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5/31(Sat) FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC will be make an appearance.

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5/31(Sat) FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC [the wrong subject] will be make [ungrammatical] an appearance.

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Advance reservation of tickets :
4/01 (Tue) FM802 [TACTY IN THE MORNING]
4/03 (Thu)FM802 [802 RADIO MASTERS]
4/05 (Sat) FM802 [SATURDAY AMUSIC ISLANDS -AFTERNOON EDITION-]
4/07 (Mon) - 4/13 (Sun) <802.DJ paying members advance reservation>

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Advance reservation of tickets :
4/01 (Tue) FM802 [TACTY IN THE MORNING]
4/03 (Thu) FM802 [802 RADIO MASTERS]
4/05 (Sat) FM802 [SATURDAY AMUSIC ISLANDS -AFTERNOON EDITION-]
4/07 (Mon) - 4/13 (Sun) <802.DJ paying members advance reservation>

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Date : May 31, 2014 (Sat) + June 1 (Sun) - Opening = 16:00 / Performance = 17:00 (Schedule)
Venue : Osaka Hall

Performances :
May 31 (Sat) = Suga Shikao / Naoto Inti Raymi / Daichi Miura and more...
June 01 (Sun) = Ieiri Leo / Ulfuls / Yu Takahashi / Akiko Yano and more...
* Appearances of gorgeous artists one after the other! The 2nd announcement will be coming soon!

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Date : May 31 (Sat) + June 1 (Sun) , 2014 - Opening = 16:00 / Performance = 17:00 (Schedule)
Venue : Osaka-jo Hall

Performances :
May 31 (Sat) = Suga Shikao / Naoto Inti Raymi / Daichi Miura and more...
June 01 (Sun) = Ieiri Leo / Ulfuls / Yu Takahashi / Akiko Yano and more...
* Appearances of gorgeous artists one after the other! The 2nd announcement will be coming soon!

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[SPECIAL BAND]
Sahashi Yoshiyuki (G) / Dr.KyOn (Key) / SPAM (Per) / Hideki Matsubara (B) / Kawamura "Kasuke" Tomoyasu (Dr)
Yoshito Tanaka (G) / Miyazato Yota (Sax) / Kumi Sasaki (Cho · Org) / Otaki Yuko (Cho) and others

Fees : 7500 yen for Arena stand seats (All seats reserved / tax included)
* Preschoolers are not allowed to enter the venue
Release : Ticket sales scheduled on April 26 (Sat) at 10:00

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[SPECIAL BAND]
Yoshiyuki Sahashi (G) / Dr.KyOn (Key) / SPAM (Per) / Hideki Matsubara (B) / Noriyasu "Kasuke" Kawamura (Dr)
Yoshito Tanaka (G) / Yota Miyazato (Sax) / Kumi Sasaki (Cho · Org) / Yuko Ohtaki (Cho) and more!

Price: 7500 yen. Reserved Arena and Stand seats (All seats reserved / Tax included)
* Preschool-child is not allowed to enter the venue
Goes on Sale : 10am on April 26 (Sat)

元の翻訳
5/31(Sat) FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC will be make an appearance.

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Will be performing on the stage at FM802 25th ANNIVERSARY 802 GO! SPECIAL LIVE RADIO MAGIC, on May. 31 (Sat).

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It was really a pair of plates that I want so I am really happy to be able bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information such as my address in English. It is arriving without any problems up until now. I am looking forward for it's arrival.

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It was a pair of plates that I really wanted so I am really happy to be able to bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information such as my address in English. I had no problems so far. I am looking forward to its arrival.

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It was really a pair of plates that I want so I am really happy to be able bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information such as my address in English. It is arriving without any problems up until now. I am looking forward for it's arrival.

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It was really a pair of plates that I want so I am really happy to be able bid successfully. There are no issues on listing the shipping information of my address in English. It is arriving without any problems up until now. I am looking forward for it's arrival.

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I am selling more than a million dollars of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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I am selling more than a million dollars worth of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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I am selling more than a million dollars of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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I am selling more than a million dollars worth of Japanese products through Amazon across the world. I am planning to travel 13 hours from Japan to visit London in order to participate in this event. In addition to searching a business partner that would be interested in Japanese products, I will be searching for a business partner that can supply European products. Please kindly consult with me for any Japanese maker products. In addition, please kindly contact me anytime regarding the person in charge that can supply popular products. I am looking forward to meet you next week at the venue.

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Repair costs are high and cars are cheap in Japan so it is better to purchase a new one instead of doing repairs.
There are no hindrances with the running. However, it would be okay to replenish the oil once in a few months when the handle feels heavy. It runs excellently. The repair costs are cheap in Africa so I think it will be alright to do repairs.

It's a bit strange. I cannot understand when you are trying to say. There is no need to confirm the operation despite that this product is new. It was sold cheaper than I have probably thought so that's why you do not want to sell it? I have no choice but to give a bad evaluation if you cannot send the product.

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Repair costs are high and cars are cheap in Japan so it is better to purchase a new one instead of doing repairs.
There are no hindrances with the running. However, you should replenish the oil once in a few months when the handle feels heavy. It runs excellently. The repair costs are cheap in Africa so I think it will be alright to do repairs.

It's a bit strange. I don't understand what you're trying to say. There is no need to confirm the operation because this product is new. It was sold cheaper than you had expected, so you don't want to sell it anymore, do you? I have no choice but to give you a negative evaluation if you cannot ship the product.

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The spelling in the lower design is lacking a "C" in front of the "K"

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The spelling in the lower design is lacking a "C" in front of the "K".

元の翻訳
From unit sales and parts sales, a perfect lineup to find popular rubber crawler and construction machinery parts.

Handled products
Used Excavator
Used compressor
Used welding machine
Used forklifts

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From unit sales and parts sales, a perfect lineup of popular rubber crawler and construction machinery parts.

Handled products
Used Excavator
Used compressor
Used welding machine
Used forklifts