且つスラグ及び鋳鉄で埋められていないようです。
貴方が送付した２つを箱詰めし、出荷後、ご連絡します。
受け取った際、これら３商品に問題がない場合、重量の差をお支払いします。リヨ。

今回の商品に問題がなければ、貴方からさらに剃刀を購入します。
既に、３種の剃刀を選択しておりますが、今回の注文を受け取った後、再注文します。
再注文するか否かは、Rサイトウのロゼットの鋭さにより決定します。
出荷後、追跡のために登録されたレター番号をお知らせください。

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

修正後
I am not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the websites such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add a specific website by ourselves?

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.↵
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

修正後
I am not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it well, but for example, can you add websites such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube, iTunes and the like?
Or is it extremely difficult to add a specific website by myself?

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

修正後
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add a website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add a specific website by ourselves?

元の翻訳
Thank you for providing K10U.
I will use it for the reference in the future.
However, I have not received K10U yet.
I am in charge of product specialist of NIJ.
As I do not have the K10U and I am waiting for a request of support from artists, I would be glad if you
work on it as promptly as possible.
As I have been asking that you provide KKS49, have you received my message?
As for the KKS49, only the amount necessary for me is enough.

I can complete the work on Wednesday.

修正後
Thank you for providing K10U.
I will use it for the reference in the future.
However, I have not received K10U yet.
I am also in charge of product specialist of NIJ.
As I do not have the K10U I am waiting for a request of support from artists, I would be glad if you
work on it as promptly as possible.
Also I have been asking that you provide KKS49, have you received my message?
As for the KKS49, only the amount necessary for me is enough.

I should be able to complete the work on Wednesday.

元の翻訳
お返事ありがとうございました。ドキュメントをレビューしましたが、残念ながら、１ページ及び２ページにイニシャルが付いておりませんでした。申請を進めるため、両ページの下部にイニシャルをご記入後、速やかにご返送ください。お返事お待ちします。

貴販売会社の口座のために私へリンクをご送付ください。そうすれば、貴方が提供する多種の商品を拝見できます。
よろしく。

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お返事ありがとうございました。書類を確認しましたが、残念ながら、１ページ及び２ページに貴方のイニシャルが付いておりませんでした。申請を進めるため、両ページの下部にイニシャルをご記入後、速やかにご返送ください。お返事お待ちします。

貴販売会社の口座のために私へリンクをご送付ください。そうすれば、貴方が提供する多種の商品を拝見できます。
よろしく。

元の翻訳
株式により制限されたパートナーシップであるCペイメンツ欧州は、ルクセンブルグに登録された会社です。登録番号は、B○○○であり、その所在地は５ルー・パラティス、L-○○○ルクセンブルグです。VAT番号は、LU○○○です。Cペイメンツ欧州は、電子マネーの発行会社として財政監査委員会により承認されています（ライセンス番号36/10)。

ペイメンツC UK・アンド・ペイメンツは、Cペイメンツ欧州Bの商標名です。

修正後
株式により制限されたパートナーシップであるCペイメンツ欧州は、ルクセンブルグに登録された会社です。登録番号は、B○○○であり、その所在地は５ルー・パラティス、L-○○○ルクセンブルグです。VAT番号は、LU○○○です。Cペイメンツ欧州は、電子マネーの発行会社としてルクセンブルク金融監督委員会により承認されています（ライセンス番号36/10)。

ペイメンツC UK・アンド・ペイメンツは、Cペイメンツ欧州Bの商標名です。

元の翻訳
We do not purchase from eBay. May we purchase from you directly?

You do not have to pay for the fee of sales as we do not do business via eBay.
For this reason, could you please sell at 156 dollars that is 25 percent discount from the regular price?

We have many companies to which we sell the items in Japan.
If we can carry out the business with you, we are sure that we can contribute to you in making a profit tremendously.
The reason is that we will definitely purchase from you more and more every month.

If you can purchase from the manufacturers directly, we would like to ask you to give us more discount if we purchase more.

修正後
Would it be possible for us to purchase from you directly, instead of buying via eBay?

You do not have to pay for the fee of sales as we do not do business via eBay.
For this reason, could you please sell at 156 dollars that is 25 percent discount from the regular price?

We have many companies to which we sell the items in Japan.
If we can carry out the business with you, we are sure that we can contribute to you in making a profit tremendously.
The reason is that we will definitely purchase from you more and more every month.

If you can purchase from the manufacturers directly, we would like to ask you to give us more discount if we purchase more.

元の翻訳
However, you misunderstand it. I have not hired a fake person and raised the bidding price. I wonder why you thought so? As you can understand if you see the history of the bidding, the bidding price of the 2nd and the 3rd are 29 dollars and 27 dollars respectively.

You had won the bidding of my sword before. At that time, you said hello to me in Japanese and I was very happy about it.
I am not good at English at all, and cannnot explain well in many cases(I usually use the translation at free of charge, but this sentence is translated by paying).
I have not taken an illegal act at all. I would like to prove it, but I don't know how to do it.

修正後
However, you are misunderstanding. I have not hired a fake buyer and raised the bidding price. I wonder why you thought so. As you can understand from the history of the bidding, the bidding prices of the 2nd and the 3rd are 29 dollars and 27 dollars respectively.

You won the bidding of my sword before. At that time, you said hello to me in Japanese and I was very happy at it.
I am not good at English at all, and often cannnot explain well about the situation (I usually use a translation service for free of charge, but I paid for the translation for this sentence).
I have never cheated. I would like to prove it, but I don't know how to do it.

元の翻訳
It is foolish that we have 20 percent rework in order to increase the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is an assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use the wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set the assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

修正後
It is foolish that we face 20 percent of rework in order to decrease the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is the assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set an assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

元の翻訳
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)↵
I go to hospital again.

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I was hit by a bicycle again...
Why people like me so much?!
Why do they hit me...
It was such a confusion as the police and ambulance came by!
[Shoko flew in the air] Now I have to attend a hospital again...

元の翻訳
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion such as the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.

修正後
I was attacked by bicycle again.
People like me.
Why do they attack me?
It was a great confusion with the police and ambulance.
(Shoko flew into the sky.)
I go to hospital again.