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元の翻訳 About observation the Evans Hostel,My two friends, exchange studentd of SMU from next semester (Aug. 2015) are planning to apply to the Evans Hostel. They will be in Singapore this week and they really would like to observe the Evans Hostel during their stay. They might visit you in the afternoon of this Thursday if it's convinient for you. Thank you very much!↵
修正後 Regarding the Evans Hostel,My two friends, who will be exchange students at SMU next semester (Aug. 2015), are considering applying to the Evans Hostel. They are in Singapore this week and would really like to tour the Evans Hostel during their stay. They might visit you this Thursday afternoon if it is convenient for you. Thank you very much!
元の翻訳 BBC はプログラミング国家をつくるために100万人の英国の子どもにマイクロビット・コンピューターを提供する。「デジタルになろう」という新しいプログラムの一部として、BBCは今日、100万人の英国の子どもに提供する予定の小型コンピューターを開発するために、25の企業と提携を結んだことを発表した。Google や Microsoft、Samsung といった企業とともに BBC はマイクロビットと呼ばれる符号化装置の開発に挑む。この装置はもっとも簡潔なコンピューターで、11、12歳の英国内全ての子どもに提供される。今回の目的は、子どもに基本的な符号化の技術を教え、さらに高度な Arduino、Kano、Raspberry Pi といったプログラミング・ハードウェアへの挑戦を奨励することである。
修正後 BBC はプログラミング国家をつくるために100万人の英国の子どもにマイクロビット・コンピューターを提供する。「Make it Digital(デジタルになろう)」という新しいプログラムの一部として、BBCは今日、25の企業と提携を結び、小型コンピューターを開発し、100万人の英国の子どもに提供する意向であると発表した。Google や Microsoft、Samsung といった企業とともに BBC はマイクロビットと呼ばれる符号化装置の開発に挑む。この装置はもっとも簡潔なコンピューターで、11、12歳の英国内全ての子どもに提供されることになる。今回の目的は、子どもに基本的なコーディング(符号化)技術を教え、さらに高度な Arduino、Kano、Raspberry Pi といったプログラミング・ハードウェアへのきっかけを作ることである。
元の翻訳 Because of this origin, this shrine is well known for avoidding fire and theft. Moreover, after elected one star of "Michelin Green Guude Japon", more and more people come to pray for this shrine.There is "okumiya" at the top of the mountain.This shrine has the pray ceremoney everyday. You can pray for house in the safety, prosperous business, avoidding fire and theft, traffic safety, money and good luck and so on.If you looked up, you would see beautiful carving of dragons. There are five of them and they are said that they are keeping malarial spirit out from the God.
修正後 Because of this origin, this shrine is well known for avoidding fire and theft. Moreover, after elected one star of "Michelin Green Guide Japon", more and more people come to pray for this shrine.There is "okumiya" at the top of the mountain.This shrine has the pray ceremoney everyday. You can pray for house in the safety, prosperous business, avoidding fire and theft, traffic safety, money and good luck and so on.If you look up, you would see beautiful carving of dragons. There are five of them and they are said that they are keeping malarial spirits out from the God.
元の翻訳 Hodoyama Shrine is located in Nagase-cho in Saitama Prefecture. The building is very beautiful and gorgeous. According to the history book of this shrine, this shrine has been there since 1,900 years ago.In 111 A.D., when Yamatotakerunomikoto, the son of the Emperor was going to the East, the bush fire was occured on his way and he couldn't escape from it.But suddenly the two dogs appeared in front of him. They dived into the fire then extinguished the fire. After that they led Yamatotakerunomikoto to the top of the mountain then dissapeared. He believed that the two dogs are emissaries of the God so he named the mountain as "Hodoyama"; means a mountain which stops the fire. And he built a shrine for the God.
修正後 Hodoyama Shrine is located in Nagase-cho in Saitama Prefecture. The building is very beautiful and gorgeous. According to the history book of this shrine, it has been there since 1900 years ago.In 111 A.D., when Yamatotakerunomikoto, the son of the Emperor was going to the East, the bush fire was occured on his way and he couldn't escape from it.But suddenly the two dogs appeared in front of him. They dived into the fire then extinguished the fire. After that they led Yamatotakerunomikoto to the top of the mountain then dissapeared. He believed that the two dogs are emissaries of the God so he named the mountain as "Hodoyama"; means a mountain which stops the fire. And he built a shrine for the God.