Monique (moni_125) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
お見積送り状をご送付いたします。今回のご注文にご満足いただけましたか？お手数ですがお支払いの詳細を教えていただけますか？輸送手配をするために送り先の情報を教えていただきます。もしくは業者を経由することになりましたら、その住所を送っていただけませんか？
英語には少々不自由のためお電話にてのご連絡をご希望されていないとは存じていますが、その代わりに新年の頃にスカイプにてのご連絡はいかがでしょうか。そうしたらタイピングで即時会話することができて、御社のことをもっと詳しくお話する事ができるかと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

修正後
お見積送り状をご送付いたします。今回のご注文にご満足いただけましたか？お手数ですがお支払いの詳細を教えていただけますか？輸送手配をするために送り先の情報を教えていただきます。もしくは転送会社を経由することになりましたら、その住所を送っていただけませんか？
英語には少々不慣れのためお電話でのご連絡をご希望されていないとは存じていますが、その代わりに新年になってからのスカイプでのご連絡はいかがでしょうか。そうしたらお話をするのではなくタイピングで即時会話することができて、御社のことをもっと詳しく知る事ができるかと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you so much for your kind response.
Glad to meet such a buyer as you.
After investigation, there is nothing been uninstalled so the malfunction should be happened during the delivery.
It worked properly at the time of your purchase.
Regret that no solid advice could be given.
Suggest to have a check at your nearby music instrument store at your convenience.
We apologize for the inconveniences caused.
Please feel free to contact us again if any further assistance is required.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you so much for your kind response.
Glad to meet such a buyer as you.
An investigation proved that nothing has been uninstalled so the malfunction must have happened during the delivery.
It worked properly at the time of your purchase.
Regret that no solid advice could be given.
Suggest to have it chekced at your nearby music instrument store at your convenience.
We apologize for the inconveniences caused.
Please feel free to contact us again if any further assistance is required.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email. Finally made it on time for the board meeting.

The following are the comments from the meeting:

• An exclusive native staff with management training experiences is needed for the introduction of A. However, it considers to be difficult from the current human resources situation.
• B can be started very soon. C is very comprehensive.

With the above comments, our company would like to have some discussions about the corporate partnership and human resources so please give us some time.
For B, is it able to start with localization first?

For all the communications from now on, would it be better for us to do with your colleagues from the sales department?

修正後
Thank you for your email. ↵
I made it in time just before the board meeting.

The followings are the comments from the meeting:

• An dedicated native staff is essential and management training experiences is needed for the introduction of A. However, it considers to be difficult from the current human resources situation.
• B can be started very soon. C is very comprehensive.

With the above comments, our company would like to have some discussions about the corporate partnership and human resources so please give us some time.
For B, is it able to start with localization first?

For all the communications from now on, would it be better for us to do with your colleagues from the sales department?

元の翻訳
1 our products are purchased from wholesaler or retail shops.
2 our short-term goal is to have hundred thousand dollars turnover.
3 we expect to have more of our products to be available on the Amazon.
4 I have been working at an online store for 3 years. I also have 1 year sales experience after my independent.
5 we have sales activities on other websites as well.
we are considering to concentrate on Amazon only if the turnover at Amazon is satisfied.
6 we are looking forward to selling more good quality Japan made products though Amazon.

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1. Our products are purchased from wholesaler or retail shops.
2. Our short-term goal is to have a hundred-thousand-dollar turnover.
3. We expect to have more of our products to be available on Amazon.
4. I had worked at an online store for 3 years. I also have a 1-year-sales experience after my becoming independent.
5. We have sales activities on other websites as well.
We are considering concentrating on Amazon only if the turnover at Amazon is satisfactory.
6. We are looking forward to selling more good quality Japan-made products through Amazon.

元の翻訳
Hello. I was unable to use the coupon for OO just now.
could you please extend the validity of the coupon for me please?
I would like to place additional order for 2 pcs of OO and looking forward to you response.

Would like to know if the discount rate for purchasing the Samsonite is same as the RIMOWA?
if so I would like to continue our transactions from now on and base on the past record I would like to ask for a better price for other products except RIMOWA. Could you please discuss with your superior on this issue?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

So that is the case. Fully understand.

修正後
Hello. I was unable to use the coupon for OO just now.
Could you please extend the validity of the coupon for me please?
I would like to place additional order for 2 pcs of OO. I'm looking forward to you response.

I would like to know if the discount rate for purchasing the Samsonite is same as the RIMOWA?
If so I would like to continue our transactions from now on and based on the past record I would like to ask for a better price for other products except RIMOWA. Could you please discuss with your superior on this issue?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

That's unfortunate but I understand.