daikichi (oyoshigoh) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Amazonで販売するとのご提案をこちらで検討致します。以前のメールでお願いしたAmazon セラーディテールを送って頂きたいと思います。
また学館販売目標と初期オーダーの大まかな予想お教えて下さい。

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Amazonで販売するとのご提案をこちらで検討致します。以前のメールでお願いしたAmazon出品者の詳細を送って頂きたいと思います。
また月間販売目標と初期オーダーの大まかな予想お教えて下さい。

元の翻訳
I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production to you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think full scale sales will begin around march.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly around 3 months.

therefore　I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year I will contact you again including the destruction of the mold type.

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I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production from you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think full scale sales will begin around march.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly around 3 months.

Therefore I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year, I will contact you again regarding the destruction of the mold type.

元の翻訳
I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production to you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think full scale sales will begin around march.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly around 3 months.

therefore　I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year I will contact you again including the destruction of the mold type.

修正後
I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production to you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think a full-scale launch will begin around March.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly 3 months.

Therefore, I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year, I will contact you again regarding the destruction of the mold type.

元の翻訳
I have been on many business trips lately and haven't been able to come home. But thats just part of my job lol

I listned to the song on Youtube:) Trevino's song is really cool! I've also listned to the other songs you told me about:)
My wife likes Jazz and listens is often:) I basically like western music but there are also some great music made by japanese musicians too.
When I was a teenager I talked with my friend about my future dreams while listening to this song.
I hope from the bottom of my heart that ○○ too can make your dreams come true. ;)

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I have been on many business trips lately and haven't been able to come home. But thats just part of my job lol

I listened to the song on Youtube :) Trevino's song is really cool! I've also listened to the other songs you told me about :)
My wife likes Jazz and listens to it often :) I basically like western music but there are also some great music made by Japanese musicians too.
When I was a teenager I talked with my friend about my future dreams while listening to this song.
I hope from the bottom of my heart that you too can make your dreams come true, ○○. ;)

元の翻訳
the attached file is the image and my payment history of my succesfull bid.
the seller who currently has items on sale"opulentdesigns" eBay item number:171197248606 is very likely to be the same person who also sold fake item to me.
he continues to work fraud and make new accounts, I suspect that we has made quite an earning from doing so.
unfortunately I may have to bear this case silently but to stop others from becoming a victim please look into this case thoroughly and deal with it adequately.
I will also attach a warning notice that I received from the agency in Japan.

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The attached file is the image and my payment history of my succesful bid.
The seller who currently has items on sale, "opulentdesigns," with the eBay item number:171197248606 is very likely to be the same person who also sold fake items to me.
He continues to work fraud and make new accounts, I suspect that he has made quite an earning from doing so.
Unfortunately, I may have to bear this case silently but to stop others from becoming a victim please look into this case thoroughly and deal with it adequately.
I will also attach a warning notice that I received from the agency in Japan.