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元の翻訳
* There are only limited number of products sold on the venue (reservation possible) and the products sold on drawing. Once they are out of stock we will stop selling.
* Please note that we will not make any refund however we will replace defective items.
* When you make a reservation, the fee for the products and its shipping should be paid in advance.
* Please note that we only accept cash. We don't accept credit card.

修正後
* There are only limited number of products sold on the venue (reservation possible) and the products sold on drawing. Once they are out of stock we will stop selling.
* Please note that we will not make any refund however we will replace defective items.
* When you make a reservation, the fee for the products and its shipment should be paid in advance.
*We only accept cash. Please be aware that we don't accept credit card.

元の翻訳
★ "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~" benefits provided to the purchasers at the venue with reservation (limited number)

When you make a reservation for "HTOEL" products at the venue , you will receive the following benefits (limited number)!

- "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~" venue limited edition campaign application ID card 1 pc
- "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~" limited edition "HOTEL" sticker 1 pc

修正後
★ "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~"The special gift will be provided to the limited number of reserved purchasers at the venue.

If you make a reservation for "HOTEL" related items at the venue , limited number of first comers will receive the following special gifts.

- "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~" venue limited edition campaign application ID card 1 pc
- "KUMI KODA LIVE TOUR 2014~Bon Voyage~" limited edition "HOTEL" sticker 1 pc