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元の翻訳
There are still remain streets of warehouse building in Kawagoe.
This warehouse buildings of Kawagoe are located so because of a big fire of 1893, it is said.
Concerning buildings that survived in a large unprecedented fire of that time, it was warehouse buildings constructed with traditional method, and it seems that merchants started to adopt this method by common consent.
As modern buildings was built of bricks and stones as already fireproof construction, Kawagoe merchants selected the traditional way to construct buildings with flexibility, including traditional method Oya and new building materials, such as granite, it is said.

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There still remains the streets of warehouse building in Kawagoe.
This warehouse buildings of Kawagoe are said to be built because of a big fire of 1893.
Concerning buildings that survived in a large unprecedented fire of that time, it was warehouse buildings constructed with traditional method, and it seems that merchants started to adopt this method by common consent.
As modern buildings were built of bricks and stones as already fireproof construction, Kawagoe merchants selected the traditional way to construct buildings with flexibility, including traditional method Oya and new building materials, such as granite, it is said.

元の翻訳
This is Hodosan Shrine in Nagatoro City, Saitama Prefecture.
It is appear to be very colorful and beautiful building.
According to Sha-den, it has been told that it was built before 1900.

In 111 year, during conquestions of Emperor Yamato Takeru mikoto was being attacked by a ferocious wildfire along the way, so that could not be able to escape.
However, two dogs suddenly appeared, jumped into inferno and put out the fire, then guided to the head of mountain and disappeared after that. Mikoto believed this dogs to be a messengers of God, so this mountain named "Hodoyama" (meaning mountain that stopped the fire) and God worship was began

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This is Hodosan Shrine in Nagatoro City, Saitama Prefecture.
It is appear to be very colorful and beautiful building.
According to Sha-den, it has been told that it was built before 1900.

In the year 111, during conquestions of Emperor Yamato Takeru mikoto was being attacked by a ferocious wildfire along the way, so that could not be able to escape.
However, two dogs suddenly appeared, jumped into inferno and put out the fire, then guided to the head of mountain and disappeared after that. Mikoto believed this dogs to be messengers of God, so this mountain named "Hodoyama" (meaning mountain that stopped the fire) and God worship was began

元の翻訳
Hello, I am responsible for cancellation of orders.
I am glad to receive your e-mail.
Thereafter, I am sorry for being late with information concerning Contax that you are looking for.
There is no Contax now in the stock.
If you would send us request for the other camera that you wish from Japanese auctions, it will be OK.
Except for 100 USD commission fee, you would pay only postal fees, so please don`t worry.
Following is current situation, what is selling now.
T3 with black body is recommended.
Even in Japan it is expensive, but in comparison with T2 there is many in good state.

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Hello.
I am glad to receive your e-mail.
Thereafter, I am sorry for being late with information concerning Contax that you are looking for.
There is no Contax now in the stock.
If you would send us a request for the other camera that you wish from Japanese auctions, it will be OK.
Except for the 100 USD commission fee, you would pay only postal fees, so please don't worry.
Following is the current situation, what is selling now.
T3 with black body is recommended.
It is expensive even in Japan, but in comparison with T2 there is many in a good condition.

元の翻訳
In addition.
If I could get confirmation about this product, I would understand immediately,
we get warnings despite of the product was not being sold.
It seems to me that Robert was gaining on delay by such malicious claims.
However if I could get history confirmation, evidently, you would understand me immediately.
Then, you would apologize.
So, this is 3rd time warning.
This is following product.
Since this product for some reasons was erased from inventory, firstly, I thought that I received claims despite of the product was not being sold, the same as last time.

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In addition.
If I could get confirmation about this product, I would understand immediately,
we get warnings despite of the product was not being sold.
It seems to me that Robert was gaining on delay by such malicious claims.
However if I could get history confirmation, evidently, you would understand me immediately.
Then, you would apologize.
So, this is the 3rd time warning.
This is the following product.
Since this product for some reasons was erased from inventory, firstly, I thought that I received claims despite the product was not being sold, the same as last time.