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Thank you for offering us a wholesale price and sending the list of prices. There are some items I would like to purchase and I will contact you again later on. Could you please let me know once you find out the charge for the 5 players to be shipped to Japan?

In addition, thank you for the warranty. It helps a lot. Does that mean that if I pay the transaction and repair fee, I can get my customer’s player repaired by shipping it to your company?

If you need anything, please let know. We look forward to doing business with you.

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Thank you for offering us a wholesale price and sending the list of prices. There are some items I would like to purchase and I will contact you again later on. Could you please let me know once you find out the charge for 5 players to be shipped to Japan?

In addition, thank you for the warranty. It helps a lot. Does that mean that if I pay the transaction and repair fee, I can get my customer’s player repaired by shipping it to your company?

If you need anything, please let know. We look forward to doing business with you.

元の翻訳
Price quotation

Hello, please provide price quotation.

The address in Japan is as follows;

I have never been to Netherland. And I am neither a student, nor have done any translation work. It’s probably a mistake.

Thank you.

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Price quotation

Hello, please provide price quotation.

The address in Japan is as follows;

I have never been to the Netherlands. And I am neither a student, nor have I done any translation work. You had probably gotten the wrong person.

Thank you.

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In addition, if you agree to do the business directly, please send future email to below address (because eBay prohibits such direct transactions).

If we do it directly, I’d cancel the bid on eBay as mutually agreed cancellation.

Of course I can do it on eBay as well. In that case the price would be $550.

Please let me know whether you prefer to do it on eBay or directly.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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In addition, if you agree to do the business directly, please send future email to the address listed below (because eBay prohibits such direct transactions).

If we do it directly, I will cancel the bid on eBay as mutually agreed cancellation.

Of course I can do it on eBay as well. In that case the price would be $550.

Please let me know whether you would prefer to do it on eBay or directly.

I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I realize you have shopped at our store just recently.

Sorry I was busy and did not notice.

Since you’ve purchased once, we can reduce the price of （商品名）to $540 (including the cost to ship with EMS) if we can do the transaction without going through eBay.

In that case, I will send an invoice via PayPal and then you will make a payment.

Or we can register the item at our online store and ask you to make payment there. ↵

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I realized you have shopped at our store just recently.

Sorry I was busy and did not notice.

Since you've purchased from us once, we can reduce the price of （商品名）to $540 (including the cost to ship with EMS) if we can do the transaction without going through eBay.

If you accept, I can send an invoice via PayPal and then you can make the payment.

Alternatively we can register the item at our online store and ask you to make payment there.