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元の翻訳
Regarding location, address is xxxxxx.
URL of map is xxxxxx

Could you call xx at reception desk on the first floor in right affix of main office building.
You will be able to find me in front of the desk on the first floor at that day.
My cellphone number is xxx-xxxx-xxxx.

Although it is not definite, a few staffs in internet business department might be present at the meeting with us on that day.

I would appreciate you in advance.

修正後
Regarding location, address is xxxxxx.
URL of map is xxxxxx

Could you call xx at reception desk on the first floor in right affix of the main office building.
You will be able to find me in front of the desk on the first floor at that day.
My cellphone number is xxx-xxxx-xxxx.

Although it is not definite, a few staffs in the internet business department might be present at the meeting with us on that day.

I would appreciate you in advance.

元の翻訳
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE arrives in US! They will be joining as honored guest at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco, the biggest Japanese culture festival in US!
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE performs live at the stage, and in addition, their two movies "Gakkou no Kaidan" and "Itsusu Kazoereba" will be viewed at Japan Film Festival of San Francisco followed by stage greetings. Japan Film Festival of San Francisco is full of TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE.

修正後
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE arrives in US! They will be joining as honored guest at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco, the biggest Japanese culture festival in US!
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE performs live at the stage, and in addition, their two movies "Gakkou no Kaidan" and "Itsutsu Kazoereba" will be viewed at Japan Film Festival of San Francisco followed by stage greetings. Japan Film Festival of San Francisco is full of TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE.

元の翻訳
I am really sorry but I am not available on Friday, 30th of June.
I am arranging it to be on 6th or 7th of July.
I am wondering if you can arrange an interpreter.
Please make sure it.

修正後
I'm afraid but I am not available on Friday, 30th of June.
I would like to arrange it to be on 6th or 7th of July.
I also wonder if you could arrange an interpreter.
Looking forward to your reply.