Rajashree Deo (rsdje) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
1) Is it possible to do sell in Japan ?
2) Is it possible to do wholesale selling ?
3) What would be approximate delivery time ?
4) Please let us know the payment method.
5) Is is possible to return the received defective products ?
We look forward for your reply.

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1) Is it possible to sell in Japan ?
2) Is it possible to wholesale ?
3)How long would be approximate delivery time ?
4) Please tell us the way to pay.
5) Is is possible to return the defective products in a such case of incidence of defects?
We are looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Myself Suzuki from Life Design , Japan.

Thank you very much for showing products at IHGF , on the other day.
I am back to Japan now.
Please send us the requested samples and invoice.
I forgot to ask one thing, is it possible to make a display tag with good quality in India ?
If it is possible, then please let us know the print size , we will create the design data and send it back to you.

I will email you the design pattern later on.
I hope we will be able to do a good business deal with your company.


※ Please send your reply to both , (SUZUKI) and (ANUSHKA).

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I'm Suzuki from Life Design in Japan.

Thank you very much for showing products at IHGF , on the other day.
I came back to Japan now.
Please send us the requested samples and invoice.
I forgot to ask one thing, is it possible to make a quality indication tag with in India ?
If it is possible, then please let us know the print size , we will create the design data and send it to you.

I will email you the design pattern later on.
I hope we will be able to do a good business deal with your company.


※ Please send your reply to both , (SUZUKI) and (ANUSHKA).

元の翻訳
I will wait for some time.
I am thinking to buy the same product which I have ordered previously.
I would like to order 5 units of the same.
Do you have it in stock ?
If it is available in stock, I would like to order it together with other product(s), it would be appreciable if you could reduce the price.
Thank you very much.

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I will wait for a little more time.
I am thinking to buy the same product as I have ordered previously.
I would like to order 5 units of the same.
Do you have them in stock ?
If it is available in stock, I would like to order them with other product(s). So I would be appreciate if you could cut the price.
Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your offer.
I will send it in a few days.
In addition, we have a new order in next week.
I'd like to order the following products, do you have them in stock?
Thanks in advance.

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Thank you for your offer.
I will send it in a few days.
Also I will have a new order by next week.
Especially I'd like to order the following products. Do you have them in stock?
Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
Good to know that fund transfer is confirmed.
Please do support in case we need to do the development again.

Thanks for your continuous support.

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Good to know that fund transfer is confirmed.
Please do support in case we need to do the development again.

Thanks for your continuous support in advance.

元の翻訳
ようろしです、私たちは、フォッシル錫箱の中でカウタさんの時計を送ります。
私は、ウタさんが前のご注文を受け取っており、すべてがだいじょうぶだと思います。

ありがとうございます。

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問題ありません、私たちは、フォッシルブリキ箱の中にコウタさんの時計を入れて配送します。
コウタさんが以前のご注文を受け取っていれば、全く問題ないと思います。

ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
私はあなたのためにゴプロと私の順番にこれらのアクセサリーを追加します。あなたはどのような他の米国のメーカーについて求めている？

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私はあなたのためにゴプロと私の注文にこれらのアクセサリーを追加します。他に米国のメーカーはどんなものを求めていますか？