Ernesto D. Luzon Jr. (ldiary) — 付けたレビュー

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The size says "S." Is it designed for women?↵
Or does it simply mean that it is just one size below "M" size?
I'm a male myself. If it is for women, I just can't wear it.↵
Please try to be precise on that.

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The size says "S." What does that means?↵
Does it mean it's designed for women, or does it simply mean one size below "M" size?
I'm a man and would not be able to wear it if it is designed for women.↵
So I would appreciate if you could give me precise answer on that.

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パーティションラブ

the square brackets you are pointing to
trying to fill the English words with your hints
I am a colored spring flower

the beats that never stops
"hide it hide it"
wondering the beats could reach the next seat

dear my teacher
teach me what I don't know
I don't wanna be a child anymore
my teacher
teach me what my friends don't know
how can I tell my love to you?
I wanna tell you
パーティションラブ

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パーティションラブ

The blank square brackets you pointed at
Filling it with English words by the hints from you
The inner feelings as our foreheads get closer together↵
Has coloured my world like a blooming flower in the spring

these beats that would never stop
"hide it, oh how can I hide it"
I just wish it would not overflow until the next seat

My dear teacher
Teach me gently what I don't know
I want to get closer to you↵
I don't want to be a child any more
My dear teacher
Teach me what my friends don't know
How can I tell my love to you?
This feeling, I want to let you know
パーティションラブ

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ph75904

With the richness of first-person pronouns, that you could find orekko or bokukko these days appealing makes me wonder how unusual Japanese language is. It'd be a nice thing seeing all foreigners interested in orekko or bokukko once they pick up Japanese - such thoughts have brought a grin to my face recently.

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ph75904

With the richness of its first-person pronouns, if one day we found out that moe type of words such as orekko or bokukko became one of them, it would somehow make me wonder how unusual Japanese language is. But I think it'd be a nice thing to see foreigners, like you guys, get "moe"-tically interested in orekko or bokukko once you pick up Japanese - such thoughts have brought a grin to my face recently.

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