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元の翻訳
I'm so glad to be able to make a successful bid for the one pairs of dishes as I want them so much. I don't mind if you write the shopping information such as my address in English. I've ever received products with shopping information written in English without any problems. I am looking forward to the dishes.

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I'm so glad to be able to make a successful bid for the pair of the dishes as I wanted it so much. I don't mind if you write the shipping information such as my address in English. I've never had problems so far. I am looking forward to receiving the dishes.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response. About the items which you pointed out, I misunderstood that there is no limit when the items are blank.
I was able to create new XYZ without any problem.
I apologize to you for all the trouble I have caused you. I very much appreciate it.
If this is made as a form, it seems to sell well. However, I worry about its security.

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Thank you for your response. About the items which you pointed out, I misunderstood that there is no limit when the items are blank.
I was able to create new XYZ without any problem.
I apologize for all the trouble I have caused you. I very much appreciate it.
If this is made as a form, it may sell well. However, I worry about its security.

元の翻訳
The appearance has a part of the damaged portion as the picture, but its airframe is enough practical.
I finished testing each operation and the result is no problem.
An hour meter is also as follows:
Energizing time ９４×１０Ｈ
Drum revolution time １７×１０Ｈ
Tape transit time １４×１０Ｈ
Number of threading ３９×１０

In addition to the above, I cleaned it up hard.
With regard to the basic operation as the above basis,
I checked operating at a specialist store in Tokyo in March, so please don't worry about the point.

<Accessories>
DC power cable
Charger
* All of the showing picture

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There is a slight damage on the exterior as you can see from the picture, but its airframe is practical enough.
I finished testing each operation and found no problem.
An hour meter is also as follows:
Energizing time ９４×１０Ｈ
Drum revolution time １７×１０Ｈ
Tape transit time １４×１０Ｈ
Number of threading ３９×１０

In addition to the above, I cleaned it up thoroughly.
With regard to the basic operation as the above basis,
I checked its operation at a specialist store in Tokyo in March, so please don't worry about the point.

<Accessories>
DC power cable
Charger
* Everything shown in the picture is included.

元の翻訳
I couldn't read clearly the letters in the attached price list because the pictures were grainy.
I am sorry, Please send the price list again to this mail address.
I apologize for the inconvenience, but I appreciate your correspondence.

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I couldn't read the letters in the attached price list clearly because the pictures were grainy.
I am sorry, but please send the price list again to this mail address.
I apologize for the inconvenience, but I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
A radiation therapy technician delivers radiation. The radiation therapy technician follows courses of treatment on which a radiation oncologist decides, and accurately sends radiation toward only the parts which is ill. External radiation is treated in a radiation treatment room where a linear accelerator is set. The radiation therapy technician sends radiation toward skins which are marked by the courses of treatment and signs of fixing tools. In the first radiation, the patients are taken photos called adjusting positions to confirm whether the parts, which are decided by the courses of treatment can match the parts of skins and the signs of fixing tools.

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A radiation therapy technician delivers radiation. The radiation therapy technician follows courses of treatment on which a radiation oncologist decides, and accurately sends radiation toward only the parts which is ill. External radiation is treated in a radiation treatment room where a linear accelerator is set. The radiation therapy technician sends radiation toward skins which are marked by the courses of treatment, and signs of fixing tools. In the first radiation, the patients are taken photos called adjusting positions to confirm whether the parts, which are decided by the courses of treatment can match the parts of skins and the signs of fixing tools.

元の翻訳
It is revealed that an planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) has been posted on the Japan Standard Industrial Classification, which is used as a basic material of the economic structure in the nation and the economic ripple effect analysis on April 1st.

An exhibition industry insists voluntarily that it is an important industry to generate large economic effects, but its position as an industry is unclear.

This time, "planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) " has been stated in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification. As a result, the business such as an exhibition has been admitted objectively as an industry which conducts economic activities.

修正後
It is revealed on 1st April that the planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) has been published in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification, which is used as a basic material for analyzing the economic structure in the nation and the economic ripple effect.

The exhibition industry has insisted voluntarily that it is an important industry to generate large economic effects, but its position as an industry has been unclear.

This time, "planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) " is published in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification. As a result, the exhibition business will be admitted objectively as an industry which conducts economic activities.