スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
商品番号２９１５の複数のフックについて工場の弊チームが述べたところによると、ホックが「ねばねば」する場合、ホックの両面を３，４回押すことで修正でき、柔軟性が戻ります。また、塗布の過程においてインクが固まることがありますが、数回の使用後、柔軟性が１００％となります。

本状況が貴方が察知した問題に匹敵するとは信じたくないのですが、貴方に周知していただきたいのは、今後も、顧客からこの類の問題が提起される可能性があることです。ホックについてこの類の問題は多発していないようですが、貴顧客の品質に対する敏感さから、貴方の懸念を緩和するためにお伝えします。

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商品番号２９１５の複数のフックについて工場の弊社チームが述べたところによると、フックが「固まっている」場合、フックを３，４回開け閉めするで修正でき、動きがよくなります。また、塗装の過程においてインクが固まることがありますが、数回の使用後、フックの動きは問題なくなります。

弊社が確認している状況が、貴方がご報告くださった問題に匹敵するほど深刻だとは思えませんが、貴方に確認いただきたいのは、今後も、あなたの顧客からこの類の問題が提起されるかどうかです。フックについてこの類の問題は多発していないようですが、貴顧客の品質に対する敏感さから、貴方の懸念を緩和するためにお伝えします。

元の翻訳
I am interested in this item.
Have you not opened this item? Or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
May I see the picture in whole aspects(front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

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I am interested in this item.
Is this item unopened, or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
May I see the picture in whole aspects (front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I am interested in this item.
Have you not opened this item? Or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
May I see the picture in whole aspects(front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

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I am interested in this item.
Have you not opened this item? Or have you already opened it by removing the seal?
Does it have all attachments?
Can I see the picture in the whole aspects(front, side and back)?
I will look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
We are looking for a person who can use file exchange on eBay and understand Japanese. We ask you to input the items on the website into the file by using CSV or Excel.

We have 10,000 items. We would like you to take 1 test before making a contract. We will send an address of the website and file, so please let us know the necessary information. After we check the contents of inputting, we will contact you.
After checking the uploading on eBay, we will pay for you.
The number of item is 10,000. We have other candidates, and please let us know the remuneration for inputting 100 items.

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We are looking for a person who can use file exchange on eBay and understand Japanese. We ask you to input the items on the website into the file by using CSV or Excel.

We have 10,000 items. We would like you to take one test before making a contract. We will send an address of the website and file, so please let us know the necessary information. After we check the contents of inputting, we will contact you.
After checking the uploading on eBay, we will pay for you.
The number of item is 10,000. We have other candidates, and please let us know the remuneration for inputting 100 items.

元の翻訳
I order 50,000 pieces of 2 milliliters vial bottle.
Please tell me how to arrange them and when you are going to deliver them.

Could you support sending them to Japan?
If you can, I would like to know the approximate shipping charge.

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I am ordering 50,000 pieces of 2 milliliters vial bottle.
Please tell me how to arrange for them and when you are going to deliver them.

Could you support sending them to Japan?
If you can, I would like to know the approximate shipping charge.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
お支払いは、いつ、なさいますか。

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こんにちは。
お支払いはいつごろ手配していただけますか？

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
お支払いは、いつ、なさいますか。

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こんにちは。
お支払いはいつですか？

元の翻訳
DHL、フェデラルエクスプレス及びUPSに適用しますが、大型の貨物及びパレット貨物は含まれません。
大型の貨物は、縦、横及び幅の合計が１０８インチ（２７４センチ）を超える貨物を意味します。
価格の保証は、保険、危険物の費用、関税、その他の税などのような付加またはオプショナルなサービスを含みません。
価格の比較は、２０１４年１１月現在の比較サービスに依拠します。本オファーは、２０１４年１２月３１日まで有効です。

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DHL、フェデラルエクスプレス及びUPSに適用しますが、大型の貨物及びパレット貨物は含まれません。
大型の貨物は、縦、横及び高さの合計が１０８インチ（２７４センチ）を超える貨物を意味します。
TruePrice価格保証は、保険、危険物の費用、関税、その他の税などのような追加または自由選択サービスを含みません。
価格の比較は、２０１４年１１月現在の同等のサービスに依拠します。今回の価格ご提案は、２０１４年１２月３１日まで有効です。

元の翻訳
I purchased it from your store.
As it is a present, we ask you not to send it with the item that shows the price such as an invoice.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I purchased it from your store.
As it is a gift, we ask you to make sure that the package does not include anything indicating the price, such as an invoice.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I checked it and found that there was a mistake in the volume in the explanation of Amazon.
We will refund the shipping charge and price of the item.
You can keep the item where the volume of the item was explained by mistake.
We apologize that we cannot send it to you.
Thank you for using our store.

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We checked it and found out that there was a mistake in the volume in the explanation of Amazon.
We will refund the shipping charge and price of the item asap.
You can keep the item which the volume of the item was wrong.
We apologize that we cannot send it to you.
Thank you for using our store.

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We hate to say, but we do not know how to use the item in detail and its element.
If you worry about it, could you please cancel it today?
Thank you for using our store.

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We hate to say, but we do not know the details in regards to the use and the ingredients.
If you worry about it, could you please cancel your order by the end of today?
Thank you for shopping with us.

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When you came back from the vacation, please let me know.
Then I will make an arrangement for sending it.
We ask you to pay in advance.

The shipping charge is 23.51 dollars.

Good day!
Thank you for purchasing a few days ago.
If you like, I purchased 5 pieces of ○○from Fuji Film.
They are the last 5. As you sent a message to me in the past, would you like to purchase it?

If you need it, I will list it in eBay.

Thank you.

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When you came back from the vacation, please let me know.
Then I will make an arrangement for sending it.
We ask you to pay in advance.

The shipping charge is 23.51 dollars.

Good day!
Thank you for purchasing a few days ago.
You maybe have an interest? I purchased 5 pieces of ○○from Fuji Film.
They are the last 5. As you sent a message to me in the past, would you like to purchase them?

If you need it, I will list it in eBay.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am interested in Qatar. It is because it is a club that provokes a sensational topics in the horse race world with a new concept all the time. A few days ago, it dominated a topic in the Japanese auction, and as a top sponsor of Triumphal Gateway Prize, the sensational race must have impressed the fans of the horse race all over the world. The reason is that it is the best joy in life if we can experience the best experience with the Qatar racing club that aims to be the top in the world.

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I am interested in Qatar. It is because it is a club that provokes a sensational topics in the horse race world with a newest concept right now. A few days ago, it dominated a topic in the Japanese auction, and as a top sponsor of Triumphal Gateway Prize, the sensational race must have impressed the fans of the horse race all over the world. The reason is that it is the best joy in life if we can experience the best experience with the Qatar racing club that aims to be the top in the world.

元の翻訳
By using an experience of acupuncture treatment for 35 years, I am confident that I can contribute to increase the performance of the jockeys who are agonized with the ache at the waist and injury. I am also sure that I can devote myself to maintenance of the horse like the human beings. If I am given a chanve to treat as a trial, I would like to go to Qatar and demonstrate the acupuncture treatment.
Needless to say, as it is a trial, I will pay for the expense for treatment and all the expenses related thereto.
If we agree each other, I would like to execute an agreement.
Thank you for reading it to the last.

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By using an experience of acupuncture treatment for 35 years, I am confident that I can contribute to increase the performance of the jockeys who are agonized with the ache at the waist and injury. I am also sure that I can devote myself to maintenance of the horse like the human beings. If I am given a chanve to treat as a trial, I would like to go to Qatar and demonstrate the acupuncture treatment.
Needless to say, as it is a trial, I will pay for the expense for treatment and all the expenses related thereto.
If we both agree with each other, I would like to make a contract with you.
Thank you for reading it to the end.(/Thank you for taking the time to read.)

元の翻訳
I am sorry that you have to come several times.
I also appreciate you.

As I submitted a report of the loss that I suffered, I will handle it by myself hereafter.

Please return the item.
I will refund as soon as I receive it.

The delivery company at your side will contact you regarding the creation of a
report about the loss.
I hope that you will cooperate with it.

I apologize that you asked you to work repeatedly.
If I can be of your help in the future, please do not hesitate to let me know.

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I am sorry that you have to come several times.
I also appreciate your coperation.

As I submitted a report of the loss, I will handle it by myself hereafter.

Please return the item.
I will refund as soon as I receive it.

The delivery company at your side will contact you regarding the creation of a
report about the loss.
I hope that you will cooperate with it.

I apologize that you asked you to work repeatedly.
If I can be of your help in the future, please do not hesitate to let me know.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the item so promptly.
Then we can start the press release and other events seriously.

We have several questions.
How many can you provide to us a month at maximum?
On the Facebook, I found an item whose outside was made of aluminium.
Are you goint to change it to that?
You have a new color. Congratulations! The white is good.
In Japan, people love orange and gold, so we ask you to consider them.

We would be glad if you let us know in case where you are going to develop a new stages such as new colors and change of design, etc.

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Thank you for sending the item so promptly.
Then we can launch the pre-release and other events in full scale.

Let me ask you a few questions.
How much quantity can you provide to us in a month at maximum?
On the Facebook, I found an item whose outer box was made of aluminium.
Are you going to change it to that?
You have a new color. Congratulations! The white one is good.
In Japan, people love orange and gold colors, so we ask you to consider them.

We would be glad if you let us know if you are going to proceed to a new stage such as new colors and changes of design, etc.

元の翻訳
署名済みの書類をご提示いただきありがとうございます。申請のプロセスを進めます。ご質問がある場合、遠慮なくお尋ねください。

貴方の申請及びその停止の承認を確認しました。本申請の承認に先立ち、全支払いが電送により受領される旨をお知らせします。その理由は、クレジットカードが米国以外の住所に登録されているからです。１回の電送に２０ドルの手数料がかかります。これらの条件に同意される場合、お返事ください。貴方のお返事受領後、貴方は、メールにより、ディーラーのログイン、パスワード及び高解像度の写真を受け取るでしょう。

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署名済みの書類をご提示いただきありがとうございます。申請手続きを進めます。ご質問がある場合、遠慮なくお尋ねください。

貴方の申請及びその保留中の承認を確認しました。本申請の承認に先立ち、全支払いが電送により受領される必要がある旨をお知らせします。その理由は、クレジットカードが米国以外の住所に登録されているからです。１回の電送に２０ドルの手数料がかかります。これらの条件に同意される場合、お返事ください。貴方のお返事受領後、貴方は、メールにより、ディーラーのログイン、パスワード及び高解像度の写真を受け取るでしょう。

元の翻訳
署名済みの書類をご提示いただきありがとうございます。申請のプロセスを進めます。ご質問がある場合、遠慮なくお尋ねください。

貴方の申請及びその停止の承認を確認しました。本申請の承認に先立ち、全支払いが電送により受領される旨をお知らせします。その理由は、クレジットカードが米国以外の住所に登録されているからです。１回の電送に２０ドルの手数料がかかります。これらの条件に同意される場合、お返事ください。貴方のお返事受領後、貴方は、メールにより、ディーラーのログイン、パスワード及び高解像度の写真を受け取るでしょう。

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署名済みの書類をご提示いただきありがとうございます。申請のプロセスを進めます。ご質問がある場合、遠慮なくお尋ねください。

貴方の申請及びその承認の一時保留を確認しました。本申請の承認のためには、全支払いが振込される必要がある旨をお知らせします。その理由は、クレジットカードが米国以外の住所に登録されているからです。１回の振込に２０ドルの手数料がかかります。これらの条件に同意される場合、お返事ください。貴方のお返事受領後、貴方は、メールにより、ディーラーのログイン、パスワード及び高解像度の写真を受け取るでしょう。

元の翻訳
We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company to send it by air maill on weekend today?
In the accident where it was delayed in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
For this reason, if possible, could you give a discount for the item that we order the next time?

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We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange delivery to send it by air mail on weekend today?
Due to this delayed delivery, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the items.
For this reason, if possible, could you give us some discount for the items that we order the next time?