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It is very rare to have buddha statues with this much color remained from its original.

The statues located in the main hall that are not national treasures are designated as important cultural properties. Please check them out.

Walk around the grounds of the Muroji Temple.

Walking around the temple ground, you will come across the historical buildings that assimilate into its background of the greenery of the mountain.

Behind these buildings is a flight of long stone steps leading up to the five story pagoda. This pagoda, in fact, is the national treasure as well. It maybe the smallest among the five story pagodas in Japan that are built outside but the second oldest next to that of the Horyuji Temple.

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fr103704

It is very rare to have buddha statues with this much color remained from its original.

The statues located in the main hall that are not national treasures are designated as important cultural properties. Please check them out.

Walk around the grounds of the Muroji Temple.

Walking around the temple ground, you will come across the historical buildings that assimilate into its background of the greenery of the mountain.

Behind these buildings is a flight of long stone steps leading up to the five story pagoda. This pagoda, in fact, is the national treasure as well. It may be the smallest among the five story pagodas in Japan that are built outside but also is the second oldest next to that of the Horyuji Temple.

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A chisel for craftsmen and professionals, ebony finish, an inscription by the maker present, registered trade mark
Originally it was a set of ten but only six will be on sale as seen
These six will be enough to cover the general work
Width of the blades (size may not be exact)

Comic market 85 Limited edition on sale
A large cloth and A3 size original bag designed with"Akemi Homura, devil version" recently released by Jyunichirou Taniguchi
Very rare product any fan would want

19 figures including some unopened boxes
However, some boxes show some wear and tear from aging
Please check the condition as the images are attached

They are old blades. Some scratches and rusting are seen
Sharpen and polish before use

There is a trace of a sticker on the back

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A chisel for craftsmen and professionals, handle made from ebony,with an inscription by the maker, registered trade mark
Originally it was a set of ten but only six will be on sale as seen
These six will be enough to cover the general work
Width of the blades (size may not be exact)

Comic market 85 Limited edition on sale
A large cloth and A3 size original bag designed with"Akemi Homura, devil version" recently released by Jyunichirou Taniguchi
Very rare product any fan would want

19 figures including some unopened boxes
However, some boxes show some wear and tear from aging
Please check the condition as the images are attached

They are old blades. Some scratches and rusting are seen
Sharpen and polish before use

There is a trace of a sticker on the back

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まずスタッフに関しては、初めに小売りやファッション業界のバックグラウンドを持ち↵
マーチャンダイジングや顧客サービスの技術に優れた者に焦点をあてた。
そしてさらに、“データセンシティビティー”、つまりデータに関しても通じているスキルに長けている、つまりマーケティング、ユーザー体験、マーチャンダイジングともちろんITとファイナンスの人間のようにデータの扱いに強いスタッフ望んだ。　

現在では我々は以前にも増してCRM、そしてソーシャルネットワークの統合と収束に焦点を合わせてきている。

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スタッフに関しては、まず小売りやファッション業界のバックグラウンドを持ち広告や顧客サービスの技術に優れた者に焦点をあてた。
それから、いわゆる“データセンシティビティー”という技術分野を追加したが、こちらのスタッフにはマーケティング、ユーザー体験、広告の者、そしてもちろんデータの扱いに強いITやファイナンスの者が含まれる。　

現在は我々は以前にも増してCRM、そしてソーシャルネットワークの統合と収束に焦点を合わせている。

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我々のチャレンジであり、ITからクリエーティブまでチームとして再フォーカスし進めているのはモバイルファーストへの集中的アプローチである。　以前はデスクトップ用サイトの開発、アプリ、モバイルという流れであった。　現在では会社全体がモバイルファーストへと変化し、まずモバイルの要素が決まってからデスクトップへと進んで行くようになってきている。商品説明、イメージ撮影、インターフェースの開発等全てがモバイル中心なのである。

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我々がいま挑戦しており、ITからクリエイティブまでチームとして再びフォーカスを推し進めているのはモバイルファーストへの全体的アプローチである。以前はデスクトップ用サイトの開発、アプリ、モバイルという流れであった。現在では会社全体がモバイルファーストへと変化し、まずモバイルの要素が決まってからデスクトップへと進んで行くようになってきている。商品説明、イメージ撮影、インターフェースの開発等全てがモバイル中心なのである。

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モバイルの台頭とビジネスへの影響

モバイルは我々には重要な要素である。　この４年間でスマートフォーンからのセールスが２％から２２％へ上昇し、これにタブレットを含めると現在ではセールスの約半分にあたるほどだ。日本では、スマートフォーンからのセールは既に４０％となっている。　この流れでいくと来年末までにはセールスの半分がモバイルからとなると確信している。

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モバイルの台頭がビジネスへ与える影響は？

モバイルは我々にとって巨大な存在である！この４年間でスマートフォーンからの売上が２％から２２％へ上昇し、これにタブレットを含めると現在では売上の約半分にあたるほどだ。日本では、スマートフォーンからの売上は既に４０％となっている。　この流れでいくと来年末までには売上の半分がモバイルからになると確信している。

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最終的に顧客が戻ってくるのはなぜだろう。　つまり彼らには購買ステップの全てとカストマーサービスが重要だからだ。　ブランド、商品、ディスプレー、色々なサイズの品揃え、写真、商品説明、それから支払い方法、配送、返品、アフターサービスの全体を我々は顧客の購買ステップとしてとらえ、焦点を充てている。

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最終的に顧客が戻ってくるのはなぜだろう。それは彼らが全体的な経験とカスタマーサービスを享受しているからだ。ブランド、商品、ディスプレー、色々なサイズの品揃え、写真、商品説明、それから支払い方法、配送、返品、アフターサービスの全体を我々は顧客の経験としてとらえ、それに焦点を充てている。

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Upon mutual consent, I may refund the payment. I don't make partial refund. If you don't need that lens, I will sell it to other people as the lens is in demand.

Please understand that I'm not saying that I don't make refunds by all means.
If you send the lens back to us, I will have a thorough check on it.
I will then refund the cost of the lens and the shipping fee.

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Upon mutual consent, I may refund the payment. I don't make partial refund. If you don't need that lens, I will sell it to other people as the lens is in demand.

Please understand that I'm not saying that I don't make refunds.
If you send the lens back to us, I will have a thorough check on it.
I will then refund the cost of the lens and the shipping fee.

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Hello,
Thank you for purchasing from our store this time.

I will add a bonus to it!
This is a traditional Japanese art called "origami". (Using color papers to fold into various shapes.)
This has been made by the kids with handicap in Japan. I will donate $0.3 per "origami" to the support center for the handicapped children. A part of your payment will help these children.
Thank you very much.
I hope you will purchase from us again soon.
Thank you,

Shop owner

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Hello,
Thank you for purchasing from our store this time.

I will give you some discount!
This is a traditional Japanese art called "origami". (Using color papers to fold into various shapes.)
This has been made by the kids with handicap in Japan. I will donate $0.3 per "origami" to the support center for the handicapped children. A part of your payment will help these children.
Thank you very much.
I hope you will purchase from us again soon.
Thank you,

Shop owner

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There was a lighting ceremony held for 5m high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like a melting ice which represents "the instant glow of short-lived objects." It also sends us the message that we shouldn't forget the playful mind we once had as a child and we should move on with it. There are two stations with mirrors around the tree for self-photographs. If you sit on a stump of the tree, you'll have an excellent picture of yourself with the tree in the back. You may enjoy this setup from Nov 29 until Dec 25. They have extended the closing hour till 10pm.

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There was a lighting ceremony held for 5m high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like a melting ice which represents "the instant glow of short-lived objects." It also sends us the message that we shouldn't forget the playful mind we once had as a child and we should move on with it. There are two stations with mirrors around the tree for self-photographs. If you sit on a stump of the tree, you'll have an excellent picture of yourself with the tree in the back. You may enjoy this setup from Nov 29 until Dec 25. They have extended the opening hours to 10pm.

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There was a lighting ceremony held for 5m high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like a melting ice which represents "the instant glow of short-lived objects." It also sends us the message that we shouldn't forget the playful mind we once had as a child and we should move on with it. There are two stations with mirrors around the tree for self-photographs. If you sit on a stump of the tree, you'll have an excellent picture of yourself with the tree in the back. You may enjoy this setup from Nov 29 until Dec 25. They have extended the closing hour till 10pm.

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A lighting ceremony was held for a 5 meter-high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like melting ice represents "the short-lived glow of tangible object." It also sends us the message to move forward to the future with the childhood and playful mind, which we tend to loose when we grow up, in bottom of your heart. Two self-portrait stations with mirrors were set around the tree. When you sit on a stump, you'll be able to take an excellent self-portrait with the tree in your back. The event period is from Nov 29 to Dec 25. They have extended the closing hour till 10pm.

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A in Portuguese means a crazy boy and a girl. Crazy originally means strange or weird but here it signifies "a person who has chosen a challenging path and thus possesses unique senses"
A creates the world of attractions where a crazy boy and a girl encounter some exciting challenges in life. It may be filled with adventures full of challenges on pirate ships or it could be a dreadful haunted house that stimulates your curiosities.

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A in Portuguese means a crazy boy and girl. Crazy originally means strange or weird but here it means "a person who has chosen a challenging path and thus possesses unique senses"
A creates the world of attractions where a crazy boy and girl encounter some exciting challenges in life. It may be filled with adventures full of challenges on pirate ships or it could be a dreadful haunted house that stimulates your curiosities.

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This is early morning here in Japan. Yes, I do love furoshiki,too. They are wrapping cloths and very cute. The one in the photo is rather pale in color but it is very hard to capture its purplish tone.

I only have on-line shop right now and some day, I'm looking forward to opening a store.
I have lots of things I want to challenge but I'm busy with taking care of my baby now. I would love to visit Rome one day. Every time I watch a travel channel, I feel like visiting there.

As for the care, they can be washed in a washing machine. You may iron them, too, but do not bleach them. Do not tumble dry or leave them soaked in water for a long time.

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it is early morning here in Japan. Yes, I do love furoshiki too. They are very cute wrapping cloths. The one in the photo is rather pale in color because it was very hard to capture its purplish tone.

I only do business on my on-line shop right now but some day I want to open my own store.
I have lots of things I want to challenge but I'm busy with taking care of my baby now. I would love to visit Rome one day. Every time I watch a travel channel, I feel like visiting there.

As for the laundry instruction, the clothes can be washed in a washing machine. You may iron them, too, but do not bleach them. Do not tumble dry or leave them soaked in water for a long time.

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Oct., 3,1879 (Meiji era) published. A woodblock print in splendid colors. Some damages from aging can be seen.

40 blade tips　spare grips attached a chisel designed specially for master sculptors
A set of chisels convenient for cutting sheets or sculpture for professionals
7 grips and 42 different varieties of specialized blades with a sharpener, a smoothing gel attached.

Coffee seen on the photo is to compare the size of the product and therefore not for sale.

Do you only need the figures from Takara? If you let me know the genre or the manufacturer of the product, I can search and make a suggestion on what sells well in your country by email. (I'll have Cognac translate for me)

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Published on Oct., 3,1879 (Meiji era) A woodblock print in splendid colors. Some damages from aging may be visible.

40 blade tips inclusive of spare grips - a chisel designed specially for master sculptors
A set of chisels convenient for cutting sheets or sculpture for professionals
7 grips and 42 different varieties of specialized blades with a sharpener, a smoothing gel attached.

Coffee seen on the photo is to compare the size of the product and therefore not for sale.

Do you only need the figures from Takara? If you let me know the genre or the manufacturer of the product, I can search and make a suggestion on what sells well in your country by email. (I'll have Cognac translate for me)

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UVindeSirは現在開発中のもう一つの商品だ（資金集め中）。これは紫外線指標メーターで、iPhoneやAndroidに接続すると 紫外線指数が表示される。このアプリはどんな天気においても、紫外線が危険レベルに達するまでどれ位の時間屋外にいられるかを推定してくれる。

中国で一番人気のお天気アプリMoji、月経周期を管理するアプリDayimaや中国のその他のアプリの企業と、機能拡大のために現在交渉中である。

DaxinはUfactoryと技術面で協力し合っている。Ufactoryはやはり深圳市にベースをおくappcessory のプロバイダーだ。

現在投資家からのアプローチがあり投資の可能性を模索中と聞いている。

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UVindeSirは現在開発中のもう一つの商品だ（資金集め中）。これは紫外線指標メーターで、iPhoneやAndroidに接続すると 紫外線指数が表示される。このアプリはどんな天気においても、紫外線が危険レベルに達するまでどれ位の時間屋外にいられるかを推定してくれる。

中国で一番人気のお天気アプリMoji、月経周期を管理するアプリDayima、中国のその他のアプリの企業と、機能拡大のために現在交渉中である。

DaxinはUfactoryと技術面で協力し合っている。Ufactoryも深圳市に本拠地をおく起業で、appcessory （スマートフォンのアプリと外部アクセサリーとで構成されるデバイス）を提供している。

現在投資家からのアプローチがあり投資の可能性を模索中と聞いている。

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深圳市のBIGnew Palの環境監視機器があなたを救う

BIGnew Pal Technologiesは中国の深圳市に拠点をおき、中国ベースのappcessoryの開発をおこなっている企業である。最初の商品はAir。Air!は昨年北京で報告された薄煙の発生に伴い生まれた、空気汚染を感知するためにデザインされたプロトタイプだ。

Low Energy Bluetoothを利用し空気の質や温度に関するデータを個人のiOSやAndroidといったデバイスに送信する。大気汚染がある程度のレベル以下に感知されると注意喚起もされる。

このプロトタイプの作成には６ヶ月もかからなかった。$20,000をKickstarterで資金を集めた後、大量生産に切り替えた。　2014年の一月には配送予定。

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深圳市のBIGnew Palの環境監視機器があなたを救う

BIGnew Pal Technologiesは中国の深圳市に拠点をおくアプセサリの開発メーカーである。最初の商品はAir。Air!は昨年北京で報告された酷い薄煙の発生に伴い生まれた、空気汚染を感知するためにデザインされたプロトタイプだ。

Low Energy Bluetoothを利用し空気の質や温度に関するデータを個人のiOSやAndroidといったデバイスに送信する。空気の質が特定のレベルを下回ると注意喚起がされる。

このプロトタイプの作成には６ヶ月もかからなかった。$20,000を超える資金をKickstarterで集めた後、大量生産に切り替えた。　2014年の一月には配送予定。

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This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home and our home will be busy on Sundays. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the station at 13:50? I have sent you a photo of myself so that you would recognize me when we meet there.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I have hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start out from speaking in English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be waiting to hear from you soon.

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This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home on Sundays and it is not that convenient for us. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the entrance/exit of the station at 13:50? Because this is the first time we will meet each other, I have sent a photo of myself for you to easily recognize me.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I had a hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start from speaking English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home and our home will be busy on Sundays. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the station at 13:50? I have sent you a photo of myself so that you would recognize me when we meet there.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I have hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start out from speaking in English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be waiting to hear from you soon.

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This is in regard to our lesson on Sunday.
Can we change the location of the lesson?
My mother works at home and our home will be busy on Sundays. May I suggest that we meet for the lesson at a cafe near the station?

Shall we meet at the ticket barrier of the station at 13:50? I have sent you a photo of myself so that you would recognize me when we meet there.

I'm a total novice. I have read textbooks but I have hard time comprehending the grammar. I hope we can start out from speaking in English through which I can catch up the grammar as well.
I will be waiting to hear from you soon.

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Hello,

I'm contacting you in regard to the order you placed.

I'm afraid the merchandise is out of stock right now.
It will be available for shipping in 10 to 13 days.
Do you have any problem with the delay?

If this is not convenient with you, I will cancel the order.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Thank you.

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Hello,

I'm contacting you in regard to the order you have placed.

I'm afraid the merchandise is out of stock right now.
It will be available with shipping of 10 to 13 days.
Would it be alright for you?

If this is not convenient with you, I will cancel the order.
I will be looking forward to your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
KezaarとLernershiveに関しても、e27がホームページやFacebookを簡単にチェックした所、夫々のプラットフォームでは最小限の利用しかなされていないようだった。

これは見積り価格ではあるがTwofoldはおおよそUS$750,000の資金を集めている。Twofoldは現在でもおおよそUS$750,000の資金が集まっている。共同創設者のRai氏にどれくらいの資金を見積もっているか訪ねたところ、現在考慮中だとe27ni↵
答えた。

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KezaarとLernershiveに関しても、e27が彼らのホームページやFacebookを簡単にチェックした所、それぞれのプラットフォームでは最小限の利用しかなされていないようだった。

これは見積り価格ではあるがTwofoldはおよそUS$750,000の資金を集めている。Twofoldでは現在でもおおよそUS$750,000の資金が集まっている。共同創設者のRai氏にどれくらいの資金を見積もっているか訪ねたところ、現在メンターと協力してバリュエーションを決定しようとしている最中だとe27に答えた。