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元の翻訳
普段HMRCは私たちに送る小切手を発行し、それを私たちがあなたへお送りしています。もう一つの方法としては私たちがHMRCにお願いして次の申告のためにあなたの口座にVAT残高を残してもらうこともできます。

どちらの方法がいいか確定をお願いいたします。

修正後
普段は、HMRCが私たち宛てに発行した小切手を、私たちからあなたへお送りしています。もう一つの方法としては、私たちがHMRCにお願いして次の申告のためにあなたの口座にVAT残高を残してもらうこともできます。

どちらの方法がいいかご確認をお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiry.

We have contacted USPS about the shipping status. They told us that it is difficult to redeliver the package because it was returned as address unknown.

If we re-ship the package to you after it was returned to us, it might take about three to five weeks to be delivered to you.

I understand that you order was expedite order so we will cancel this order and refund your money.

If we do not receive any replay from you within 24 hours, we will start processing your refund.

Thank you very much for your corporation.

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Thank you for inquiry.

We have contacted USPS about the shipping status. They told us that it is difficult to redeliver the package because it was returned as address unknown.

If we re-ship the package to you after it was returned to us, it might take about three to five weeks to be delivered to you.

I understand that you order was expedite so we will cancel this order and refund your money.

If we do not receive any replay from you within 24 hours, we will start processing your refund.

Thank you very much for your corporation.

元の翻訳
I contacted customer support regarding this matter.
This product is to help grow healthy hair.
You can expect the effect and potency such as "hair growth, anti-thinning, anti-itch, prevention of hair loss, emergence of hair, promoting hair growth, anti-dandruff, prevention of hair loss after illness and child delivery".
Please note that the nature of this product is mainly prevention purpose and not a treatment.

Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
This time the shipping was made via SAL so there is no tracking number.
I would appreciate if you can wait for a little longer for the product to arrive.
I am certain that the product will arrive without any problem but if you have any question or concerns, please contact me.

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I contacted customer support regarding this matter.
This product is to help growing healthy hair.
You can expect effects and potencies such as "hair growth, anti-thinning, anti-itch, prevention of hair loss, emergence of hair, promoting hair growth, anti-dandruff, prevention of hair loss after illness and child delivery".
Please note that the nature of this product is mainly prevention purpose and not a treatment.

Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
This time the shipping was made via SAL so there is no tracking number.
I would appreciate if you could wait for a little longer for the product to arrive.
I am certain that the product will arrive without any problem but if you have any question or concerns, please contact me.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I bought the product on Amazon.com the other day.
There was no problem on the movement but there were no warranty form and operation manual included. Will you please send me the warranty form and the operation manual?
The address is Japan.

Also, How long is the warranty period?

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Hello.
I bought the product on Amazon.com the other day.
It worked fine but the warranty and the instruction manual were not included. Will you please send me the warranty certificate and the instruction manual?
The address is Japan.

Also, how long is the warranty period?

元の翻訳
I would like to check two things.

1. I have a female acquaintance who is interested in working at the BAR. She is a college senior and used to live abroad so her English skill is excellent. She would like to check if it is possible to work once a week (Monday or Wednesday) when other staff are not working. I told her about the BAR already.

2. I can not confirm the payment of my salary for this month. Please arrange the payment as soon as possible since I have rent and other expenses to pay.

Thank you very much for your response.

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I would like to check two things.

1. I have a female acquaintance who is interested in working at the BAR. She is a college senior and used to live abroad so her English skill is excellent. She would like to check if it is possible to work once a week (Monday or Wednesday) when other staffs are not working. I told her about the BAR already.

2. I haven't been able to confirm the payment of my salary for this month. Please settle the payment as soon as possible since I have rent and other living expenses to pay.

Thank you very much for your kind attention.

元の翻訳
We are deeply sorry for the inconveniences we have caused to you and the buyers.
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The problem is that the late response which is your k preparation went up over 10 %.
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As a countermeasure, first of all we have answered all of your inquiry which we received so far.
The reason behind this problem was that the employee who was in charge of the email responses was also in charge of other tasks and that delayed the email responses.
In order to solve this problem, we have hired another employee whose task is only to response email inquires.
From now on with this structure, we will do our best to prevent the recurrence of the problem and aspire for customer satisfaction.

修正後
We are deeply sorry for the inconvenience we have caused to you and the buyers.
The problem is that the late response which is your k preparation exceeded 10 %.
In handling this, first of all we have answered all of your inquiries we have received thus far.
As to the reason behind this problem, the employee who was in charge of the email responses was also in charge of other tasks and that delayed the email responses.
We have employed another employee whose task is only to response email inquires and this should solve the issue.
Under this system we will from here on out we will do everything in our power to prevent the recurrence of such issues and aim to increase customer satisfaction.

元の翻訳
I wanted to win your item on eBay but the setting did not allow shipment except for England and the United States.

Therefore, I won this item by using your British address.

If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal.

When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time.

I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on.

Below is my shipping address. ↵

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I wanted to win your item on eBay but the terms did not allow shipment except for England and the United States.

Therefore, I won this item by using your British address.

If the charge is not enough, please send me an invoice via Paypal.

When I bought your item last time, there was no problem with shipping to Japan so I would like to have the same shipping methods as last time.

I am planning to purchase items from you on a regular basis from now on.

Below is my shipping address.