kikimika — もらったレビュー

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I'm afraid what you explain conflicts itself.
As you can refer to my previous emails, I have already canceled this order on the 6th of February.
According to UPS tracking system, vendor has sent the item on the 10th of February.

Although there had been 3 days between my cancelation and the shipping date, ↵
hasn't my cancelation been acknowledged by the vendor in advance?
I sincerely demand a reasonable explanation for this matter.

I dare repeat: I have already canceled this order.
Could you please ask the vendor to return the item?
If not, please send me a receipt so I can return the item for free by email.

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You explanation contradicts itself.
As you can refer to my previous emails, I asked to have this order canceled on the 6th of February.
According to UPS tracking, the vendor sent the item on the 10th of February.

Although there were 3 days between my cancellation and the shipping date, didn't you tell the vendor about my cancellation?
I sincerely demand a reasonable explanation for this matter.

I dare repeat: I have already canceled this order.
Could you please ask the vendor to return the item?
If not, please send me a receipt so I can return the item for free by email.

元の翻訳
It was simply excellent.
I used the bus thinking that it would save the transferring time to visit many sightseeing spots but it was so great that I ended up taking the whole tour forgetting to get off at where I initially wanted to!
The sun is very strong in the summer in Spain so I recommend you to take a seat on the 2nd floor under the roof. There, the wind blows so nicely while you enjoy the views of Madrid city and visiting essential sightseeing spots. Highly recommended!

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It was more than expected.
I used the bus thinking that it would save the transferring time to visit many sightseeing spots but it was so great that I ended up taking another round forgetting to get off at where I initially wanted to!
The sun is very strong in summer in Spain so I recommend you to take a seat on the 2nd floor under the roof. There, the wind blows so nicely while you enjoy the views of Madrid city and visiting essential sightseeing spots. Highly recommended!

元の翻訳
Sightseeing in Madrid
There are 2 courses available that allows you to enjoy sightseeing spots effectively in Madrid. Both courses are excellent and highly recommended. You can walk around the old town or to visit the home stadium of the famous football team Real Madrid, a bullring and shopping area. You can take this bus to know where everything is in Madrid so you can plan your travel well suited to your own schedule!

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Sightseeing in Madrid
There are 2 courses available that allow you to enjoy sightseeing spots effectively in Madrid. Both courses are excellent and highly recommended. You can walk around the old town or visit the home stadium of the famous football team Real Madrid, a bullring and shopping area. You can take this bus to know where locations are in Madrid so you can plan your travel well which will be very effective !