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Hasilkan laporan menarik dan jadualkan penyerahan automatik kepada ahli pasukan dan klien anda dengan mudah. Hasilkan laporan dan papan pemuka yang disesuaikan dengan komen anda sendiri untuk menyediakan konteks di sekeliling setiap aspek prestasi kempen.

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Hasilkan laporan menarik dan jadualkan penyerahan automatik kepada ahli pasukan dan klien anda dengan mudah. Hasilkan laporan khas dan papan pemuka yang dengan komen anda sendiri untuk menyediakan konteks di sekeliling setiap aspek prestasi kempen.

元の翻訳
About the product, VER RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!, purchased through ebay shopping.

I have already paid by PayPal, but haven't received the product yet.
I have been contacting to deliver the product several times, but there is no response.
Please let me know if there is any probrem on delivery system.
If there is no contact with me by tomorrow, I will objet to seek to a refund.

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About the product, VER RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!, purchased through ebay shopping.
<This is in regards to the product "VERY RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!" which I purchased through ebay,>↵

I have already paid by PayPal, but haven't received the product yet.
I have been contacting to deliver the product several times, but there is no response.
<I have been contacting you to deliver the product several times, but there is still no response.>↵
Please let me know if there is any probrem on delivery system.
<Please let me know if there is any problem with the delivery.>↵
If there is no contact with me by tomorrow, I will objet to seek to a refund.↵
<If there is no contact from you by tomorrow, I will object to seek a refund.>

元の翻訳
Fu,

Thank you for contacting me.
First, I would like to apologize for causing you unnecessary inconvenience.
I am sincerely sorry for this.
It is a shame that such that a thing may happen occasionally in the midst of delivery from Japan to France.
I am requesting a claim from the company in charge.
Nonetheless, It would take some time for the investigation request to the delivery company to be completed.
I sincerely hope that I would not causing you undue trouble in the future.

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Fu,

Thank you for contacting me.
First, I would like to apologize for causing you unnecessary inconvenience.
I am sincerely sorry for this.
It is a shame that such a thing may happen occasionally in the midst of delivery from Japan to France.
I am requesting a claim from the company in charge.
Nonetheless, It would take some time for the investigation request to the delivery company to be completed.
I sincerely hope that I would not cause you any trouble in the future.

元の翻訳
Looking forward to receiving your reply. Very happy to do business with you.

We are interested in carrying X. A similar product, Gopro is fairly well known in Japan and is being sold with much success.

With its price advantage, we believe that X also has a good chance to succeed as well and would love to test the market by selling a few of them. Would you please let me know its price?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Looking forward to receiving your reply. Very happy to do business with you.

We are interested in handling X. A similar product, Gopro is fairly well known in Japan and is being sold with much success.

With its price advantage, we believe that X also has a good chance to succeed as well and would love to test the market by selling a few of them. Would you please let me know its price?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
As you mentioned "A" is a product that is quite popular in Japan as well. We are glad to hear that you are satisfied with it.

Please feel free to contact us next time you are looking for a product. In case the product you wish to purchase is not available on Amazon, we will be sure to make it available so that you can purhcase it.
I would like to put up for sale an item which does not have a JAN code (a handmade product by a craftsman). Please advise on I can register the product.

What is the best way to increase our revenue by two or three fold within the next few months? Any advice as you review my postings?

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As you mentioned "A" is a product that is quite popular in Japan as well. We are glad to hear that you are satisfied with it.

Please feel free to contact us next time you are looking for a product. In case the product you wish to purchase is not available on Amazon, we will be sure to make it available so that you can purchase it.
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I would like to put up for sale an item which does not have a JAN code (a handmade product by a craftsman). Please advise on what should I do to register the product.

What is the best way to increase our revenue by two or three fold within the next few months? Any advice as you review my postings?