仲真一樹 (nakamaokinawa) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
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Hometown and place of memories
Expression of today's favorite places
Seasonal events such as skiing and cherry-blossom viewing

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We have been providing a highly convenient application for smartphone to a large number of people
The total number of downloads until now exceeds 2.4 million while building a unique position in this field

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Viewing scene
Preview of the potential destinations
Conditions of the local area of news
Exotic food, clothing, housing, and festivals
Current situations of hometown and places of memories
Today's scenes of favorite places
Seasonal events such as skiing and cherry-blossom viewing

Posted scene
Captured images of incidents and decisive moments
Photography that appeals to the world
PR in tourism for special products and sights
Reports on delicious foods
Sharing emotional moments
Messages to the world

We have been providing a highly convenient application for smartphones to a large number of people
The total number of downloads so far exceeds 2.4 million while establishing a unique position in this field

元の翻訳
I joined BO when I was still a first year highschooler
now when I'm almost graduating
what I want to do started from this moment
is to make a collection of lots of dance covers
and try to make a continuous live performance with everyone out of that
part 1 would be BO, then part 2 would be BA
I will try my best so that I can make it come true

Because I think there would be no turning point more important than this,
while I think BA and BO are capable of working separately, which is well,
it is a crucial moment for both, and for this very reason,
making the best use of both groups' strength,
each and every of us matures,↵
then I believe both BO and BA will become excellent groups

Let's try our best as a whole in 4th year too

修正後
I joined BO when I was still a freshman in high school.
Now I'm graduating the high school.
What I want to do after graduation
is to make a collection of lots of dance covers
and to have a continuous live performance with everyone out of that.
Part 1 would be by BO, then part 2 would be by BA.
I will try my best so that I can make it come true.

I think there would be no turning point more important than this,
and I think BA and BO are working separately well.
It is a crucial period for both groups, and therefore,↵
both BO and BA will become excellent groups with
making the best use of both groups' strength
and every each of the members' growth.

Let's try our best as a whole in the 4th year too.