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元の翻訳
【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, an additional course or register your new member registration, to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo" from 【Astalight*】, you can get 300 points for free!
You are able to plan the delivery and wallpaper Kisekae special of Tokyo Women's flow in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN

修正後
【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, if you register an additional course or your new member registration from 【Astalight*】to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo", you'll be given 300 points!
Being scheduled the delivery special of Tokyo Women's flow and wallpaper Kisekae in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN

元の翻訳
【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, an additional course or register your new member registration, to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo" from 【Astalight*】, you can get 300 points for free!
You are able to plan the delivery and wallpaper Kisekae special of Tokyo Women's flow in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN

修正後
【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, an additional course or register your new membership, to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo" from 【Astalight*】, you can get 300 points for free!
You are able to plan the delivery and wallpaper Kisekae special of Tokyo Women's flow in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN

元の翻訳
※ Smartphone only are eligible the present points.
※ If you want to be a member of "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo", please log in to the fan club site and register from the download page.
※ Please check your notes of support model, terms of use on the site.
※ Download content, etc. be charged for that service, and communication cost of this service will be borne by the customer.

修正後
※ Smartphone only are eligible the present points.
※ If you want to be a member of "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo", please always log in to the fan club site and register from the download page.
※ Please always check your notes of compatible models, terms of use on the site. terms of use on the site.
※ Download content, etc. be charged for that service, and communication cost of this service will be borne by the customer.

元の翻訳
【Ticket fees】
General reserved S seats ￥9,000 (including tax) ※6/18、6/19 only
Stage side seats ￥9,000 (including tax)
Balcony reserved seats ￥9,000 (including tax)
※over 3 year-old people are charged a fee. Admission to children under 3 in only S seats. However, they need to be charged fees if they use seats.

修正後
【Ticket fees】
General reserved S seats ￥9,000 (including tax) ※6/18、6/19 only
Stage side seats ￥9,000 (including tax)
Balcony reserved seats ￥9,000 (including tax)
※3 year-old and over people are charged a fee. Admission to children under 3 in only S seats. However, they need to be charged fees if they use seats.