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Plate
Size　Size L　W20×H3cm
　　　Size M　W17×H3cm
　　　Size S　W13.5×H2.5cm


Canister (if production is possible)
Size　Size L　9.5cm×16cm
　　　Size S　9.5cm×11cm

I suppose that you are occupied, though I truly look forward to your reply.
That being said, I am hoping for our future business.

Best regards.

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Plate
Size　Size L　W20×H3cm
　　　Size M　W17×H3cm
　　　Size S　W13.5×H2.5cm


Canister (if production is possible)
Size　Size L　9.5cm×16cm
　　　Size S　9.5cm×11cm

I suppose that you are occupied, though [usage confusion] I truly look forward to your reply.
That being said, I am hoping for our future business [doesn't connect].

Best regards.

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When you do selling on eBay, commission fee is a must.
I don't understand why they can sell guitar A with a cheap price like that.
If we sell our new products with the same price, that will be a loss for us.

Please tell me about your detailed address and ZIP code in India. There are some areas in India where EMS won't work. We're still in middle of a sale campaign so discount is more or less possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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When you sell on eBay, you must pay a commission fee.
So I don't know how they can sell guitar A at such a cheap price.
If we sell new products at that price, we will lose money.

Please tell me your complete address with a ZIP code in India. EMS does not deliver to some areas in India. We're still in the middle of a sale campaign, so a small discount is possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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When you do selling on eBay, commission fee is a must.
I don't understand why they can sell guitar A with a cheap price like that.
If we sell our new products with the same price, that will be a loss for us.

Please tell me about your detailed address and ZIP code in India. There are some areas in India where EMS won't work. We're still in middle of a sale campaign so discount is more or less possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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When you sell on eBay, you have to pay a commission fee.
I don't understand how they can sell guitar A at such a cheap price as that.
If we sell our new products with the same price, that will be a loss for us.

Please tell me the details about your address and ZIP code in India. There are some areas in India where EMS won't work. We're still in the middle of a sale campaign so a discount is more or less possible. I would like to know how much you can pay.

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I joined BO when I was still a first year highschooler
now when I'm almost graduating
what I want to do started from this moment
is to make a collection of lots of dance covers
and try to make a continuous live performance with everyone out of that
part 1 would be BO, then part 2 would be BA
I will try my best so that I can make it come true

Because I think there would be no turning point more important than this,
while I think BA and BO are capable of working separately, which is well,
it is a crucial moment for both, and for this very reason,
making the best use of both groups' strength,
each and every of us matures,↵
then I believe both BO and BA will become excellent groups

Let's try our best as a whole in 4th year too

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I joined BO when I was still a freshman in high school.
Now I'm graduating the high school.
What I want to do after graduation
is to make a collection of lots of dance covers
and to have a continuous live performance with everyone out of that.
Part 1 would be by BO, then part 2 would be by BA.
I will try my best so that I can make it come true.

I think there would be no turning point more important than this,
and I think BA and BO are working separately well.
It is a crucial period for both groups, and therefore,↵
both BO and BA will become excellent groups with
making the best use of both groups' strength
and every each of the members' growth.

Let's try our best as a whole in the 4th year too.

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I can't continue being an ebay seller if I'm to share paying the customs tax.
This is unfortunate, but according to the email's content sent to me before, there is no way to cancel or refuse the receipt, it seems?
It would be great to resolve the problem with France's customs duties along with you, though...

Now in Japan it is midnight. I'm truly sorry, but I need to rest today because there is an important matter I need to attend started from tomorrow morning. You can contact me tomorrow. I hope for your understanding. Thank you for your cooperation.

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I wouldn't be able to continue selling on ebay if I was to pay part of customs duties.
Unfortunately it seems that declining or canceling the transaction would be the only option, as I mentioned in the email I sent you the other day, doesn't it?
I'd hope that you could talk to the French customs office and resolve the problem with them...

Now in Japan it is in the middle of the night. I'm truly sorry, but I need to go rest for today because there is an important errand I need to run tomorrow morning. I will not e-mail you until tomorrow. I beg your understanding. Have a great day.

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I found out that this car has oil leakage.
I will send the car for repair, so it isn't possible to be on sale.
I'm truly sorry, but I would ask for your understanding.
If a similar car model is imported, I will inform you ahead.

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I found out that this car has an oil leak.
I will send the car for repair, so I'm not able to sell it.
I'm truly sorry, but I kindly ask for your understanding.
When a similar car model is in stock, I will inform you on a priority basis.

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Ekipedia APP on your smartphone
Easy-to-understand MAP and route maps in double-page spread on tablet
Ekipedia subway route maps _ 9 cities in list (free download)
Ekipedia subway MAP series (9 different cities/sequential release)
You can use it on PC, tablet and smartphone as well!
In order to download, you need to register your membership on the ebook site.
Ekipedia subway inclusive map (booklets of different cities)
Osaka/Yokohama/Tokyo/Kobe/Sapporo booklets
can be purchased at bookstores and Amazon!
Portable handicap B6 size (12.5cm x 18cm)

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Get Ekipedia APP on your smartphone
Easy-to-understand MAP and route maps in double-page spread on tablet
Ekipedia subway route maps _ 9 cities in list (free download)
Ekipedia subway MAP series (9 different cities/sequential release)
You can use it on PCs, tablets and smartphones as well!
In order to download, you need to sign up for an ebook site.
Ekipedia subway maps for barrier-free facilities (booklet per city)
Osaka/Yokohama/Tokyo/Kobe/Sapporo booklets
can be purchased at bookstores and on Amazon!
Handy B6-sized booklets (12.5cm x 18cm)

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This is my new order.
I want to place an order on three following items.

Please change A into two black rods front handlebars.

The order of B and C on March 19th hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped it?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
Only D got to me.

I'd like to know the tracking number of last time as well.

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This is my new order.
I want to place an order on following three items.

Please change the 2 rods front handlebars of A into black.

B and C I ordered on March 19th hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped them?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
I have received only D.

I'd like to know the tracking number for the order last time as well.

元の翻訳
This is my new order.
I want to place an order on three following items.

Please change A into two black rods front handlebars.

The order of B and C on March 19th hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped it?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
Only D got to me.

I'd like to know the tracking number of last time as well.

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This is my new order.
I want to place an order for the following three items.

As for A, please change the color of the two rods on the front handles to black.

The March 19th order, including B and C, hasn't arrived yet.
Have you shipped it?
I'd like to know the tracking number.
I have only received D.

I'd like to know the tracking number for the last order as well.

元の翻訳
Plan and challenge
It is still too early to disclose our plan... so we will introduce our current venture.

Among cosplayers, there are many who use a carry cart when they travel to the cosplay event site. The normal carry cart suffers many inconveniences, unsuitable to keep objects with length like weapons and difficult to handle in narrow venues. Inspired by a certain cosplayer's tweet, we decided to build a carry cart that can improve such inconvenience.

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Plan and challenge
It is still too early to explain our plan... so we will introduce our current venture.

Many of cosplayers use a carry cart when they go to the cosplay event. The normal carry cart has many inconveniences, unsuitable to keep objects with long length like weapons and difficult to handle in narrow venues. Inspired by a certain cosplayer's tweet, we decided to create a carry cart that can improve such inconvenience.

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I'm sorry for my late response.

I'm short of comprehending English accurately.
From now on, I'll be using the translation service on the received text.

As of now, we have a problem as follows.

Basically, there are cases when the photos cannot be processed.
The solution to this issue is complicated, it seems?

I have a feeling that even the notified photos may not show up.

Please try posting via test account if you don't mind.

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I'm sorry for my late response.

I'm short of comprehending English accurately.
From now on, I'll be using the translation service on the received text.

As of now, we have a problem as follows.

Basically, there are cases when the photos cannot be processed.
The solution to this issue is complicated, it seems?

I have a feeling that even the notified photos may not show up.

Please try posting via a test account if you don't mind.

元の翻訳
After a long hiatus of about one yer, TOHOSHINKI's comeback formed by two members - YUNHO and CHANGMIN - for the time being after their activities had been restricted was announced in the end of November 2010.
The comeback that the whole Asia is awaiting!
"Why? (Keep Your Head Down)" released in January 26th, 2011 got 1st place in Oricon's Ringtone ranking, confirming their unshaken reputation.

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After a long hiatus of about one year, TOHOSHINKI's comeback formed by two members - YUNHO and CHANGMIN - for the time being, after their activities had been restricted, was announced in the end of November 2010.
The comeback that the whole of Asia is awaiting!
"Why? (Keep Your Head Down)" released in January 26th, 2011, got 1st place in Oricon's Ringtone ranking, confirming their unshaken reputation.

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ph75904

With the richness of first-person pronouns, that you could find orekko or bokukko these days appealing makes me wonder how unusual Japanese language is. It'd be a nice thing seeing all foreigners interested in orekko or bokukko once they pick up Japanese - such thoughts have brought a grin to my face recently.

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ph75904

With the richness of its first-person pronouns, if one day we found out that moe type of words such as orekko or bokukko became one of them, it would somehow make me wonder how unusual Japanese language is. But I think it'd be a nice thing to see foreigners, like you guys, get "moe"-tically interested in orekko or bokukko once you pick up Japanese - such thoughts have brought a grin to my face recently.

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ph70104

Stories about teachers and students falling in love are nothing new, yet I'd think progressive stories that teachers see eye-to-eye with students are mostly trending in Japanimation as of late.
Whatever you say, aren't teachers real charming? As expected of "teacher" nonetheless, the choice shared even by animation world is made up at one fell swoop.

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ph70104

Stories about teachers and students falling in love are nothing new, yet I'd think progressive stories where teachers see eye-to-eye with students are trending in Japanimation as of late.
Whatever you say, aren't teachers real charming? Nonetheless, as expected of a "teacher," the choices they make are made in one fell swoop even in the animation world.

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ph70101

Tell me, Teacher! How can you be this cute? Top 10 turn-ons
"Teacher! You standing in front of the blackboard is much cuter than the classmate sitting next to me!" - there comes good news for those with similar experience (or those who wish to)! This time we'll have a Teacher Edition Japanimation! Lovely teacher, seductive teacher, inexperienced teacher, struggling teacher - let's enjoy the variety of teachers, realistic or not, to our heart's content!


▼Tell us what teacher means......
Teacher is the one dealing with teaching and such in educational institution like schools or cram schools.

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ph70101

Tell me, Teacher! How can you be this cute? Top 10 admired
"Teacher! You standing in front of the blackboard is much cuter than the classmate sitting next to me!" - there comes good news for those with similar experience (or those who wish to)! This time we'll have a Teacher Edition Japanimation! Lovely teacher, seductive teacher, inexperienced teacher, struggling teacher - let's enjoy the variety of teachers, realistic or not, to our heart's content!


▼Tell us what teacher means......
The teacher is the one dealing with teaching and such in educational institution like schools or cram schools.

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In case the number of display items is excessive, we would have troubles catching up with them, so we would like you to contact us in advance. We will inform you about the total cost, return and postage included. "There comes a special price for reserved orders only. You can have purchases cheaper than anywhere else! There is a limit to it, so we suggest you to order as soon as you could. About limited cards, it is one per person. Please refer to the photos if you want to know how the cards look like. There are some scratches. They also have some fold. They aren't meant for collection. The box is a bit defective.

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In case the number of display items is excessive, we would have troubles catching up with them, so we would like you to contact us in advance. We will inform you back about the total cost including postage. "There comes a special price for reserved orders only. You can have purchases cheaper than anywhere else! There is a limit to it, so we suggest you to order as soon as you could. About limited cards, it is one per person. Please refer to the photos if you want to know how the cards look like. There are some scratches. They also have some fold. They aren't suitable for collection. The box is a bit defective.