minnie (minnie) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I understood that.
I am satisfied with the response of your company.

I would like to reorder it right away.
The amount is 10.
I hope the offered items can meet my expectation on a quality basis.

Please kindly send me an invoice so that I can pay by PayPal.

修正後
I understood that.
I am satisfied with the response of your company.

I would like to reorder it right away.
The amount is 10.
I hope the offered items can meet my expectation on a quality basis.

Please kindly send me an invoice so that I can pay by PayPal.↵
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ちょっと気楽な会話と思ってください。↵
あなたの英文は完璧で、どもにも間違いはありませんが、硬すぎる感じがしませんか。↵
もしあなたがnative speakerだったら、とんでもないことを私は言っていることになって申し訳ないのですが。↵
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OK, I understand.↵
I am satisfied with your company's reaction.↵
I would like to place an additional order for 10 pieces.↵
I expect you to provide nice products.↵
とか。↵

元の翻訳
I have to apologize that the product, shown in the photo I sent you yesterday, is already sold out.
I can try to get the product again.

I am terribly sorry but the product went out of stock while I was typing the email.
I have attached the photos of products in stock.

This ○○is 140us with delivery charge.
I can also offer ○○. This is 80 dollars.
○○ is out of stock now.
I would appreciate if you could take a moment to give me the feedback in ebay.

修正後
I have to apologize that the product, shown in the photo I sent you yesterday, is already sold out.
I can try to get the product again.

I am terribly sorry but the product went out of stock while I was typing the email.
I have attached the photos of products in stock.

This ○○is 140us with delivery charge.
I can also offer ○○. This is 80 dollars.
○○ is out of stock now.
I would appreciate if you could take a moment to give me a feedback in ebay.

元の翻訳
They mean everything to our family. My son enjoys playing with blocks and my daughtor loves story books. I really appreciate that I can work at home.

I assume that you have experienced difficult times in the U.S. I am not justifying the war, but our ancestors defused determinately the colonization by the U.S.

You might have heard about it, we had been forced to accept those requests.

Some may see the justification of atom-bomb, but the U.S. government at that time never opened the door to the peace proposal demanding the requests menthioned above.

修正後
They mean everything to our family. My son enjoys playing with Legos and my daughter loves story books. I really appreciate that I can work at home.

I assume that you have experienced difficult times in the U.S. I am not justifying the war, but our ancestors resisted the U.S. colonization.

You might have heard about it; we had been forced to accept those requests.

Some justify the use of atomic bombs, but the U.S. government at that time never opened the door to the peace proposal while demanding the requests mentioned above.