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<I really wanted my daughter to see the show this time.>
It was my second time to see this show. I was impressed when I saw this with my wife for the first time. I really wanted to show this to my daughter, and all three of us were able to make up our schedule for this. Obviously, there was a scene where my daughter was moved to tears. In addition, both my wife and daughter love to be taken photos in Korean costumes, and they did it this time again. They were able to take time for the photo shoot because we got there earlier than we were supposed to. They shot two different styles with additional charge... The atmosphere around the theatre was good and we were able to take time to enjoy ourselves in a café inside the area. It became a good memory.

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<I really wanted my daughter to see the show this time.>
It was my second time to see this show. I was impressed when I saw this with my wife for the first time on our last visit. I really wanted to show this to my daughter, and all three of us were able to make up our schedule for this. Obviously, there was a scene where my daughter was moved to tears. In addition, both my wife and my daughter love to have photos taken in Korean costumes, and they did it this time again. They were able to take time for the photo shoot because we got there earlier than we were supposed to. They shot two different styles with additional charge... The atmosphere around the theatre was good and we were able to take time to enjoy ourselves in a café on the premises. It became a good memory.

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I received three units of the above-mentioned product, but of the three,
one of them has no lens cap included.
I would like a refund for this part please.

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I received three units of the above-mentioned product, but of the three,
one had no lens cap included.
I would like a refund for this part please.

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Thank you for the questions.

I do not have those items.

As you may know, those packs and boxes are very unusual and can be hard to find in any Japanese store or auction sites. But if I have the chance, I will be buying them.

I will be selling them　whenever I find them.
Please check my ebay site from time to time.
Although I may not have a number of items, I do have a selection of unusual goods.

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Thank you for the questions.

I do not have those items.

As you may know, those packs and boxes are very rare and hard to find in any Japanese stores or auction sites. But if I get a chance, I will buy them.

I will put them up on sale once I acquire them.
Please check my ebay site from time to time.
Although I may not have a large number of items, I do have a selection of rare items.

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I am a buyer who purchased one of your products. When it arrived, it was broken. As a provider you should guarantee your products' safe delivery. I would like a refund.

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I am a buyer who purchased one of your products. When it arrived, it was broken. As a provider, you should take steps to compensate for the loss. You should provide me with a partial refund.

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Home | About book condition
[Representation of book condition] Conditions are rated from A-D
A (Good) -> D (Bad)

A: In very good condition. Almost like new with no taints.
B: Good condition. Taints from aging are present but there is no distinctive defects.
C: Average condition. There are some noticeable taints or writing, but no missing pages.
D: Bad condition. Missing or torn pages are present.

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Home | About book condition
[Representation of book condition] Conditions are rated from A-D
A (Good) -> D (Bad)

A: In very good condition. Almost like new with no taints.
B: Good condition. Taints from aging are present but there is no distinctive defects.
C: Average condition. There are some noticeable taints or writings, but no missing pages.
D: Bad condition. Missing or torn pages are present.

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I have been waiting for the product that I had purchased from you,
but I have not received it yet.

I want to you to refund all amount.

If I cannot agree with your answer,or
if I decide that confirmation of refunding processing takes longer than 45 days from payment day,↵
I regret to say that I will report it to Paypal.

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I have been waiting for the product that I had purchased from you,
but I have not received it yet as of today.

I want you to refund in full amount.

If I cannot agree with your explanation, or
if I decide that confirmation of refunding process takes longer than 45 days from the date of the payment, I regret to say that I will report it to Paypal.

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We are looking forward see you again after a long period of time.

The attached file is descriptions for 3-day meetings. The meeting will be started when all the members are gathered ( probably around 1:00PM) due to this reason, the starting time of this meeting has not been settled yet.
If it's possible, we would like to have a brief meeting with you, we would be much appreciated if you could let us know your availability.↵
I will arrive at the NY Airport in 10:30, then will be NY little later than 12:00.

As Mr. Tanaka informed you this meeting will be very important because there would be a lot of issues will be raising along with the A company will become a stockholder of the C company, therefore your support would be necessary for us.

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We are looking forward to seeing you again after a long period of time.

Attached is the outline for the meeting on the 3rd. The time is not set as the meeting starts when all the members are gathered (probably around 1:00PM).
If it's possible, we would like to see you briefly prior to the meeting. We would appreciate it if you could let us know your availability. I will arrive at the NY Airport at 10:30, and then in NY little later than 12:00.

As Mr. Tanaka informed you, this meeting is very important because we would be discussing on various issues resulting from A company becoming a stockholder of the C company. Therefore, we would count on your support.

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and seem you had a lot of experiences to translate, so would you please do a job for me?↵
The job is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And the links are to show the results of each one translator's translations between English-Russian language. Please see the translation results and evaluate those with 1-6 stages. You do not have to adjust those.
Due to the translators, there are many translations, therefore it would be OK to just confirm the translations of 2,3.↵
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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Hello,
I saw your profile and you seem to have a lot of experiences in translation. So I would like to offer you a job? It is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And each link shows the work of a translator in English-Russian language. Please take a look at the translations and evaluate them in scale of 1-6. You do not have to make any corrections.
Some translators work on more than one so it would be OK to just confirm a couple of them. If you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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thank you for sending me the invoice
I have checked the contents.
The product of 1 which have color of.. on the website.
Could I purchase it?
If it is possible, I want to buy 1 item
I wanted to buy the product of **which have color of cartridge and the color of body *** 1 item per kind of product of 2 &3 but could I change them?
The amount in the invoice you sent me and in the invoice which recorded when log in the web is different, So which is the correct? I want to pay as soon as possible
Thank you and best regards

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I have checked the contents.
The product 1 comes in ＊＊color on the website.
Could I purchase it?
If it is possible, I want to buy one.
As for the items 2 & 3, I would like to buy one of each in **for the main body and **for the cartridge but could I change my order?
The amount in the invoice you sent me and that on the invoice which I got by logging in the website are different. So which is correct? I want to pay as soon as possible.
Thank you and best regards,

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Thank you very much for your purchase and quick payment.
However, I have something to apoligize you.
I designated the way of shipping as EMS, and shipping cost as 85$, for some reason, such as system error of emay side, it seems that on your side it is displayed as free shipping.
I am very sorry.
In addition because in Kazakhstan EMS cannot be accepted, another way of shipping (Priority Mail International Parcels) is necessary, resulting in an even higher shipping cost.
I am very sorry, but could you please understand it by paying back?

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Thank you very much for your purchase and quick payment.
However, I have something to apologize to you.
I designated the shipping method as EMS, and shipping cost as $85.↵
However, due to the system error on ebay side or for some unknown reason, it seems that it is displayed as free shipping on your end.
I am very sorry for this confusion.
In addition, EMS cannot be accepted in Kazakhstan and another shipping method↵
（International Parcel Post $105) is necessary resulting in an even higher shipping cost.
I hope you would understand the situation. And could you cancel the transaction with full refund?

元の翻訳
A refined and great design.

I have the following requests.

1. It is made to want you to be able to set up the maximum of the file size which can be uploaded.
2. It is made to want you to be able to input the explanatory note of the uploaded file.
3. It is made to want you to be able to set up a subcategory or a tag.

Please refer to it.

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A refined and great design.

I have the following requests.

1. I'd like to set up the upper limit to the size of the file which can be uploaded.
2. I'd like to input the explanatory note of the uploaded files.
3. I'd like to set up a subcategory or a tag.

Just for your information.

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Certainly! I will send it to your address which you mentioned after I finish with painting.↵
would ESM shipping work for you? Though it costs a little more than regular shipping, I think it's better because it's faster and safer.
If you have any particular shipping you would prefer or anything you need in Japan, please don't hesitate to ask.

I'll send you e-mail when I'm ready for the shipping anyway.

So, you're having baby! Congratulations and wishing your baby's health and happiness!↵
Well, we can always have fun with making radio control parts, but the time you can see and enjoy, spend time with your child growing in NOW, and there will be never the same moment. I guess the radio control can wait,so we better postpone it for a while. LOL

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Certainly! I will send it to your address which you mentioned earlier after I finish with painting. Would EMS shipping work for you? Though it costs a little more than regular shipping, I think it's better because it's faster and safer.
If you have any particular shipping method you would prefer or anything you need in Japan, please don't hesitate to ask.

I'll send you an e-mail when I'm ready for shipping.

So, you're having a baby! Congratulations and wishing you for your baby's health and happiness! Well, we can always have fun with making radio control parts, but the time you spend and enjoy with your child growing is NOW, and there will never be the same moment. I guess the radio control can wait, so we better postpone it for a while. LOL

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the name and the price of the items that you sell well among Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、
FedExのアカウントナンバーをゲットしました。
このアイテムは先にFedEx経由であなたの住所に戻したので、この282475898.を使ってください。
書類は私たちに届きますので。
有難うございます。

こんにちは、もし宜しければ、このアイテムを先にあなたのところに戻してもいいのですか？
私は他のUSPSラベルを提供するので、またこのアイテムを私たちに送ってください。
登録名がFirstlampです。
コンタクト電話番号は3476539032です
ありがとうございます

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こんにちは、
FedExの口座を開設しました。
このアイテムはFedExのこの口座番号282475898を使ってまずあなたの所に返送してもらってください。
送料は私が負担します。
有難うございました。

こんにちは、もし宜しければ、このアイテムを先にあなたのところに返送してもらってもよろしいですか？
私は別のUSPSラベルを提供しますので、またこのアイテムを私たちに送ってください。
登録名がFirstlampです。
連絡先電話番号は3476539032です
ありがとうございました。

元の翻訳
良好な状態のビンテージスコット製モトクロス・スーパークロスブーツ。サイズ9インチ、留め金にも問題なし。ブーツは良好な状態にあります。ソールの写真を撮っていませんが、ほぼ新品同様です。ご要望があれば写真を掲載します。国内からの注文でしたらpaypal、国外からはebayを使用します。国外からのご注文の際は、是非ご連絡下さい。他に質問がございましたらご連絡下さい。当サイトでの評価は高いのでご心配なく。　よろしくお願いします―スコット

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良好な状態のビンテージスコット製モトクロス・スーパークロスブーツ、ブーティー付き（ブーティーにサイズ９インチと有り、ミディアムシェル）留め金にも問題なし。ブーツは良好な状態にあります。ソールの写真を撮っていませんが、ほぼ新品同様です。ご要望があれば写真を掲載します。国内からの注文でしたらpaypal、国外からはebayを使用します。国外からのご注文の際は、是非ご連絡下さい。他に質問がございましたらご連絡下さい。当サイトでの評価は高いのでご心配なく。　よろしくお願いします―スコット

元の翻訳
お返事が遅くなり申し訳ありません。週末にかけて仕事が忙しかったのです。婚約ムービーのビデオ編集を終えたところです。お待ちいただきありがとうございました。
本題に戻りますが、現在こちらの取引は断片的なものとして行っており、お金がほとんどないので他にも注文するつもりです。また、件の商品について、私の兄と友人からの支払も待っているところです。
今回の商品について、e-packetとEMSでどれくらいの配送料金になるか見積をいただけませんか？2kgを超過しますでしょうか？e-packetには5、6品程度が目安と聞いております。また、今回の商品に保険が適用されるかどうかお知らせ下さい。

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お返事が遅くなり申し訳ありません。週末にかけて仕事が忙しかったのです。婚約ムービーのビデオ編集を終えたところです。お待ちいただきありがとうございました。
本題に戻りますが、この先こちらの取引は断片的なものとなると思います。一括で支払うお金がないので他の注文は後になります。また、件の商品について、私の兄と友人からの支払を待っているところです。
今回の商品について、e-packetとEMSでどれくらいの配送料金になるか見積をいただけませんか？2kgを超過しますでしょうか？e-packetには5、6品程度が目安と聞いております。また、今回の商品に保険が適用されるかどうかお知らせ下さい。

元の翻訳
Customers are being adjusted internal towards the order. However, if we have fast delivery, there is a possibility that we may be ordered in bulk from customer.

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Customers are being adjusted internal towards the order. However, if we have fast delivery, there is a possibility that we may be ordered in bulk from customer. ↵
ただし、納期を急いでいないため。。。They are not in a rush to receive the merchandise↵
一括で発注されない可能性があります。。。they may not place the order all at once.