金子　傑 (sugurukaneko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
*All transactions are final and not refundable.　If some products are damaged, you can exchange them.
*If you bring child who aged 3 years and older, you need his or her ticket separately.
*You cannot stay the venue all of the night, for neighborhood might be bothered. If someone commit an offense against decency, live concert will be canceled.
*You have to pay your own transportation and accommodation expenses.

修正後
*All transactions are final and not refundable. If some products are damaged, you can exchange them.
*If you bring child who aged 3 years or older, you will need his or her ticket separately.
*You cannot stay the venue all of the night, for neighborhood might be bothered. If someone commit an offense against decency, live concert will be canceled.
*You have to pay your own transportation and accommodation expenses.

元の翻訳
これが人口動勢、コワーキング（事務所スペース、会議室、打ち合わせスペースなどを共有しながら独立した仕事を行う共働ワークスタイル）が行われている場所、VCs、そして"Rozee.pk"や"Pakwheels.com"など成功した企業の統計を示すインフォグラフィックです。

情報：アダムさんはかつて"Daraz.pk"の従業員、プロダクトマネージャとして６ヶ月以上働いていました。どうぞ私達の倫理声明を追加情報にてご覧になってください。

このようなインフォグラフィックに興味がありましたら、これまでのインフォグラフィックシリーズがまとめてありますのでご覧になってください。

修正後
これが人口動勢、コワーキング（事務所スペース、会議室、打ち合わせスペースなどを共有しながら独立した仕事を行う共働ワークスタイル）が行われている場所、主要なVC、そして"Rozee.pk"や"Pakwheels.com"など成功した企業の統計を示すインフォグラフィックです。

情報：アダムさんはかつて"Daraz.pk"の従業員、プロダクトマネージャとして６ヶ月以上働いていました。どうぞ私達の倫理声明を追加情報にてご覧になってください。

このようなインフォグラフィックに興味がありましたら、これまでのインフォグラフィックシリーズがまとめてありますのでご覧になってください。

元の翻訳
Japan Exhibition Association held the third "Business Forum 2013" in Mainabi room.

This forum was to stimulate japanese trade fair and exhibition and to improve workers' skill, so a lot of programs are composed. This forum is held 5 times annually.

The third forum was about exhibitions held in foreign countries. Speakers were Mr. Terada, JETRO's officer, Mr. Terazawa, manager of Makuhari Messe, and Mr. Kakinuma, SMRJ's officer. About 30 people participated.
After the forum, social gathering was held.

修正後
Japan Exhibition Association held the third "Business Forum 2013" in Mainabi Room.

This forum was to stimulate japanese trade fair and exhibition and to improve workers' skill, so a lot of programs are composed. This forum is held 5 times annually.

The third forum was about exhibitions held in foreign countries. Speakers were Mr. Terada, JETRO's officer, Mr. Terazawa, manager of Makuhari Messe, and Mr. Kakinuma, SMRJ's officer. About 30 people participated.
After the forum, social gathering was held.

元の翻訳
Thank you for message.
I asked company about the product.

This is answers you asked.
-this product does not include BPA.
-resistance temperature is C.120 (F.248). Therefore, you can safely use water, c.100.

I hope these answer can be useful for you.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
I asked the company about the product.

These are answers to the questions you asked.
-this product does not include BPA.
-resistance temperature is C.120 (F.248). Therefore, you can safely use water, c.100.

I hope these answer can be useful for you.