hideyuki — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
消毒ウェットティッシュ
抗生物質軟膏のパケット
スティングリリーフワイプ
包帯
スポット包帯
指先の包帯
ナックル包帯
粘着テープ
ガーゼパッド
蝶の閉鎖包帯
ピンセット
指の添え木
安全ピン
かみそりの刃
検査用手袋
冷湿布
耐久性に優れたセミハードケース


ボート、キャンプ、釣りや狩猟のための理想
100ピースキットは、最も一般的に使用される救急コンポーネントの拡張された目録を提供しています
防水プラスチックケースは浮かび、内容物を保護するために、破損を保証しています（ビデオで浮かぶ例を参照）
簡単に識別できるように暗闇で光る

修正後
消毒ウェットティッシュ
抗生物質軟膏のパケット
スティングリリーフワイプ （虫刺され痛み緩和シート）
包帯
スポット包帯
指先の包帯
ナックル包帯
粘着テープ
ガーゼパッド
蝶の閉鎖包帯
ピンセット
指の添え木
安全ピン
かみそりの刃
検査用手袋
冷湿布
耐久性に優れたセミハードケース


ボート、キャンプ、釣りや狩猟のための理想
100ピースキットは、最も一般的に使用される救急コンポーネントの拡張された目録を提供しています
防水プラスチックケースは浮かび、内容物を保護するために、破損を保証しています（ビデオで浮かぶ例を参照）
簡単に識別できるように暗闇で光る

元の翻訳
我々は、そのおいしいPDX Carpetを受ることができませんでした。そして他に何が空港にあるのでしょうか？もちろんX線装置。まあ、これは一つのテーマのバリエーションで、我々が好きなものです。これはウールの靴下です。ル•ティグレやカフェソックスに似ています。ここに品物があります。彼らは単に涼しい天候でのサイクリングのためではなく、彼らはあなたの甘い小さな脳に作ることができるすべてのタイプ冒険に最適です。

修正後
我々は、そのおいしいPDX Carpetを受ることができませんでした。そして他に何が空港にあるのでしょうか？もちろんX線装置。まあ、これは一つのテーマのバリエーションで、我々が好きなものです。これはウールの靴下です。ル•ティグレやカフェソックスに似ています。つまり、彼らは単に涼しい天候でのサイクリングのためではなく、彼らはあなたの甘い小さな脳に作ることができるすべてのタイプ冒険に最適なのです。

元の翻訳
POP Inc. published "event &MICE support company guide 2014-2015" on March 31, 2014.
"The event support company guide" is a guide book collecting up <Exhibition exhibition＞<meeting, society＞<preview, campaign＞<party symposium＞<sports, music, culture event> in a book.
As the company guide which helps companies, it is sorted by 13 types of industry!
A company profile, business contents, the main event results, the information of the main business partner are unified↵

修正後
POP Inc. published "Event & MICE Supporting Company Guide 2014-2015" on March 31, 2014.
"Event Support Company Guide" is a guidebook that summarizes information about companies that support <Trade Fairs and Exhibitions><Meeting, Conferences><Preview Events, Campaigns><Parties, Symposiums><Sports, Music, and Cultural Events> in a single book. ↵

As a company guide which helps you with "events", it is sorted by 13 types of industry!
The book organizes information about company profiles, business contents, records of major events, and major business partners.

元の翻訳
Flow of translation
1. Write your name and " in translation" in the left column of the sentence to be translated.
2. Leave only your name in the left column when the translation was finished
Unify the notation of your name.
Because the fee is paid according to numbers, it may not be able to count correctly.

Others
Because there may be other individual instructions, please check the left memo column by all means.
Please leave comment in the memo column of the right column if you may be interested in the translation point of other people↵

修正後
Flow of translation
1. Write your name and " in translation" in the left column of the sentence to be translated.
2. Leave only your name in the left column when the translation is finished.
Unify the notation of your name:
As the fee is paid according to the number of your translations, it may not be able to count correctly.

Others
Because there may be other individual instructions, please check the left memo column by all means.
If you are interested in leaving a comment for someone else's translation, please do so in the memo column of the right column.

元の翻訳
Pattern of the language
Phonetic method
Proper noun (Japanese origin)
Phonetic representation notation
Proper noun (foreign origin)
The language part of the foreign language is language notation concerned
Proper noun including a part of common noun
Proper noun is phonetic and common noun is figurative noun
Initial letters of both phonetic notation and figurative notation are capital letters
When it is hard to understand by separating a part of the common noun, use figurative of the part of the common noun in addition to all of phonetic representation.
In case that Japanese phonetic representation such as use as a station name and a facility name, supplement phonetic representation + figurative in a parenthesis.

修正後
Pattern of the language
Phonetic method
Proper noun (Japanese origin)
Phonetic representation notation
Proper noun (foreign origin)
The language part of the foreign language is language notation concerned
Proper noun including a part of common noun
Proper noun is phonetic and common noun is figurative noun
Initial letters of both phonetic notation and figurative notation are capital letters
When it is hard to understand by separating a part of the common noun, use figurative of the part of the common noun in addition to all of phonetic representation.
In case that Japanese phonetic representation such as use as a station name and a facility name, supplement phonetic representation + figurative in a parenthesis.

元の翻訳
Common noun originated in Japan
When there is translation in target language and it need to transfer the reading, supplement with phonetic representation + parenthesis.
Figurative representation is not necessary when Japanese phonetic is widely recognized.
When there is no translation in target language, represent phonetic representation + explanation words.

修正後
Common noun originated in Japan
When there is translation in target language and it need to transfer the reading, supplement with phonetic representation and parenthesis.
Figurative representation is not necessary when Japanese phonetic is widely recognized.
When there is no translation in target language, represent phonetic representation and explanation words.

元の翻訳
It was three years when I was interested in beauty in BO.
In the fourth year I wish I could express sexual charms which I could not express so far.

Although I have struggled with dance first in the fourth year,↵
I have showed expression of confidence recently

Because I am asked to be in charge of fashion blog personally, ↵
As a fashion leader in the BO and as the years roll on, with each chance ↵
I'm troubled that the type of dance increases.
It has been a fun to express something by myself recently.
I think I want to do with wild abandon.

修正後
It was three years when I was interested in beauty in BO [?].
In the fourth year I wish I could express sexual charms which I could not express so far [awkward].

Although I have struggled [tense confusion] with dance first in the fourth year [it doesn't make sense], I have showed expression of confidence recently [awkward].

Because I am asked to be in charge of fashion blog personally, as a fashion leader in BO and as the years roll on, with each chance I'm troubled that the type of dance increases [?].
It has been a fun to express something by myself recently [awkward].
I think I want to do with wild abandon.

元の翻訳
I think I could see myself in the past three years.
I wish I could see various types of myself and seven dancers who are longed from the same sex also in fourth year.
I'll try to be a cute adult at 20 years old.

I am told that I have no sexual charms or I cannot dance in sexy.
I could have danced in more sexy than before because I learned a lot of dance as BO.
Although everyone waves their hands aside, I will do my best to be more sexy in the fourth year because I think charming power and degree of sexy increase by doing BO.

修正後
I think I could see myself in the past three years [different from the original].
I wish I could see various types of myself and seven dancers who are longed from the same sex also in fourth year [different from the original].
I'll try to be a cute adult at 20 years old.

I am told that I have no sexual charms or I cannot dance sexy.
I could have danced [tense confusion] in more sexy [ungrammatical] than before because I learned a lot of dance as BO.
Although everyone waves their hands aside [everyone: singular, their: plural], I will do my best to be sexier in the fourth year because I think charming power [?] and degree of sexy [?] increase by doing BO [wrong verb].

元の翻訳
シンプレック・スケトルは伝統的な古い英国の笛吹きやかんメーカの世界をリードするブランドです。

銅製あるいはクロムメッキした銅製で、シンプレック・スケトルは耐久性があり永久に使用できます。また、シンプレック・スケトルは長期間にわたって楽しいサービスを与える家庭の実用的な電化製品であり、キッチンにユニークで魅力的な付加価値を与えてくれます。

生産工程
銅の塊

シンプレックス銅製やかんは、百年以上守っている最高品質で製造されています。

歴史
ツイードの家紋

シンプレック・スケトルは、もともと英国バーミンガムに拠点を置く金属スピニング社であるニューウェイ＆ブルーマー社よって1903年に設立されました。

修正後
シンプレック・スケトルは伝統的な古い英国の笛吹きやかんメーカーとして世界をリードするブランドです。

銅製あるいはクロムメッキした銅製で、シンプレック・スケトルは耐久性があり永久に使用できます。また、シンプレック・スケトルは長期間にわたって楽しいサービスを与える家庭の実用的な電化製品であり、キッチンにユニークで魅力的な付加価値を与えてくれます。

生産工程
銅の塊

シンプレックス銅製やかんは、百年以上守っている最高品質で製造されています。

歴史
ツイードの家紋

シンプレック・スケトルは、もともと英国バーミンガムに拠点を置く金属スピニング社であるニューウェイ＆ブルーマー社よって1903年に設立されました。