Atsushi Inutsuka (inuatsu) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
1. We will demand the compensation immediately together with a person concerned on damage if you breach employment agreement, or intentionally or unexpectedly let us suffer the damage on our business.

2. The validity of this agreement shall be five years from the date of entering the agreement.

3. An employee shall guarantee the authenticity of various document being submitted upon hiring, and if any difference from those documents will be found out in later date, we will cooperate and discuss actively with your company for any action being taken including the discharge of a person concerned.↵

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1. In the event of the breach of employment contract or any financial/operational damage caused intentionally or negligently, I shall compensate your company without delay for any damage caused, jointly and severally with the employee.

2. The duration of this contract shall be five years from the date of this agreement.

3. I ensure the accuracy and correctness of various documents being submitted by the employee at the time of joining. In the event of detection of any inaccuracy or incorrectness, I shall provide your company with full cooperation and proactive engagement in dialogs about disciplinary action, including dismissal, towards a resolution of the issues.

元の翻訳
How do you do?

This is A, a Japanese seller with annual revenue of JPY 500 million at Amazon US.

Congratulations for your holding the event this time. I bet you are in the midst of the busyness.

In fact, only today have I found out about this event. I really wanted to participate, but I could not make my schedule available for next week.

Nevertheless, I understand this event is going to be a very valuable one for the sellers. Hence I was wondering if there is anyway I could purchase the text, which is going to be distributed to the participants with pay since I am not unable to make it?

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How do you do?

This is A, a Japanese seller with annual revenue of JPY 500 million at Amazon US.

Congratulations for your holding the event this time. I bet you are in the midst of the busyness.

In fact, only today have I found out about this event. I really wanted to participate, but I could not make my schedule available for next week.

Nevertheless, I understand this event is going to be a very valuable one for the sellers. Hence I was wondering if there is anyway I could purchase the text, which is going to be distributed to the participants, with pay since I am unable to make it?

元の翻訳
貴社の名称を教えてください。
どの位の期間、このビジネスに関わっていますか。
ウエブサイトはありますか。
貴社のウエブサイトを初めとして、他のウエブサイトでも販売していますか。もしそうなら、インターネット上での販売経験はどのくらいお持ちですか。
イーベイでの販売を手伝う従業員はいますか。もしそうなら、何人ですか。
貴社のイーベイ販売アカウントに在庫一覧を割り当てていますか。もしそうなら、サイトに載せる在庫一覧をどのように管理していますか。
公的に入手可能な商品も出品していますか。
貴社からのeメールによるご返事を得次第、できるだけ早急に折り返し連絡いたします。よろしくお願いします。

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貴社の名称を教えてください。
どの位の期間、事業を行われていますか。
ウェブサイトはありますか。
貴社のウェブサイトなど他のウェブサイトでも販売されていますか。もしそうでしたら、インターネット上での販売経験はどのくらいお持ちですか。
イーベイでの販売を手伝う従業員はいらっしゃいますか。もしいらっしゃいましたら、何人いらっしゃいますか。
イーベイセラーアカウント用に在庫一覧をお持ちですか。もしそうでしたら、サイトに載せる在庫一覧をどのように管理するつもりですか。
一般に販売している商品も出品していますか。
貴社からのメールを受け取り次第、できるだけ早急に折り返し連絡いたします。よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
I am sorry that in email i sent last time, there was a mistake.
The estimated buying price of the first year is $42000
I want to settle the number of stocking, checking selling movement in Japan.
I am aiming for double stock from this year.↵

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We are sorry that there was a mistake in our last email.
The estimated buying price of the first year is $42,000.
We would like to settle the purchase quantity, monitoring sales trends in Japan.
Our goal is to double the purchase amount in a year.

元の翻訳
Seran Mizorogi ver. AQZ1-76501
Marin Yamamoto ver. AQZ1-76502
Hina Nagai ver. AQZ1-76503
Momoka Kodakari ver. AQZ1-76504
Mariya Suzuki ver. AQZ1-76505

<Notice>
*Your carry-one bags may be went though the security and/or stored the check-in counter for your security.↵
*The event site will be taken place with all possible measures to ensure the management. Please report the security when you find suspicious object s or person.↵

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Seran Mizorogi ver. AQZ1-76501
Marin Yamamoto ver. AQZ1-76502
Hina Nagai ver. AQZ1-76503
Momoka Kodakari ver. AQZ1-76504
Mariya Suzuki ver. AQZ1-76505

<Notice>
*Your baggage have to go though security checks or to be stored in a cloakroom in order to prioritize the safety of attendees, artists and entertainers.↵
*We take all possible measures to ensure the event site is safe. Please report any suspicious objects or activities in the venue to a security guard.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing our product and let us know your contact information.
We are going to send it to you via EMS.
We will then inform you of the tracking number.

Please kindly await for a while to receive your item.
We hope to serve you again.

Kind Regards,

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Thank you for purchasing our product and contacting us.
We are going to dispatch it to you via EMS from a post office tomorrow.
We will then inform you of the tracking number.

Please kindly wait for a while until you receive your item.
We hope to serve you again.

Kind Regards,

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

お問い合わせありがとうございます。
商品は第34週の8月18日に入荷予定ですので、18日以降に発送いたします。発送後には追跡番号での追跡(トラッキング)をお勧めします。

よろしくお願いいたします。

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こんにちは。

お問い合わせありがとうございます。
商品は第34週（8月18日始まりの週）に入荷予定ですので、18日以降に発送いたします。発送後には追跡番号での追跡(トラッキング)をお勧めします。

よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
This way to Asia Progress Official Site↵
【URL】http://www.asia-progress2014.com/

Schedule：2014/8/14（Thursday）
Opens16:00 / begins17:00
Hall：Tokyo - National Yoyogi Stadium
Stage Performers：AAA（Japan）/ Da-iCE（Japan）/ FUTURE BOYZ（Japan） / Lead（Japan）/ROOT FIVE(Sun) / SOLIDEMO（Japan）/TEAM H（Korea）/ U-KISS（Korea）/Wilber Pan（Tiwan）/w-inds.（Japan）

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Check out the official website of Asia Progress.↵
URL: http://www.asia-progress2014.com/

Date: Thursday, August 14, 2014
Doors at 16:00 / Show at 17:00
Venue: Yoyogi National Stadium First Gymnasium, Tokyo
Artist lineup: AAA (Japan) / Da-iCE (Japan) / FUTURE BOYZ (Japan) / Lead (Japan) / ROOT FIVE (Japan) / SOLIDEMO (Japan) / TEAM H (Korea) / U-KISS (Korea) / Wilber Pan (Taiwan) / w-inds. (Japan)

元の翻訳
I have several questions. First I would like to ask whether bluetooth's tests intended for Japanese people is proceeding., or you have already successed in the tests? I have understood that the minimum order number is 100 items for 25000 dollars. I know many ways to sell them in the Japanese market. When would be the time of shipment of items, if I ordered 100 items now? Also I would like to ask you how much it will take to ship them to the port of Osaka with CIF.
I am very pleased to be able to work with you.

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I have several questions. First I would like to ask if testing of the bluetooth devices intended for the Japanese market is on track. Or have the devices already passed the testing? I understood that the minimum order is 100 units for the total price of 25,000 dollars. I know various ways to sell them in the Japanese market. When will you be ready for dispatch to Japan in case I order 100 units now? Also, would you let me know how much it costs to ship them to the Port of Osaka on CIF basis.
I am very pleased to be able to work with you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your business with us.
I contacted FedEx today, but they told me that they have not received an invoice from you.
Please email me the invoice and I will send it to FedEx.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your email.
I contacted FedEx today, but they told me that they have not yet received an invoice from you.
Please email me the invoice and I will send it to FedEx.
I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Except for Amazon, I used to sell at Yahoo Auction (http://auctions.yahoo.co.jp/). Currently, I only sell at Amazon, but I used to sell many products at Yahoo Auction. Although I don't have enough selling experience at Amazon, but I have experience and enthusiasm on polite service for each customer.

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Except for Amazon, I used to sell on Yahoo! Auctions (http://auctions.yahoo.co.jp/). Currently, I sell only on Amazon, but used to sell many products on Yahoo Auctions. Although I don't have enough selling experience on Amazon yet, I have experience of and enthusiasm for valuing every single customer to provide courteous sales.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
This product is from Thailand.
It is not a Japanese product.

Thank you for your message.
Understood. I will inform you of the tracking number right after we will send the product.

Thank you for your message.
As this product is being sent from Japan, if we add a tracking number, our profit will disappear, Thus we did not add a tracking number.
Thank you for your understanding.
Please wait until it arrives.

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Thank you for your message.
This product is from Thailand.
It is not a Japanese product.

Thank you for your message.
Understood. I will inform you of the tracking number right after we dispatch the product.

Thank you for your message.
As this product is being sent from Japan, if we add a tracking number, our profit will disappear. Thus we did not add one.
Thank you for your understanding.
We appreciate your patience to wait for the arrival.

元の翻訳
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オンライン市場は企業のビジネスのやり方を急激に変化させています。iFixitは製品の品質とお客様の使い心地を維持する為に全力を尽くしております。この使い心地の大部分は、弊社の提供する購入体験と顧客サポートと関係しています。

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元の翻訳
The duration of drawing lots: Thu 03/07 - Sun 06/07 From 10:00 to 20:00
※Please note that the drawing lots will finish as soon as all prizes runs out.
When you come to Shibuya, please come to tower record Shibuya!

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Drawing period: Thu 03/07 - Sun 06/07 From 10:00 to 20:00 each day
※Please note that the drawing ends as soon as all prizes have been claimed.
↵
When you come to Shibuya, please drop by Tower Records Shibuya!